A Tribute to the Girl Transformed in Another World

This is a remake of a novel I read a few years ago. The author's writing style is much more mature. It's just that the first dozen or so chapters were polished by AI, but the rest is much more normal. The world view is grand and interesting, and the latest plot is now on track. I look forward to the author's updates.

The more I read, the more it feels like the secret origin of an old book from a few years ago. When I went to blb, I saw that it was indeed a remake of an old book. Marry a hundred or single? [Smile] Author, do you really still have the determination to finish writing that story? Can you stop being a eunuch?

The world view is grand, the characters' emotions are described in detail, and the plot is detailed. Although there are some flaws, it does not hinder the viewing. Those who give low scores and say that their preferences are not suitable for them should be ignored. They are all scum.

It's well written, but I don't know why there are so few chapter reviews. I personally accept changing marriages, but so far, in all other changing marriage stories, without exception, I cannot accept the emotional development of the male and female protagonists. How could a man who was originally a man fall for a rich, handsome guy in just a few clicks? At present, it seems that there is no such problem with the creation of the male protagonist in this book. I hope that the emotional line will be developed slowly. I'll give it a 4 points for the time being, with a wait-and-see attitude.

Coordinate 28, the reading experience is not bad. But it's almost 30 chapters (there are still a lot of words in each chapter) and I haven't entered the content in the introduction at all. The import is a bit slow. It is not necessary to describe everything in detail. For example, the content from the non-protagonist's perspective can be shortened. For example, rehearsals can be interspersed with chapters about the implementation of the plan.

Please give me 5 stars for encouragement. I really can't stand the character's emotional line. It's too fast and too abrupt, which makes it feel a bit inexplicable. I can also say that the cohesion of the story is okay, and overall the rest is pretty good. I have my own ideas. I can see the AI ​​training, but it is important to have your own ideas. The emotional aspect really needs to be strengthened. If it is strengthened, it is expected to score above 8.4.

In Tomato, slow advancement is the original sin. The 700,000-word protagonist has no substantial progress in his abilities, or has not been well mastered. Under the curtain, he has only just touched the surface of the "black market", and the major dark organizations are in a fog. But I personally don't care, it's free anyway [laughter]

I feel that the writing is very good. I only read Chapter 7, but I feel that it is not inferior to those great authors at all. I hope the author can finish this book. Although I rarely write reviews, I hope the author will remember that you always have a little book friend to accompany you silently.

Nice! The protagonist and supporting characters are thinking online, the plot is compact and novel, and the author's writing is also very good. The only shortcoming is that the update is a bit slow, but I hope it can be updated with this quality and it will be acceptable if it keeps updating.

It's a very good story. The first few dozen pictures are just like food, but the later ones get better and better and are already like fairy grass. Emotional description is very good