He traveled through time and became a substitute for the team, and he had to take the blame for the whole team as soon as he came on the field.
Teammates watched indifferently, and the audience ridiculed the screen: Is this trash worthy of appearing on the stage?
Lu Feng sneered, turned and left the team.
The system was activated, and he picked up an abandoned beast girl in an abandoned factory.
[Ting Yue, SSS level potential, ancient bloodline waiting to be awakened]
Since then, the alliance structure has been completely rewritten.
Perfect positioning to avoid fatal attacks, extreme demonic power to counterattack the ace,
Those who had laughed at him were all pushed to the ground and slapped in the face.
The former captain regretted: "Come back and I'll give you double your salary!"
Lu Feng hugged Beast Girl and said calmly:
"Sorry, you don't deserve it."
At the top of the arena, he hugged the lazy beast mother and whispered:
"The fun has just begun."
[Competitive cool article | Development of a beast mother | Substitute counterattack | Crush and slap in the face]
Reader comments
It's well written in terms of literature and art.
There is a big lack of combat descriptions. They are all suppressed, and then the audience questions them. Then the protagonist discovers the weakness, directs the counterattack, and then kills it in one blow. It is very short, with few descriptions of actions and more psychological activities. The total number of words has a lot of foreshadowing, what is tense, what is impossible to defeat, what is the real XX level, and then it is finished in about half a chapter.
The battle plot is well written, but why are there repetitions in the emotional dialogue? Repeated words will really affect the coherence of the plot, and will also give it a faint sense of human-machine. I hope the author will change this habit in the future. Good luck, author.
It's quite interesting, but there are a few things that make it look a little bit off.
One is that the male protagonist basically doesn't express anything when others talk trash.
One is to have the operation and often let the pony body explore, forcefully take a wave of damage, stack blood and rage, and then start to show off.
I'll take a look at the others
The plot is okay, and I look forward to the follow-up development. The author is obviously still a newbie, and his writing skills are still lacking in terms of describing battles, shaping characters, and exaggerating emotions. There is still a lot of room for improvement. I hope the author will write better and better in the future and improve himself. I still like this type of subject matter. I would like to give you a good review to encourage the author. Come on and write well [laughing]
The characterization and emotions are a little off
The author's combat writing style is slightly inferior, with both development and foreshadowing. It is a novel worth reading, and I look forward to the author's follow-up.
Why is there a hint of an old friend? . It's very similar to Ji Niang's style [laughing][laughing] I miss the Durian King a little bit
Author, do you want the protagonist to form an attack team?
I even suspect that the next one is either a powerful beast girl, or a beast girl who can use Guan Dao.
Not considered. Defensive Beast Girl, Ranged Beast Girl and Healing Beast Girl
Defensive beast girl, earth attribute, large weapon and shield, characteristic of absorbing rebound
Long range beast girl, attribute ice, weapon bow or crossbow, bird beast girl
The healing beast girl has water or wood attributes. In addition to healing, it can also increase bond connections [Thinking][Thinking]
Is this novel an alien version of Pokemon? The beast mother beat the protagonist so drunk that he escaped and then won. Originally, he thought it was a fusion of human and beast mother.
It's okay, the content is okay, I hope there will be some super expansions in the future
It's okay, you can take a look [note]
5 Stars first, it's very comfortable to watch, but I don't know if it will be a single heroine or multiple heroines. I hope there will be multiple heroines [laughter]
The creation of Suzuki Sentai is not very pleasing, so I won't go into the description of the numerical values. The description of the amount of money is also quite abstract [laughs], but I like Ma Niang, so I give it five stars.
A very heartwarming light novel with themes of battle, love and empathy. The improvement in combat power is also very impressive. If you don't hate the Japanese narrative tone, you can watch it.
I hope the author will write more
Very nice battle text
A good novel.
If you look good, why don't you get married?
It's very beautiful, why is there no one?
Good looking, come on, good looking, come on
I would like to ask if there are no pictures of beast girls? If you can't post a picture, I hope you can post it in the comment area.
