Monthly Plan: Picking up a Beautiful Girl with an Index Finger in a Back Alley

B+ There is no doubt that it is a superior work so far. Ordinary people travel through the city. The integration is very clever. Other masters have already made comments and will not go into details. But we all know that instructions are not a good thing. The little index finger man is just a puppet of instructions. This may become the trigger for the conflict between the protagonist and the heroine (it is doubtful whether the heroine really loves the protagonist) And why does the protagonist's soul come to this powerful body? I'm really looking forward to the foreshadowing that the author hides in it. Is the clueless protagonist assimilated into the city out of fear and becomes part of the cycle, or does he embrace the past and create the future? The last command is zone

The writing is very good, the battle scenes, the psychological description of the characters, and the introduction to the city are all very good, and it also describes the psychological reactions and conditions that will occur when an ordinary person comes to the city.

From my current senses Your rating is A- Plastic objects are rare. They borrow the urban world view but write their own stories. This reminds me of Broken Wing Feather. It is a different feeling from a sensory perspective, but it is equally amazing. As for why it is "-", it is because of the update. Before reading, please note that there are a large number of self-created characters in this book, which are mixed with the author's own opinions, and some special names may appear in the book (I will add them if there is a chance) Final evaluation: If you want to read a borrowed, urban world view, but write your own story, and don't want to read those traditional God of War novels, this book is the best choice.

! ? Strong ?! A+!! Your love and thinking about the city are unparalleled! This is such an impressive work, it is like a painting full of painstaking efforts. Each character shows his own color, how gorgeous it is in this gray city! Oh, although this is still an unfinished work, I have already seen your shining self-projection through it. I hope you will not be hurt by the negative comments and continue to bloom this wonderful color by creating your own chapter. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

I've been reading for so long and I forgot to rate it, so here's one (there may be spoilers) This book is the best choice among books for newbies in monthly calculations. First of all, as a novel, the language is neither dry nor complicated, and there will be no chance that it will be difficult to read because of the writing style; secondly, the amount of updates, although the updates are irregular, each chapter is large and full. Secondly, back to the work itself, in terms of characters, the male protagonist accidentally came to the city as a modern young man and still had the conscience of a modern person, but he also transformed rapidly under the stimulation of the city. At the same time, I speculate that the male protagonist should be a type of amnesia after a period of time travel. Therefore, the male protagonist's combat power was basically completely sealed at the beginning, and it was unsealed quickly. If you just like to watch Invincible, watch it carefully. At the same time, in the latest chapter, he will be trained hard after passing the master's trial. The heroine is very cute. She is a victim of the ring finger work and is also the representative of the index finger. She has a faint sense of human-machine. Because of her childhood experience, she was separated from the instructions and could not even live a normal life (breathing and the like). At the same time, her lack of emotions will also lead to her ambivalence. She looks forward to further changes. There are also some other original supporting characters who are also very vivid, so I won't elaborate on them here. What follows may contain plot spoilers In terms of the world view, this world is not the world line of Yueji's original work but the mirror world built by the author himself. Currently, some holes have been dug, including the male protagonist's life experience, the anomalies in Hongyuan and the Spider Nest, the disappearing golden branches, the male protagonist's ability to mimicry (this seems to be ego). Breaking away from the original story line means a greater challenge for the author himself, but at the same time the plot will be more exciting. Facing the master's three questions can be regarded as the climax, and the handling of the work is getting better and better. Emotionally, in my personal opinion, the emotional line is a bit fast, but this is not a big problem. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is very delicious, the female protagonist's subconscious defense and justification, the male protagonist's questioning of the female protagonist's own will, the two people's conflict after the conflict broke out, and the female protagonist's hesitation and contradiction in the face of unknown feelings are also very delicious (when did the female protagonist make the male protagonist kneel down) Then there are other aspects at the end. The author made his own villain images of the male and female protagonists and some of the supporting characters. There are both Q version and normal ones. They are very nice. As for my personal subjective factors, the author responds very positively to the comments, and also discusses the plot and interacts with the comments, which is very cute😋

A+! With smooth writing and hearty battles, it's hard to find anyone who can match it in the entire Yueji community. However, the rating is unexpectedly low. I only hope that the author will be unfazed by favors and humiliations, and let his heart blossom. In time, he will be as high as a star. To: Black Feathered Crow------I, the reader, have not seen a battle as exciting as the battle against the Blood Demon for three full minutes. … (The reading time is short because the account has been changed and the offline reading time is long.)

Love to watch, love to watch. . . ! I still want to watch it! . . To: The Black Feathered Crow, the agent, insists on updating 10 chapters every day, with each chapter not less than 10,000 words, until the novel is completed. . . . .

