I Elbowed the Holy Lord and Turned into a Dragon in Jackie Chan's Adventures

It's very interesting, but you often don't see the main character in one or two chapters, which makes me feel like I'm watching the original work. Generally speaking, just write some things that are not there to suppress the protagonist. If the protagonist is too strong, you can just make the world happy and suppress it.

There are no poisonous points, maybe the previous poisonous points have been modified by the author. But there aren't many exciting moments, the pace is a bit slow, and the protagonist's appearance is a bit weak. Maybe it's for foreshadowing or layout later. However, the protagonist's sense of presence is a bit weak and needs to be strengthened to make it more enjoyable. The overall pacing is okay. It's not bad, but the protagonist's role is slightly less. I hope it will be strengthened in the future.

I remember there was an alien spacecraft in one chapter, and you can explore the universe from this

The author writes very well. , I personally really like The Adventures of Jackie Chan very much. The author incorporated his own ideas. The protagonist wants to replace the Holy Lord. It is very creative. I wonder if other new settings will be added in the future? Introducing a new world can be either one or multiple worlds. Or maybe there's another grown-up Xiaoyu

The author has a very detailed understanding of animation works. Although the protagonist doesn't appear in many scenes, he doesn't do anything, he just exerts his strength in the dark, and the intelligence of all the characters is reproduced. Behavior is realistic. Compared with other fan works, the protagonist frequently appears to show off, but he also prefers the behavior of childish cartoons. Undoubtedly much better.

It's really okay, but one of the poisonous points is why Dumbledore and Merlin agreed to help the protagonist. If the rat charm can control them, there's nothing wrong with it. Otherwise, I'm very confused that the two villains of the protagonist will hardly stab the protagonist directly in the back.

There are still very few fans of The Adventures of Cheng Long, and the writing is pretty good, but it's best to choose some popular worlds to add. I've never heard of this Miracle Girl.

Give it a five-star rating and keep up the good work

A good book not to miss when passing by

A rare and beautiful fan fiction.

Adventures is okay, no big problems. The key is to integrate into this world. After reading five or six chapters, I still don't know which world it is integrated into.

A very good fan fiction.

Can you write something wonderful and cute? There are so many cute little things, they are very cute. I hope you can adopt a bunch of cute little ones if you write wonderfully cute stories. If you write it, you can use the monkey charm to turn them into humans and then get married.

I originally wanted to give it 5 points, but why did you suddenly add Miracle Girl World at the end? Sudden change in painting style

The Adventures of Jackie Chan plus the Miracle Girls book

You can take a look, it's a good fanfic

Not bad, a bit of a novel insight Support the author.

It's interesting. There's nothing poisonous about it so far.

The writing is quite good, at least the logic is smooth and the protagonist's brain is online. The villain is almost the same as in the original work

The writing is great, keep up the good work, I want to see that I don't lack anything [laughing]

The author's sky is falling, the Adventures of Jackie Chan has been updated with Chapter 6