Passerby in Love? Does Not Exist

The writing is okay and I can read it, but the problem is that from the perspective of the protagonist, it seems to be a fun story, but it is actually very frustrating. The protagonist is too passive in the first half, and the protagonist is very ambiguous with other people in a few days. Although I know there are many acting parts, for the sake of popularity, there are some parts that made me stand out, such as the scene where I cried while hugging Zhou after watching the drama, and taking private photos and sending them to Zhou. Then when the actor came, and then the last female guest came, the reactions of the others and the protagonist were as if they had been snatched away. There was also cyberbullying. The protagonist hid in the room for several days and could not come out. She cried and complained to the actor. It was really uncomfortable for me. It was a very baffling part. It's not that I can't accept the abuse of the protagonist and let the protagonist grow up, but the first part was very strange. The second half was unbearable. Maybe it was about growth later, but for the protagonist, it was a bit unbearable. Overall, this article has no big problem. You can watch [what] without a brain

To be honest, it's pretty good to watch (leaving aside my quirks), I just think that rejection is a charm skill, it can be tactful or direct, and I see that there is really a kind of non-active, non-confrontational fish farming behavior in the back. I understand that I want Shura Field, and I understand that I want to show that the protagonist is attractive, but charm can be expressed in many ways, and it does not necessarily have to be this situation where everyone is not clear with everyone. Even Otome's novel has a single line, this is really a pot of stew! Heartthrob does not mean being infatuated by everyone, it is a kind of attraction! I can't feel the ability to make people want to get close to each other, whether it's family, friends or lovers. And it's really shameless to expose other people's scars in front of everyone (even with the camera)! I think people with a little bit of emotional intelligence can't do it without hatred. And the author's behavior towards the princess (whose name is a bit hard to remember) is really amazing. What does it mean "Although I didn't give him a hand, a hug, or a kiss for the first time, I hope that I can... Give it to this boy in the future." (I forgot a little) He was jealous and blocked the protagonist's mouth for a kiss. What a cute little girl, why did she write it like this. . ? What else does it mean to watch the excitement and get into your arms? Even if it's a romantic drama, it's too much. . . It can only be said that excellence does not cover up flaws. . . . (Personal opinion, you say you are right, the comment area is used to discuss evaluations, and I have no malicious intent to give low scores, I am just sharing my own views)

Explanation and lightning protection: Because the number of readers is gradually increasing, although I am very happy, many issues and details that I feel are not good after reflection have also been seen by more people. Some of the plots in the early stage seemed rather abrupt, and the turns seemed blunt. I had thought about these myself, but I didn't elaborate on a better narrative method, so I'd like to apologize to everyone. The character background of the protagonist Yi Hao is actually very emotional and affectionate. However, due to insufficient preparation and description, it could not be conveyed to all readers. The background stories and characters of several guests were not completely determined until after the sixty chapters. There are a lot of foreshadowings that I failed to write out so that readers can have the feeling of being in a drama. This is a mistake that I should not make as an author. It's embarrassing to have to add another paragraph to the review to explain the characters' personalities and logic to you. I just don't want people to make a hasty judgment about what kind of person they are who does this out of vanity and partiality. It is also very sad that this book has so many regrets from the beginning that cannot be revised. Because I couldn't really cruelly abuse the characters, I couldn't make the readers who like them too heartbroken, which resulted in several plots (cyber violence, new female guests) being unsatisfactory, too much length being cut, and serious drama. This is my cowardice as a creator. All the characters feel more or less like falling in love with the protagonist at first sight. The protagonist does the same to them. I don't think falling in love at first sight and then falling in love because of lust is a vulgar process. Love at first sight is a window opened by fate. I have been keeping my body like jade till today just to meet my destined person. This is very romantic, and there is nothing wrong with it. Although it is unrealistic, the novel is not realistic in the first place. It is indeed just the product of a dream, which is why it is so desirable. Many things that should have been written at the beginning (such as the reasons why people fall in love, the reasons why they can keep falling in love, superficial and deep character hints, family background, etc.) Were put at the back due to my lack of experience and mistakes. This is something I discovered belatedly, and I am sorry that I am unable to change it. I like good-looking faces, so I let everyone in the book have them. This is my writing characteristic, and I will continue this habit in every book in the future. As for the follow-up plot, if it weren't for one-sided criticism, I wouldn't have made major changes. The following is the demining: all protagonists. Everyone is clean. There are no real bad guys, there are just a few with obviously bad mouths, some actions that are more casual, open-minded, and may appear vulgar depending on the level of acceptance, and they are all very lustful, but they are all good people in essence, and they really love the protagonist. (Readers who are not into exaggerated jokes must make careful choices, as they sometimes behave really badly) The protagonist's amorous nature will become more and more obvious in the later stage, because like me, he can't let go of everyone, but he will not really (emphasis added, really) hurt other people, because everyone is strong, tolerant enough, and unwilling to admit defeat. I can't think of anything else right now. If you have any questions, just comment and I'll reply as soon as I see it. There's no need to insist on it if the taste is really different. My original intention is to bring a little entertainment and happiness to everyone, it's not unpleasant.

