Racing Through Life: Beyond the Bend

Well... How to put it, the story is very delicate and beautiful, but the writing style is too unified, and even some parts are repeated, such as saying something sweet, and then he laughed, which is very confusing, and the emotional transition is a bit abrupt, especially the part where Liu Shihao falls in love with the heroine. Although sometimes it does not take that long to like someone, it is still a bit abrupt, and the characters are too monotonous. I know they are like this in TV series, but some of the emotional transitions It's okay to be a little OOC, so it won't be too dramatic and makes people's eyes brighter. Then there is the plot. The plot is good, but it is also a bit repetitive. Don't describe too many plots that have appeared before, such as the scene where the four people give the heroine something. There is really no need to describe it in detail again and again. The above are the problems I have discovered so far. I know I can't change them. I just want to remind you~ (I'm really not complaining, I'm just expressing my own feelings)

The first five-star review was given to myself