Juezuzero: I, the Wine Fox, Really Don't Want to Be a Numerical Monster.

Disadvantages: Slight flow of stories, emotional line too fast, slightly less interaction, slightly OOC character (acceptable considering that it is a novice author) Advantages: There are no big mistakes, there is a concept of foreshadowing, there is a system but it does not steal the spotlight, the golden finger is not too invincible, it feels like slowly upgrading, the article is updated diligently and has enough words. Summary of the first stage of reading: There is nothing too outstanding, but considering that you are a novice author and a free novel on Tomato, the above mistakes are acceptable. Not making big mistakes is the best advantage. It will get three points. If you are diligent in updating and have enough words, you will get one point, for a total of four points.

The writing is very good and the ideas are good, but there is one bad point: progress with Ailian is too fast, and I want to confess my love in less than a month [Thinking], my suggestion is: give more description to the protagonist and Ailian's first meeting, to give Ailian a feeling of love at first sight, the description is still a bit lacking [shy]

The theme of "Drawing Swords + Drinking Foxes" is relatively new, but it may be that the author's skills are not enough, and the integration of the plot is a bit deliberate (for example, the protagonist just wants to find a job in the video store, and the cereal brothers and sisters want to recruit people.) I will make a review after reading it (first give a five-star to encourage the author)

It's good and quite sweet. Of course, I feel that there is something wrong with the combat power setting and it feels weird.

After reading the introduction, I thought it was invincible, but it turns out that invincibility is not completely invincible, which means that it is not invincible at all. Others are fine. Does anyone else know that they are so awesome? Are you happy? Five or six virtual hunter-level people are here.

Personally I feel it's okay. It's just that the portrayal of the protagonist and Elen is not full enough and the emotional line is too hasty. Give me a way to fall in love at first sight and make a lifelong promise if I touch my tail. I have only read about 19 articles, and the author is very grateful [I learned]

The writing is good, I read 1 to 2 chapters every day, and I don't comment too much on the plot. After all, I have never played Zero Zone Zero. But maybe the biggest problem is that the relationship with Elian was confirmed too quickly. Of course, this problem has been mentioned by others, and there are no other flaws. Why is the child born by Xiaobai and Xiaohei like this? [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Objectively speaking, as a new author, the writing is very good, but it is a bit verbose, and there have been relatively few updates recently. I suggest you update more! The emotional lines and daily life of Xiaojiu and Ailian are very interesting! For more information on this, come and sweeten my mouth! ! !

It's okay, but I don't know if it's a harem or not.

I beg you to update I beg you to update I beg you to update I beg you to update I beg you to update I beg you to update I beg you to update I beg you to update I beg you to update I beg you to update I beg you to update

The emotional line is also too fast, it's just like a quick-fire, love-at-first-sight kind of thing. Personally, I think the emotional drama should be slower. It's better to be a drunken fox who is favored by the group first, and then gradually develop feelings, but after all, I have written it down to this point and there is nothing left to do. Overall, it's okay and quite interesting.

As a new author, it's good to be able to write like this, but the emotional line is a bit too straight and too fast, which may not be very good. Come on! (∗ᵒ̶̶̷̀ω˂̶́∗)੭₎₎̊₊♡

Awesome! Even though she is a lolita, she is a wine fox.

Hao Chi! But please note that although the author has said it before, I will mention it again. This book only uses the image of a wine fox, not a wine fox, but it is still a great read [like] and this book is about Lily Kouya! Although I haven't reached that stage yet, it really looks great!

The King of Medicine is kind and compassionate, and the trees grow and grow, and the weeders are united in their minds, and enjoy the same joy! Admire the abundance! Sigh the abundance! Praise the abundance! Abundance should be the first of all things, bestowing the blessing of eternal life to trillions of people in the universe. The gift of abundance should be the only gratitude in the universe!

The article is well written and the writing style is okay, but no one thinks that the male protagonist's change in personality and the love story are progressing too fast? It feels a bit torn from the text on ordinary life. I hope the author can try to pay more attention to it.

It looks so good (twisting) and so exciting (there are a lot of problems with the settings, but just think of it as this is the magically modified version of Zero Zone Zero. After all, the game is constantly being updated, and many of the settings were guessed early on. It's normal to be backstabbed.

Good-looking, love to watch, like to watch [send heart][send heart]

Good book, good book hahaha

Did the emotional line go a little too fast? I got interested in seeing the color.

Yes, but it is recommended that the love line be longer. I feel that I get to know you too quickly. You can first follow the group pet route, and finally choose a single character line. This way it will not appear abrupt and you can write more words.

Fortunately, except that the love line is a bit too fast, as if it was released in advance to make candy, there are no other big problems. Come on!

Haokang Aikang Lekang

It's really good-looking. Can anyone tell me about the scene in the seventy-eighty-eighty-ninety chapters where the protagonist gradually burns his life force and the price of the sword he wields is better in the back?

This is what Jin wants.

Ness! I love watching it so much. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Good-looking, good-looking

Awesome, this is what people live for!

The plot is good, but I personally feel it's a bit OOC.

Woo woo woo, the author hastened to update his teeth. I have already done it three or four times.