It's well written, and the protagonist is very charming. But for me, I find it quite frustrating. The protagonist has been quite passive in the early stage. Although this passivity may be part of the charm of the protagonist, but at the end of the first part, the Internet exploded, and I really couldn't watch it anymore. I know it was the author's shaping, but I couldn't accept the protagonist being abused. I felt so distressed. I really couldn't watch it anymore. For me, it was really frustrating. Of course I knew that the author's writing was actually quite good, and the protagonist was also very charming. It was precisely because of his charm that I liked him very much. He was tortured and bullied online. I didn't dare to read the few pictures. Even though the length was very short, I jumped directly. After jumping, I found that I couldn't read the rest of the story harmoniously. Moreover, the author created a female supporting character whose position is somewhat similar to that of the protagonist. Even just a little bit, it made me a little uncomfortable because I personally am a firm protagonist. Maybe I just like cool and refreshing novels, so I can't accept the frustrations of the protagonist (don't criticize my personal preference [love], in fact, I can accept the small setbacks of the protagonist's growth, but because I didn't read further, I personally can't understand the author's intention of shaping it this way), and I don't understand why the author wants to add frustrations to the protagonist. This is my problem. I saw the author saying that she was distressed and made deletions, which affected the plot, but even after the author made the deletions, I still feel distressed. But it is undeniable that the author's writing is really good and the protagonist is really charming.

It's so good, so good, so good, baby Yi Hao is so cute, I almost cried when I saw the end of the first part, I feel so sorry for the baby, even though the author said it was just a small twist, I still want to cry, it's really good to watch, I felt so short after watching it in one go, everyone cried so much [crying], everyone really likes it, the baby is like a succubus [Please update] [Please update] It's so beautiful, so beautiful

I really like the character of the protagonist in the early stage, and he is really someone I will like. However, the end of the first season and the beginning of the second season made me feel a little uncomfortable. But I really like this character creation and will continue to read it. Finally, I hope that the author will become famous all the way and more and more people will like this book (only personal opinion, no reference value, if you want to read it, you can try it, it is still very good). Don't scold me, glass heart.

I really like my wife's light writing style [shy] The barrage humor is just right! Very fun! The interaction between Yi Hao and Yan Junming is delicious! Of course, getting along with Zhou Mo is also delicious! [Lick screen]

The protagonist Yi Hao is like a succubus. I like it very much. Everyone in the protagonist group has an independent story. Everyone has their own ideas. I really love it! I hope the author writes more. Love to watch.

The reasons why I gave it five stars are: 1. The characters are very vivid and vivid. 2 All the articles are very interesting. 3 Will be updated very soon [send heart][send heart][send heart] Big [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] Keep up the good work

I really can't stand it anymore, I'm going to die laughing. . [Sinister smile]

All I can tell you is that it looks great! ! ! ! ! ! Be careful with this guy named Yi Hao! ! ! So succubus! ! ! The succubus is here! ! !

Author, you must be from God, how can you be so beautiful, so beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !