He transmigrates into the reserve player on a team, only to be made to take the blame for the whole squad as soon as he steps onto the field.
His teammates look on coldly, while the screen fills with viewers’ jeers: “A loser like you thinks you deserve to play?”
Lu Feng gives a cold laugh and walks away from the team.
His System activates, and in an abandoned factory he finds an abandoned beast girl.
[Ting Yue, SSS-grade potential, ancient bloodline awaiting awakening]
From then on, the league’s balance of power is utterly rewritten.
Perfect footwork dodges lethal attacks. Extreme demonic power turns the tables on an ace.
Everyone who once mocked him gets their comeuppance.
His former captain is beside himself with regret. “Come back. I’ll double your salary!”
With an arm around the beast girl, Lu Feng replies coolly:
“Sorry. You don’t deserve me.”
At the top of the arena, he holds his languid beast girl and says softly:
“The real show is just getting started.”
[Competitive power fantasy | Beast girl development | Reserve player’s comeback | Overwhelming face-slapping]
The writing is good in terms of literature and art. There is a big lack of description of battles. They are all suppressed, and then the audience questions. Then the protagonist discovers the weakness, directs the counterattack, and then kills it in one blow. It is very short, with few described actions and many psychological activities. The total number of words has a lot of foreshadowing, what is tense, what is impossible to defeat, what is the real XX level, and then it is finished in about half a chapter.
The battle plot is well written, but why are there repetitions in the emotional dialogue? Repeated words will really affect the coherence of the plot, and will also give it a faint sense of human-machine. I hope the author will change this habit in the future. Good luck, author.
It's quite interesting, but there are a few things that make the impression a bit off. One is that the male protagonist basically doesn't express anything when others talk trash. The other is that there are operations and often let the pony body explore, forcefully take a wave of damage, stack blood and anger, and then start to show off. I will take a look at the others.
The plot is okay, and I look forward to the follow-up development. The author is obviously still a newbie, and his writing skills are still lacking in terms of describing battles, shaping characters, and exaggerating emotions. There is still a lot of room for improvement. I hope the author will write better and better in the future and improve himself. I still like this type of subject matter. I would like to give you a good review to encourage the author. Come on and write well 🤭
Why is there a hint of an old friend? . It's very similar to Ji Niang's style 🤭🤭 I miss the Durian King a little bit
The characterization and emotions are a little off
The author's combat writing style is slightly inferior, with both development and foreshadowing. It is a novel worth reading, and I look forward to the author's follow-up.
Author, do you want the protagonist to form an attack team? I suspect that the next one will be either a powerful beast girl or a beast girl who can use Guan Dao. I won't consider it. Defensive Beast Girl, long-range Beast Girl and healing Beast Girl. Defensive Beast Girl, attribute earth, weapon large shield, characteristic absorption and rebound. Long-range Beast Girl, attribute ice, weapon bow or crossbow, bird Beast Girl. Healing Beast Girl, attribute water or wood. In addition to healing, the ability can also increase bond connection🤔🤔
Is this novel an alien version of Pokemon? The beast mother beat the protagonist so drunk that he escaped and then won. Originally, he thought it was a fusion of human and beast mother.
It's okay, the content is okay, I hope there will be some super expansions in the future