A Girl Band and a Worthless Guy with Nothing to Do with Them?

The front part is very good, so good that it can easily get full marks. That kind of communication and emotional collision between people is very delicious. I started to get scared later on because I was afraid that there was Lu Mingfei in the eyes of the protagonist. I am really tormented and frightened by those outrageous young people and anti-human beings in Tomato.

Okay, it's neither AI nor history, the plot is okay and somewhat interesting, please support it. Hmm, how should I put it? It's a bit interesting at the beginning, but the classic protagonist is in the back, and then the protagonist can't speak, and the main line is vague. I feel that the author probably didn't think about what to write, so it seems a bit boring.

Ahem, here is your favorite novel. This book is actually not that interesting, and the plot is often very bland. This is a book I started writing without any preconceptions, just with a few ideas at the beginning, so the writing was very jerky in many places, and the plot was also weak, but I still stumbled and wrote it down. Judging from the data, this book is undoubtedly a hit novel that no one has read. I actually don't have much hope for writing it, but I will try my best to finish it. After all, it is impossible to say that there is no emotion after persisting for so long... "I want to write a destination that I long for but cannot have." This is what I had in mind when I impulsively wrote the first few chapters of this book. Love, so I am really happy to be able to write until now, to be able to write down all the things I long for and expect based on this mood. I am really happy to say... Thank you to everyone who reads this book. Every time I read your paragraphs and comments, I feel as if I am being watched... Hey, why does it feel like I am writing a closing speech? Forget it, you will work hard to write it down, but it may take a long time to say 💕

The current style is okay. In fact, what attracts me the most in the first few chapters is that mmk and the others came to the protagonist's house. When they saw the rope, I thought of a small breaking point. The more friends know the protagonist, the more they can find that the protagonist has some thoughts of hurting himself. If I give a score, I can give it a 4.3. My current personal evaluation is like this

It's very interesting, but the main plot is pushed a little too fast, so it's a bit stuck and I don't know what to write, so I write the main plot slowly. It can also be seen later that the author wants to slow down the main plot, so he lets the protagonist contact the past, causing the protagonist to become aphasic, thereby slowing down the progress of the main plot. Overall, it's a good novel

What are [ordinary] and [natural]? 👋I have a ruler in my hand📏 But I don't know the measurement at all😮‍💨 Breathing rises and falls with uneasiness😰 👐I was helpless and could only stand there🧍 😳Clumsy and ineffective😿 🏃I always run away from pain🤕 📒Wandering between real notebooks to soothe yourself☺️ Ah why is it so difficult to live in this world😫 ⤴️However, however⤵️ All this, everything is me 😉 Hesitating😕 It's me who's sobbing😢 Hold everything😄, all joys and sorrows😭 in your arms🤗 Let's take a little sleep 😴 😣Fly away the pain and pain🪽 In order not to let sadness take away everything from me I will stand on my side🧍‍♀️ 🙈On this road with no end in sight🔚 💤Even if you take a short break🕐 👉There will be no one to blame🤬

It's really good-looking, but it's just missing a little bit. I hope there will be more in the future.

The overall pacing and writing are good. A small problem is that the dialogue between characters sometimes feels like a jump. It should be omitted to match those who have watched the anime, but it seems a bit strange. Also, the writing style is sometimes a bit depressing. In the current environment of Tomato, it's no wonder that so few readers are reading it. If you don't mind this aspect, it's still worth a look.

Oh my gosh, although it's a bit difficult to match the brainwaves, I still think it's quite interesting. It's like a black hole of social Shura field. How can the protagonist be so saintly? The only flaw is that it's a little slower. Although there is no main line, the emotional collision between people is also very delicious😋Hehe, hurry up and serve the next dishes. The last time I saw this type of novel, it was a date with a fan. Come on, the author🙌🙌🙌

It's rare to find a book without traces of AI. The plot and settings are very good, but the pace is a bit fast.