(The ratings have just come out, they should go up) (Western Fantasy) (Multiple heroines) (Slightly slow-burning)
Lorne's golden finger finally arrived, after he was once again orphaned.
He thought he would spend his life like this until a black dragon took him deep into the dark forest.
The whispers of the demons, the gaze of the elf princess, the temptation of the holy lady, and the visit of the escaped princess.
Lorne finds his life filled with troublesome characters.
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"This is not the same world I imagined, full of swords and magic."
Years later, Lorne said this while surrounded by women.
(The introduction is weak, come in and read a few chapters)
Reader comments
Not bad, the first twenty chapters look very comfortable
The protagonist is relieved, but I am Hongwen
Arranging a fight between the protagonist and the veterans can also satisfy the desire of the bloodthirsty audience. I felt like I heard the song of Guan Yu echoing in my ears. Children, I want to watch a hearty battle.
Regarding the argument part, there may indeed be some issues with the handling. If it doesn't work, skip it and watch it, or treat Lorne as a ruthless man who stays here just for profit.
Or, you can watch me explain a few words.
Lyanna was under house arrest, with limited scope of activities. With Lodvik here, Lyanna's life wouldn't be too bad.
As for Aurelius's attitude, in Lorne's opinion, his parents were doing well. As for himself, it was inhumane to leave a six-year-old child in the Black Forest, but Lorne was a capable time traveler. It may be a little difficult at first, but after the attribute points quickly roll up, the Black Forest is not so dangerous to Lorne, it is just a little lonely.
People will subconsciously ignore the suffering they have suffered. Even after meeting Xila, Lorne's loneliness was almost washed away.
Therefore, his attitude towards Aurelius was indifferent.
As for why he stayed, it could be interests or the remaining family ties that are hard to let go. You can understand it however you want.
Above.
At the end, I would like to thank everyone who commented, liked, and read my book.
The writing is good (＾ω＾)👍🏻, it's beautiful and I love reading it.
Some plots were handled inappropriately.
Did a 6-year-old really hide his disguise magic for 11 years?
Lorne's father has a political marriage and a true love relationship. Is this pure love or a harem? If it was pure love, Lyanna was imprisoned for 11 years before becoming a child? If it's a harem, why would they still pretend to be relatives after being imprisoned for 11 years?
Is Lorne just starting a harem openly? It's obvious that Xiela and Lorne are in love, but people around her are pushing Veronica to kiss each other? Does this nobleman care about polygamy? In Chapter 22, Veronica said that her father had betrayed (Veronica's) mother, which made Lyanna's mother unable to speak out. Does that mean that this aristocratic family believes in monogamy? Is political marriage greater than true love? Isn't it a political marriage of pure love between Lorne and Xila? Then when Lorne's family brings Veronica and Lorne together, who does Sheela count? Doesn't this take the royal family into consideration? As a princess, Xila is always jealous and just wants to cook the rice quickly? I was confused. The relationship between Lorne and Xila in the forest was well described in the early stage. Why did Shia become jealous and kissed one after another after Shia turned into a half-demon? Lorne really doesn't refuse anyone who comes? Don't you have any ideas about love? The character image cannot be established.
Veronica was seriously injured and was held in Lorne's arms. Is Xila still jealous in this situation? Is this what it's like to be a princess? Can't they be gentle and caring in front of the stage, and express their sincere feelings to each other behind the stage?
Veronica said in the article that she was pampered and spoiled, and that she didn't know the world and was unlovable in terms of perception. If she wanted to write about a tsundere, she would only be arrogant, not coquettish enough. She is still a saint. Such a big thing happened to the royal family, but it is not seen that the status of this saint has any effect. A saint who has an iron-clad church and a flowing water?
Full of faintness, good writing, delicate emotions, a slow-hot Western fantasy novel, the male protagonist is semi-invincible [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] [Please update more] [Please update me more]
The score is low [eating melon]
Very well written.
The best, the best, the best
Come on, come on, come on
I like his style
I just hope the book won't be criticized, I want to see the ending, haha
It feels ok, I hope the author doesn't want tj
And with the panel in hand, he is confident that even if he does not receive systematic education, his future achievements will still be limitless. ---Original text
When I see this sentence, I want to support it.
It seems pretty good so far. I hope it can be finished. Don't die suddenly. Keep working hard.
