I Planned to Take the Grad School Exam, but Then a Charmander Showed Up

1. The protagonist accepts time travel too quickly. He seems to be a local, not a time traveler. He easily accepts the fact that he has changed from a postgraduate entrance examination to a freshman, and there is no psychological fluctuation. Especially the protagonist obviously comes from a happy family background, but he has never considered what he was like before. 2. The description of the characters is too easy. The introduction of the characters in the article is only about their relationship with the protagonist, without any supplement. This leads to a very twisty plot, especially during the attack where the protagonist desperately tries to save Wang Junyi. What is the relationship between Wang Junyi and the protagonist? You mentioned earlier that Wang Junyi has only good friends with the protagonist, so why would the protagonist choose Wang Junyi regardless of his equally good friends. Even if you add later that the two are green plums, it will not be a good impression for readers. Why? Because this setting is too unreal, the plot of her getting along with the protagonist is not as good as the relationship between her roommate and the protagonist. The fact that she is a childhood sweetheart only exists among high school classmates (not even necessarily a childhood sweetheart). 3. Charmander related. First of all, the reason why I didn't train Charmander at the beginning was that I was too tired, but there is a question, where is the tiredness? In the training process of the protagonist and Charmander, you didn't reflect where the trainer would be tired? And the inexplicable Cold War. You give up on yourself as a trainer, and then cold-blooded Pokémon, right? 4. The protagonist has power, but the power is just as fake. When training Charmander, you didn't even consider asking for help from your family. You said that the protagonist wanted to prove himself. Okay, so why didn't you ask for help when you were warned before the training? Knowing that you were being targeted by the villain, you didn't make any preparations or ask for help. And the villain only has a chance when he encounters such a brainless protagonist. Why did we attack during the winter vacation training camp? Because there were few people. But normal people will definitely seek help after being targeted, but is it difficult for a family like the protagonist to find a security guard? Is it difficult to find a ghost-type trainer and let his Pokémon lurk in the shadows for a long time as a second insurance?

I read dozens of chapters in one go! This book is really interesting! The writing is also delicate, smooth and immersive, the graphics are also full of sense, and the plot is very novel. It filled me with memories of watching Pokémon when I was a child, which is good.

College life is very real, and the relationship between people and Pokémon is also well written. It's just that I felt a little too insecure. The protagonist failed, was targeted by the villain organization, and didn't know any information.

The author really went to college, it's so real. The logic is rigorous, the text is fluent, the supporting characters are also wonderful, and the group portraits, everyone has their own story. Now that I see him, I feel like Jiang Zhou, he looks very charming.

Just one request, don't attack Jiangzhou too much, if you do, please change the review!

Good guy, Capital Normal University, this name can't be an alumnus! Support one hand!

The main mission is quite clear, and there is a thread all the way through. I want to keep reading as I look at it!

Who knows, Mashado, Mashado, Mashado!

Will you form a sunny team in the future? This little fire dragon has the potential to squirt.

There was actually senior Go inside, and he was in tears!