There Is Another Side to My Holy Cathedral

The more I looked at it, the more familiar it became. When I saw the donkey pulling the corpse, I finally realized that this is "Gravekeeper". Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you. This is my favorite game in itself. I hope you can write it well.

The plot and dialogue are pretty good so far It's boring to open a new map later on, and the heroine's addition is unexpected, and I have an inexplicable liking for it (the reason why I ran away was because the love line was inexplicable + I was a bit bored after the nun appeared, not because of the single heroine/harem)

Nice! [Blowing kiss] I hope there will be no cp, or single cp [I'm about to cry] and I won't have a harem. It's too weird to have a harem with this kind of taste...

What a great idea, it uses AI polishing to give it a plasticky feel, which makes it read like being "caught firmly by a bean bag and held firmly in place".

The five-star review of the new article encourages me. The writing style is very good. The dozens of chapters without explaining what happened to the protagonist's golden finger will not make the readers impatient. What is rare is that the characters in the novel are not violent, and the judge in the trial hall is not so extreme that he loses control of his behavior and emotions. At present, the protagonist has not shown any desire for strength, power, women, money, etc. He is steady and steady, not aggressive, which is very different from most of the protagonists in the novel who are greedy and are dominated by desire, eager to eat and become fat in one bite.

I like slow-paced movies, but I don't like the protagonist acting like a superhero who goes around getting into trouble with people and looking aggrieved. This protagonist has a good image. Come on, author.

The writing is quite good, but there should be no female protagonist. If there is, it would be better to have one. I feel that writing about the harem in this subject is a bit overwhelming.

The framework is clear and the narrative is solid, but there is a feeling of being dull. Maybe it's because the protagonist has no core driver? I can't say it, but overall it's a good book, but it requires a certain amount of patience.

Personally, I feel that this is a pretty good novel. The content is not a refreshing novel in the traditional sense, but it has a different kind of soothing feeling. The writing style tends to be delicate. It looks very comfortable, and the pace is moderate, not too fast, not too slow.

Very nice and looks very comfortable But the author has a bad memory and always forgets something. I said before that I would check my breath next time, but the next time I came, I just drank. There was an incentive for reporting earlier, but it was gone when the protagonist was speaking.

It was too boring before the zombie workers were released. The game didn't have a novice tutorial, and there were too many unlocks.

The content of the book is good, and the theme is quite novel. However, when the author writes in capital letters, he could make some distinctions in some dialogues, such as adding punctuation marks. Every time I always regard the dialogues as narration, which makes my mind a little confused [smiles]

After reading more than fifty chapters, it seems to be very good so far. The description process is very good. The important rhythm and rhythm make me feel very comfortable. There is no rush. It is very natural. The profile of Gerry and the surrounding characters is very, very good. But with a score of 6.6, I don't know what's going on. Could it be that it collapsed at the back? I don't know. I'll review it after watching it later. You don't need to care about the ratings for the time being. You can take a look first. Well, there are indeed some problems with the writing of Another World. Some of the subsequent plots are a bit uncomfortable, so I'll give it a try again.

It looks great, keep it up and look forward to the follow-up development.

The writing style is like that of a college student, which is quite good. It's interesting, I plan to watch it for a while.

The book is quite good, and the world view is okay, but there are some minor flaws, and there are no double quotation marks in some places. It's not too powerful, but it's quite refreshing. The two worlds occasionally travel back and forth. I don't know what the connection is. Are there other worlds? I looked a little confused. But overall, the book is still very good to read, highly recommended [sending my heart]

Not bad. It seems that the writing is smooth and comfortable. There is no literary problem. It's all about plot.

Mark, relatively novel, complete plot logic, excellent writing style

It feels good, the writing is very warm, and the interaction between the characters is also very cute⚈₃⚈

Very novel creative ideas! Different mythical novels

Brothers have released a new book, please rate it, thank you for your support! I will also accept your opinions and work hard to improve the novel.

The book is very interesting, the more you read it the more interesting it becomes

I like this book very much. Because I have played the steam game "Gravekeeper"

It has potential, and the setting is quite unique. But the polishing is indeed a bit AI, and many dialogues are not in double quotes.

The writing is good, and the story development is pretty good, but there are some minor flaws. The character dialogue lacks "" in many places, but the flaws don't hide the good points, it's pretty good. In the first 20 chapters, I thought I had found a treasure. The narrative rhythm was perfect and the writing style was very comfortable. After reading almost 100 chapters, I realized that the daily life is very warm and comfortable to read. But the battle also has this bland feeling, it's too boring. High-level battles are as dull as water and can't be burned at all.

Nice. The subject matter is novel, there is no mentally retarded plot that makes people angry, and the characters are interesting. It's just that sometimes Ai's punctuation errors look a bit uncomfortable.

It's pretty good. It's suitable for listening to unconventional themes while working.

Very interesting, I hope the author writes more.

Really good and worth recommending! ! A very appetizing book. Dear author, please don't interrupt or eunuch! It's not easy to find a book you like, please make sure you finish it successfully! ! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

It's readable, and it's more eye-catching than many novels.