[No cp + draft]
Shen Ci has lived for eighteen years and has never seen anyone more handsome than himself. In order to prove that his sister was wrong in saying "you can't make a career", he went for the draft bonus. When I looked at the auditions, I saw that of the two handsome men, one was okay, and the rest were just average. Very good, he is still the most handsome. Until the judges asked him to show off his talent - the dance lessons he had taken as a child for a year now come in handy.
Reader comments
It's quite funny. Although the protagonist has a strong sense of narcissism, he is not greasy and reveals a touch of humor. . Because he was very self-aware about his face, he participated in the draft and wanted to get bonuses. As a result, he met six contestants who he thought were good-looking and capable at the beginning. He recognized the current situation and decided to work hard. He is very much looking forward to the follow-up development. I hope the author will keep writing!
The writing was okay, it was a bit repetitive. I felt like a diary. There was only one perspective of the protagonist, and there were too few macro descriptions. It seemed that I could feel the transformation of the protagonist, but it was more depressing, as if I had become a member of the competition. It was too tense. This article really looks like a first-person article.
It's beautiful. I'm so pleased with it.
So far, it's okay, but the descriptions in some places are repeated. I suggest it be divided into paragraphs. The writing is still good.
It's quite funny. Although the protagonist has a strong sense of narcissism, he is not greasy and reveals a touch of humor. . Because he was very self-aware about his face, he participated in the draft and wanted to get bonuses. As a result, he met six contestants who he thought were good-looking and capable at the beginning. He recognized the current situation and decided to work hard. He is very much looking forward to the follow-up development. I hope the author will keep writing!
The writing was okay, it was a bit repetitive. I felt like a diary. There was only one perspective of the protagonist, and there were too few macro descriptions. It seemed that I could feel the transformation of the protagonist, but it was more depressing, as if I had become a member of the competition. It was too tense. This article really looks like a first-person article.
It's beautiful. I'm so pleased with it.
So far, it's okay, but the descriptions in some places are repeated. I suggest it be divided into paragraphs. The writing is still good.
Looks good, come on boss!