It's good, but sometimes it explains too much. It's the kind of thing that can be seen in Tomato
It's okay, but there's nothing exciting about it
Brothers give 10-star praise. Reading this book is like experiencing the world of mortals. Taoist friends who can finish it will be given a Yinren Taoist Heart [Gift Heart][Gift Heart][Gift Heart]
Not bad, the first twenty chapters look very comfortable The protagonist is relieved, but I am Hongwen Arranging a fight between the protagonist and the veterans can also satisfy the desire of the bloodthirsty audience. I felt like I heard the song of Guan Yu echoing in my ears. Children, I want to watch a hearty battle.
Regarding the argument part, there may indeed be some issues with the handling. If it doesn't work, skip it and watch it, or treat Lorne as a ruthless man who stays here just for profit. Or, you can watch me explain a few words. Lyanna was under house arrest, with limited scope of activities. With Lodvik here, Lyanna's life wouldn't be too bad. As for Aurelius's attitude, in Lorne's opinion, his parents were doing well. As for himself, it was inhumane to leave a six-year-old child in the Black Forest, but Lorne was a capable time traveler. It may be a little difficult at first, but after the attribute points quickly roll up, the Black Forest is not so dangerous to Lorne, it is just a little lonely. People will subconsciously ignore the suffering they have suffered. Even after meeting Xila, Lorne's loneliness was almost washed away. Therefore, his attitude towards Aurelius was indifferent. As for why he stayed, it could be interests or the remaining family ties that are hard to let go. You can understand it however you want. Above. At the end, I would like to thank everyone who commented, liked, and read my book.
The writing is good (＾ω＾)👍🏻, it's beautiful and I love reading it. Some plots were handled inappropriately. Did a 6-year-old really hide his disguise magic for 11 years? Lorne's father has a political marriage and a true love relationship. Is this pure love or a harem? If it was pure love, Lyanna was imprisoned for 11 years before becoming a child? If it's a harem, why would they still pretend to be relatives after being imprisoned for 11 years? Is Lorne just starting a harem openly? It's obvious that Xiela and Lorne are in love, but people around her are pushing Veronica to kiss each other? Does this nobleman care about polygamy? In Chapter 22, Veronica said that her father had betrayed (Veronica's) mother, which made Lyanna's mother unable to speak out. Does that mean that this aristocratic family believes in monogamy? Is political marriage greater than true love? Isn't it a political marriage of pure love between Lorne and Xila? Then when Lorne's family brings Veronica and Lorne together, who does Sheela count? Doesn't this take the royal family into consideration? As a princess, Xila is always jealous and just wants to cook the rice quickly? I was confused. The relationship between Lorne and Xila in the forest was well described in the early stage. Why did Shia become jealous and kissed one after another after Shia turned into a half-demon? Lorne really doesn't refuse anyone who comes? Don't you have any ideas about love? The character image cannot be established. Veronica was seriously injured and was held in Lorne's arms. Is Xila still jealous in this situation? Is this what it's like to be a princess? Can't they be gentle and caring in front of the stage, and express their sincere feelings to each other behind the stage? Veronica said in the article that she was pampered and spoiled, and that she didn't know the world and was unlovable in terms of perception. If she wanted to write about a tsundere, she would only be arrogant, not coquettish enough. She is still a saint. Such a big thing happened to the royal family, but it is not seen that the status of this saint has any effect. A saint who has an iron-clad church and a flowing water?
Full of faintness, good writing, delicate emotions, a slow-hot Western fantasy novel, the male protagonist is semi-invincible [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] [Please update more] [Please update me more] The score is low [eating melon]
Very well written.
The best, the best, the best
Come on, come on, come on
I like his style
I just hope the book won't be criticized, I want to see the ending, haha
It feels ok, I hope the author doesn't want tj
And with the panel in hand, he is confident that even if he does not receive systematic education, his future achievements will still be limitless. ---Original text When I see this sentence, I want to support it.
It seems pretty good so far. I hope it can be finished. Don't die suddenly. Keep working hard.
It's good, but sometimes it explains too much. It's the kind of thing that can be seen in Tomato
It's okay, but there's nothing exciting about it
Brothers give 10-star praise. Reading this book is like experiencing the world of mortals. Taoist friends who can finish it will be given a Yinren Taoist Heart [Gift Heart][Gift Heart][Gift Heart]