Zero Zone Begins with a Mysterious and Humorous Man

The subject matter is quite novel, but the writing style is a bit too immature, and the protagonist's name is mentioned too much. It's like reading from a third perspective, and it's impossible to bring it in. I hope the author writes better and better, and I give him four stars for encouragement.

I think it's pretty good. I've read other Jutsu Zone movies before, but I just didn't like them. Most of them took the initiative to find Suzu and the others. This novel doesn't have that, and the descriptions are all right. I quite like reading them. Can the author get an M7 skin for the male protagonist?

The writing is quite good, but the sentence breaks are a bit strange, but the impression is okay [eating melon]

Nice summary. Lots of laughs, light-hearted writing, suitable for casual reading I'm not bragging. Everyone who reads this book has a majestic talent, admired by thousands of people, unparalleled, a jade tree facing the wind, both internal and external, talented, noble sentiments, super invincible, proficient, reaching the peak, flying sand and stone, miraculous craftsmanship, vibrating. Deaf and enlightened, the candle illuminates the world, sees thousands of miles clearly, touches the rain and dew, and is covered with flowers in all directions. The eagle watches the wolf, the dragon walks and the tiger steps. He is heroic and majestic, has a high house and a collar, is benevolent and moral, is romantic and selfless, looks like Pan An, is more talented than Song Yu, and a pear tree weighs the sea. Tang, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have a righteous spirit, you have a breeze on your sleeves, you have good virtue, you have a pure heart, you have a beautiful mountain scenery, you have good luck, you have a lot of virtue, you have immeasurable merit, you have good gold and beautiful jade, you have bright virtues, you have a good mind, you have a foolish heart, you have a lot of things. , Yuan Ta Li Lan, lofty ideals and benevolent people, white cranes in the clouds, prime of life, romantic figures, dragons and phoenix chicks, unparalleled, unparalleled heroes, out of the ordinary, a branch in Guilin, a man with cranes, one of the best, unparalleled in the world, named on the gold list, Kunshan jade

The writing is very good and can be read with patience. It's a very new subject. But the author can write about Delusional Angel. After all, the protagonist runs a cake shop and has the ability to master music. Very suitable for writing.

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The writing is okay, but the shortcoming is that there are few words in some places.

It can be very interesting, but if there is a female protagonist, who will the author choose?

It's a very nice book, but it has some accounting problems occasionally, but not many.

It's okay. I listened to it. My senses are not very good and weird.

Generally speaking, it's okay. The biggest problem is that the sentence fragmentation and personal perspective are more serious in the first few dozen chapters. It's much better in the later chapters and I can see that it's improving. As long as you get through the first few dozen chapters, you can still read it. It's good to give five stars to support the story.

I hope there will be more, but it's not enough to watch. I recommend Red Wolf's Eclipse Golden Rose and Dragon Twin's more handsome protagonists to fight more. I'll watch it as soon as there is an update.

The writing style is relatively lively. The score is probably between 6.5 And 7.5, But the subject matter is novel, so it's okay.

It's pretty, pretty, and there are a few jokes [laughing]

Did you see any of the previous readers? Can you tell me, is there a female protagonist? I've read almost half of it now, and I feel I'm leaning more towards the genre of novels without female protagonists and bosses. Although it's not bad, it's just that it's easy to get bored.

It's very good, but the number of words is too small now, so I won't make any comments. But this daily writing is okay, so I can only say to keep working hard. If the writing is not good, just make more references. After all, you can have fun and retain readers.

The author's writing is pretty good. It's not AI. The author will correct any mistakes he makes. This rating is a bit low. However, the author is a bit slow in updating. What is the author reading? As for you, go and update it quickly. ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )

It looks okay, but the increase in the protagonist's combat power is a bit too abrupt. At the beginning, it was a high-level NPC, but now he can suddenly compete with the terrifying upright fox. Is this a eunuch? It is difficult to embed the world view without gold-finger brainwashing. In a place like New Eridu, a person can be traced from birth to death. The protagonist and the operator have always been incompatible with each other, like a sudden collapse of a stone. If it is not handled well in the early stage, it will be more difficult to write later.

Update quickly, quickly, quickly, quickly

I'm creating humor... Panic, about panic

Not bad, keep up the hard work, it looks very cool

Waiting for the big show, waiting for the big show, are there too many female protagonists? For fanfics, it would be better to have a female protagonist.

Hope it doesn't end badly

Beautiful, so beautiful!

Must come on! The author is great

Very beautiful and well written

Very nice! Come on

It's a good book [Thinking]

It's quite interesting to write

A small pull is not a pull, as long as you can carry it, it's good.