The Lazy Bird Doesn't Want to Deal with Magical Girls

Hiss, it's okay, it looks good, but there are some flaws. Now there is a high probability that either the author knows how to change it and just changes the plot while there are not many words, or he continues to write, and after the writing is longer and popular, he will summarize the changes based on the general feedback from readers. It's okay not to change it. After all, this part is just my own opinion. I don't know what other readers think. The look and feel of the system is not very good. The rotating carousel and Riddler tasks, as well as the current restrictions on the task site, make the protagonist arrive at the scene and then adapt to the situation, which is really a bit... Where there is a dream beast, the monster doesn't even know where the enhancement comes from, which is a bit rubbish. The monster that can feel the time reversal cannot feel where the enhancement comes from, and the pure mechanism has no physical combat power, which is a bit... There is a slight mismatch between skills and body. It can't be the mastermind behind the grand narrative and the pressure is on the plot. The current style of this book is actually quite good. Many books like to use a more relaxed style and subject matter to deceive people into it and then expand the world view. The deadly rhythm stacks up and the atmosphere becomes more and more depressing and heavy to the point where it is difficult to read. The protagonist's psychology is too simple. The protagonist didn't even see the task completed, so he opened his eyes thinking it was over, and then was killed. This mission felt too heavy, so I mentioned it at the end. The fact that the magical girl can kill the pig is a sign of the protagonist's enhancement. In fact, I feel that the subject matter is good, but the viewing experience is not very comfortable, but I hope the author will not be like it, must keep writing, and must persevere. The books in my bookshelf are almost over a hundred, so you must persevere. I am very optimistic about your potential. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]

It was okay. I didn't like the part where Zhongli faked his death. The main character seemed to be raising a child. It felt weird, and the characters were not very rich. When I saw the part about raising a fox, I had the desire to read on, but then I started raising a child. The subject matter is quite novel. I'll give it 4 stars [Chigua]

It looks good, I like to eat it, and it suits my taste. However, the system is a bit confusing. I hope I can kill the system if I have the opportunity in the future. () Another disadvantage is that I feel that the author will not update it at any time.

What does it mean to have a dream beast? The system is even more difficult to collapse, but it's good for novices. Keep up the good work.

It's a good book, but it may not be suitable for some people. It's probably about daily life, or it may not be. You'd better read it half way through before commenting. As for my evaluation, it is very attractive to me. The pace of the book is really good for me. I have no problem with the emotional expression of the book (maybe I don't see it), but it is definitely better than the average male novels with emotional lines. It's really good.

Very good book, I am so excited for Tomato's book recommendation [Like]

The overall look and feel is quite good, and I like the protagonist's character better. The people around the protagonist have their own characteristics that make people remember. Except for teasing me when fighting wits, the rest is fine. I feel that the author can occasionally write some plots of wits as extras to exercise himself and allow readers to have some fun (I feel that it is quite interesting when the protagonist commits a minor illness and is complained about by the system and other people. Some embarrassing words are treated as jokes [Thinking])

Maybe it's my personal reasons, but I still hope that fewer people will die. Although the battle of wits in Chapter 16 later says that those are not real humans, but when I think about it, if they are real humans, then only the protagonist survives and the others die. Even if the ugliness of human nature is vividly displayed, there is no evil in dying. . .

It's very interesting, the gentle protagonist is someone who could be my mother! But I can't accept high-quality people appearing out of nowhere.

It looks good in leisurely everyday life, I was born to do this [laughs]

Ah. Ah, ah! What an interesting book. I probably won't forget you.

You must keep writing, even though you can see that you are a newbie. But I believe you have great potential. Come on, as long as you write, I will read it.

It's a very comfortable villain novel, at least in my opinion, but it always feels like something is missing. Can you write something twisted later? I'll do anything if I can

I personally find it interesting

It turns out that I am also a landmine 🤡

It's almost like true love

Come on, big brother/sister who writes novels I feel like I write well on a daily basis

I like the book very much, and the protagonist matches my xp. The pace is not slow. Hope it doesn't cut.