Zero Zone Zero: Will Siren Heejin Dream of Angels?

I read it in 75 minutes. It should be said that the writing is pretty good. Give it 5 stars, you can look forward to the future. There is a lack of writing skills. (Forgive me for speaking in general terms, because I'm too lazy and don't have the ability to find specific passages.) The portrayal of the protagonist is not very good, and his background is a bit like the Riddler. The description of the protagonist's emotions is too monotonous. (I feel) it's often what the protagonist thinks and how Jinni responds, but other people's reactions are mediocre. In my opinion, the protagonist's image is too blunt. On one side is the daily life of the store manager and Chef Qianxia, ​​and on the other side is the heavy life experience. There's nothing wrong with it per se, but it feels a bit fragmented when I read it. What is the main tone of this article? Daily? Revenge? Are you writing daily sweet articles? Or write about the life of a rope maker and plot revenge? If you have to grab it with both hands, how can you make it hard with both hands? There is no clear plot direction, or outline, which should be said to be a common problem in fan fiction. On the one hand, it will lead to excessive force in the description, and on the other hand, some plots will be useless. What is the protagonist's position in the main plot? When are you going to reveal your true identity and for what reason? This is an important plot that has been foreshadowed all along, and it must be written successfully. Finally, I predict a wave of ratings: around 6.6 After the score is released, and maybe 8.2-8.6 After it is stably updated to a certain number of words. In addition, I forgot to go online yesterday. I remembered it in the early morning and still put it off. As a result, it was past 4 o'clock.

The character settings and background descriptions are not bad either (I can't see it anyway), but the updates are slow, and maybe because of this, fewer people have watched it. So far, I haven't seen any poisonous points or anything like that. It's pretty good [laughs]

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good! ! ! !

This is the most beautiful single female protagonist Chinatsu I have ever seen.

For no other reason than because she is the single heroine Chinatsu

This is what I want! [Crying][Crying][Crying] Come on, author [please update]

Well, this book has made my eyes and ears clear.

Ahhhhhhhhh, please update soon

It's already great, come on

I haven't seen any poisonous points so far, but the update is too slow. Give it five stars for support.

Roses don't need to grow tall, lovers will bend down on their own

I haven't seen any bad points yet. It's a good-looking book for me, but there are still too few words. I think the author needs support (most of the comments are provided by me~

Full marks must be full marks, it's really beautiful

It's beautiful. I hope I can keep watching it. My brain is as mushy as apple pie. I'm still thinking about why I read this. I feel like I should be shocked too. I feel that the author's beauty is still too advanced.

Not bad, the plot is quite good. I hope there will be more updates.

It looks good, but the first few chapters may look a bit messy, but it will get better soon. It's just that the author updates too slowly, once a day, or even every two days or three days. I hope the author will take care of himself.