[Multiple heroines] [Nami, Robin, the Empress...] [Brainless] [Wano Country Start] [Thunder Fruit? Monosuke will dieBut he will not die easily...
When he woke up, Ian found that he had actually arrived on a desert island... And actually picked up the "Natural Thunder Fruit"? !
I wanted to start my own life of "punching the four pirate emperors, kicking the admiral, and hugging the left and right"; but I didn't expect to be knocked unconscious by the "cute Takai teacher" and brought back to Wano Country? !
Okay…
"Then we have to start conquering the world by taking down Yamato"!
[Before reading the book, you can turn in your brain in exchange for coupons. After finishing the book, you can exchange the coupon for a "Devil Fruit" to travel to the world of One Piece; you can all live a good life like Ian]
Reader comments
Momonosuke can also pull
Running account...
Punctuation is a bit messy
Did the author forget the age of the protagonist? Is it reasonable for a group of seven or eight-year-old children to do so many things? It feels so awkward
It's not bad, but can you give him some punctuation marks for the dialogue? It looks a bit awkward, and the characters have very little dialogue.
Momonosuke can also pull
Running account...
Punctuation is a bit messy
Did the author forget the age of the protagonist? Is it reasonable for a group of seven or eight-year-old children to do so many things? It feels so awkward
It's not bad, but can you give him some punctuation marks for the dialogue? It looks a bit awkward, and the characters have very little dialogue.