The author's writing style is very good. I hope I can write a masterpiece with a million words. Come on, author, don't give up halfway.
Okay, okay, but the protagonist has a little bit of a beast girl
I hope I can continue to update, come on
The author should update it as soon as possible. Does anyone know of novels of the same type? I would like to read it.
It's okay, but there's a lot of AI, so forget it and support it. . .
The story is exciting and the content is compact. It is a masterpiece worth reading.
So in the end, did Tingyue find her companion weapon, or did the system give her a new companion weapon, or did Tingyue have no companion weapon in the end?
It's well written in terms of literature and art. There is a big lack of combat descriptions. They are all suppressed, and then the audience questions them. Then the protagonist discovers the weakness, directs the counterattack, and then kills it in one blow. It is very short, with few descriptions of actions and more psychological activities. The total number of words has a lot of foreshadowing, what is tense, what is impossible to defeat, what is the real XX level, and then it is finished in about half a chapter.
The battle plot is well written, but why are there repetitions in the emotional dialogue? Repeated words will really affect the coherence of the plot, and will also give it a faint sense of human-machine. I hope the author will change this habit in the future. Good luck, author.
It's quite interesting, but there are a few things that make it look a little bit off. One is that the male protagonist basically doesn't express anything when others talk trash. One is to have the operation and often let the pony body explore, forcefully take a wave of damage, stack blood and rage, and then start to show off. I'll take a look at the others
The plot is okay, and I look forward to the follow-up development. The author is obviously still a newbie, and his writing skills are still lacking in terms of describing battles, shaping characters, and exaggerating emotions. There is still a lot of room for improvement. I hope the author will write better and better in the future and improve himself. I still like this type of subject matter. I would like to give you a good review to encourage the author. Come on and write well [laughing]
The characterization and emotions are a little off
The author's combat writing style is slightly inferior, with both development and foreshadowing. It is a novel worth reading, and I look forward to the author's follow-up.
Why is there a hint of an old friend? . It's very similar to Ji Niang's style [laughing][laughing] I miss the Durian King a little bit
Author, do you want the protagonist to form an attack team? I even suspect that the next one is either a powerful beast girl, or a beast girl who can use Guan Dao. Not considered. Defensive Beast Girl, Ranged Beast Girl and Healing Beast Girl Defensive beast girl, earth attribute, large weapon and shield, characteristic of absorbing rebound Long range beast girl, attribute ice, weapon bow or crossbow, bird beast girl The healing beast girl has water or wood attributes. In addition to healing, it can also increase bond connections [Thinking][Thinking]
Is this novel an alien version of Pokemon? The beast mother beat the protagonist so drunk that he escaped and then won. Originally, he thought it was a fusion of human and beast mother.
It's okay, the content is okay, I hope there will be some super expansions in the future
It's okay, you can take a look [note]
5 Stars first, it's very comfortable to watch, but I don't know if it will be a single heroine or multiple heroines. I hope there will be multiple heroines [laughter]
The creation of Suzuki Sentai is not very pleasing, so I won't go into the description of the numerical values. The description of the amount of money is also quite abstract [laughs], but I like Ma Niang, so I give it five stars.
A very heartwarming light novel with themes of battle, love and empathy. The improvement in combat power is also very impressive. If you don't hate the Japanese narrative tone, you can watch it.
I hope the author will write more
Very nice battle text
A good novel.
If you look good, why don't you get married?
It's very beautiful, why is there no one?
Good looking, come on, good looking, come on
I would like to ask if there are no pictures of beast girls? If you can't post a picture, I hope you can post it in the comment area.
The author's writing style is very good. I hope I can write a masterpiece with a million words. Come on, author, don't give up halfway.
Okay, okay, but the protagonist has a little bit of a beast girl
I hope I can continue to update, come on
The author should update it as soon as possible. Does anyone know of novels of the same type? I would like to read it.
It's okay, but there's a lot of AI, so forget it and support it. . .
The story is exciting and the content is compact. It is a masterpiece worth reading.
So in the end, did Tingyue find her companion weapon, or did the system give her a new companion weapon, or did Tingyue have no companion weapon in the end?