A Tribute to Another World That Transforms a Girl

This is a remake of a novel I read a few years ago. The author's writing style is much more mature. It's just that the first dozen or so chapters were polished by AI, but the rest is much more normal. The world view is grand and interesting, and the latest plot is now on track. I look forward to the author's updates.

The more I read, the more it feels like the secret origin of an old book from a few years ago. When I went to blb, I saw that it was indeed a remake of an old book. Marry a hundred or single? [Smile] Author, do you really still have the determination to finish writing that story? Can you stop being a eunuch?

The world view is grand, the characters' emotions are described in detail, and the plot is detailed. Although there are some flaws, it does not hinder the viewing. Those who give low scores and say that their preferences are not suitable for them should be ignored. They are all scum.

Coordinate 28, the reading experience is not bad. But it's almost 30 chapters (there are still a lot of words in each chapter) and I haven't entered the content in the introduction at all. The import is a bit slow. It is not necessary to describe everything in detail. For example, the content from the non-protagonist's perspective can be shortened. For example, rehearsals can be interspersed with chapters about the implementation of the plan.

It's well written, but I don't know why there are so few chapter reviews. I personally accept changing marriages, but so far, in all other changing marriage stories, without exception, I cannot accept the emotional development of the male and female protagonists. How could a man who was originally a man fall for a rich, handsome guy in just a few clicks? At present, it seems that there is no such problem with the creation of the male protagonist in this book. I hope that the emotional line will be developed slowly. I'll give it a 4 points for the time being, with a wait-and-see attitude.

Please give me 5 stars for encouragement. I really can't stand the character's emotional line. It's too fast and too abrupt, which makes it feel a bit inexplicable. I can also say that the cohesion of the story is okay, and overall the rest is pretty good. I have my own ideas. I can see the AI ​​training, but it is important to have your own ideas. The emotional aspect really needs to be strengthened. If it is strengthened, it is expected to score above 8.4.

In Tomato, slow advancement is the original sin. The 700,000-word protagonist has no substantial progress in his abilities, or has not been well mastered. Under the curtain, he has only just touched the surface of the "black market", and the major dark organizations are in a fog. But I personally don't care, it's free anyway [laughter]

I feel that the writing is very good. I only read Chapter 7, but I feel that it is not inferior to those great authors at all. I hope the author can finish this book. Although I rarely write reviews, I hope the author will remember that you always have a little book friend to accompany you silently.

Nice! The protagonist and supporting characters are thinking online, the plot is compact and novel, and the author's writing is also very good. The only shortcoming is that the update is a bit slow, but I hope it can be updated with this quality and it will be acceptable if it keeps updating.

It's a very good story. The first few dozen pictures are just like food, but the later ones get better and better and are already like fairy grass. Emotional description is very good

Marriage change + urban horror + alien world, the subject matter alone is perfect for me, I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs

I just found out that I have read the author's Qi Ling, and I said that I feel so comfortable no matter what. The writing is very good, the plot is smooth, and the protagonist's IQ is online. I think it is a rare and good work in the transformation literature.

There is nothing wrong with it except that the update is too slow. The rating is too low. This is the best marriage change story of the year that I have read. I hope the author will work harder. I am looking forward to the follow-up plot.

So pretty, yeah, yeah, oh, oh, oh, oh

It's very good. Each chapter is a big chapter with more than 6,000 words. It's very enjoyable to read [Adoration]

The writing style is quite good and the story is very detailed. It is obvious that it was not written by a newcomer. The biggest drawback is that the number of words is too small, which is not enough to read!

It's not bad, there's nothing wrong with the plot, and the worldview is okay.

A good book delayed by its title and copywriting

What about the male protagonist? Isn't it a change of marriage?

Not bad, five stars for encouragement

I asked why it looked so similar to the setting of Secret Origins, but it turned out to be a remake by an author.

It's such a blessing to have books like this these days

It's pretty good among the transformation stories I've read.

It's okay, the plot is still readable, I've read 20 chapters so far and there's nothing bad about it, but I haven't seen the movie I want to see yet, maybe it's a bit slow. Take another look.

A very novel Western fantasy, and also very delicate. The kind with a slower pace. It's a pity that updates are slow.

It seems like a novel I have read before. The protagonist is more related to God, has similar abilities, and has a different world. Let's read it again.

This one is much better than the previous one, and the remake is very good.

The plot is good, but some details still have some logical loopholes and are incoherent. The overall reading experience is very good.

It's so beautiful, and the plot has a reasonable setting.

Very good, the author's writing style is very delicate