(Because the previous one seems to have been swallowed, I will post it again) The entry point is particularly good! The descriptions of the index finger and instructions are also very rich (better than a certain book), but you may feel there are some problems with the rhythm later on (maybe each chapter is too long?). All in all, it is a very good novel. The heroine's role in the next few chapters seems to be significantly reduced, and a lot of space is devoted to the main plot. What does the author plan to write next?

Is the author a single female protagonist? I hope it's a single heroine

This Monthly Book fan can be said to be one of the best on Tomato. Although it may have been a bit mediocre at the beginning, I gradually felt that the writing was getting better and better. From the rookie Xiao Zhou who just traveled through time to the solo battle with the ring master, it is clear that Xiao Zhou has become stronger. I hope the author can write better and better in the future! Then I'm actually quite curious, is Xiao Fei still the single heroine now? Or is Xiao Wang also the heroine? After that, does Xiao Fei love Xiao Zhou, an independent personality? Finally, this book is A+! Recommend a look [angry]

A+ The writing is fluent, the writing is very comfortable to read, and the details are well described. The author has a very good grasp of the three golden chapters at the beginning, setting up a complete bluff, which makes people very interested in reading. The subsequent plot does not drag on, which can keep people interested. The only drawback is that the update is too slow. The protagonist's front is a bit shabby, which is a disadvantage in a fast-food tomato environment. Many people just run away when they don't feel comfortable [face covering]

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There are a few novels that make me feel that they are not all related to the main plot. It is actually good to only use the setting of the world view in the early stage and then participate in the main plot in the later stage.

I saw this book when it first came out. At that time, I also declared in the group that this boy would become a great person in the future. After reading it a few months later, it turned out that he was thriving. Children, my vision is not wrong😭

Very good, hey, if you like a good physical and mental pleasure, okay [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]. For most people in the city, and for most articles, it is a relatively solemn atmosphere. Of course, there are some very funny things. These are generally along with the main line. I believe that more than 70% of readers should not be able to read it. After all, he is really boring. It is the same with or without him. So this article is very good. The protagonist is strong and others know that the protagonist is strong. It doesn't feel like he's pretending to be cool to show off to fools. Moreover, the whole article has a lively atmosphere. However, the bad thing is that the sense of growth is not strong [rolls eyes] In addition, the update is too slow, and the protagonist has no obvious general direction, and even the author should not have it. Of course, I am not saying that there is no direction of the world view, I am saying that there is no direction similar to the outstanding type. The protagonist will only be led by the world throughout the whole process, instead of the protagonist leading the world. This can easily make people feel bored and aggrieved, especially after a period of time, there is no feeling at all, but after all, it is good to be able to write and persist in the monthly report book, so four stars.

What a great book, why has no one read it? Not enough to watch at all. Ask the author: 1: When will the strengthening surgery on the prison body be activated? From the moment he time traveled to the time he flew to Augustine, there have been so many life and death battles, and his skills have been continuously improved, but his body has hardly changed. I can't imagine how strong Lao Zhou will be when the enhanced surgery is activated at 100%. 2: What is the specific effect of Qianjing's knife? Three: Will the protagonist lose his index finger?

The writing style may not be the best among Pomodoro articles, but I have to say that the handwriting is very touching ( The author's writing is quite sincere, which is a big plus for me personally. This is love () There is also a lethal amount of ninja jokes (laughs), this one is more radio-friendly. Above, I also wish this book will get better and better [laughs]

I'll come, rate and speak.

It's well written because the protagonist is very arrogant, even though it's not his intention. He still wants to stick to the morals of his previous life in a place where he can be killed at any time.

I haven't read many monthly novels. I think the pace of this one is slow but just right. The interaction between the protagonist and the heroine is also very interesting.

The writing of the first few chapters is a bit average, and the protagonist is crazy and frustrated, which makes it a bit unsightly. It got better after that and gradually got better. I don't recommend giving up on this book just because of the first few chapters, it's really well written.

It's good to watch, the plot is logical, and I have the desire to continue reading. However, there are too few updates, and the author still suffers from procrastination.

The meaning of following instructions [Adoration] [Adoration] beep beep ... Meaning to follow instructions This book is amazing I strongly recommend that those who have played the Moon Chronicles trilogy come and check it out. Beep beep Of course Outsiders don't have to worry According to the instructions, this book does not have much content related to the main plot of the original work. Just think of it as an original book beep beep ... And there is Blood Demon is not a district beep beep

Violent scenes sound pretty cool

Follow the instructions carefully [eat melon]

Agree, it's a very comfortable book

Above all, among the strongest

To, people who read this book review recommend this book

It's very good-looking, but according to the current trend, the protagonist won't really have the same virtues as urban people, right?