Tomb Robbers: the Crazy Criticizing Blind Man's Retina Has Become a Sperm

The development of the story is very interesting, and I also like the characters of the heroine and the black man. The description of the scene made me have a sense of the picture in my mind, and the emotions also progressed layer by layer. The writing is very beautiful. However, some areas still feel like they need to be improved. The participation of the three brothers in the article is too low. There is a kind of black master who brings three NPCs. Secondly, the feeling of separation between life and death was so much that it almost made me numb and a little tired. Overall it's pretty good, keep it up!

What an interesting setting, it's a blast to watch! The progress is also very fast, and there is no delay at all. I originally watched it while lying down, but halfway through I got so excited that I sat up and started watching [adoration][adoration][adoration]

Find the author from my brother's book. After reading so many fictitious fanfics, this one is the best (most appealing to me). The plot is compact and does not follow the flow of the original work. It is full of emotions, the characters are tense, and the descriptions are also very accurate. Update soon, author! ! ! (Although I know it will be faster, I still have to hurry [laughing]) Me! Quilt! Author! Praise! Got it! I'm successful [laughing evilly]

You have to be a good fan fiction author. I have seen someone who turned into the little brother's ancient black gold sword, someone who turned into a forbidden woman, some in the apocalypse, and some in the plant field. Here, a bug got into the eyes of Master Hei [Eat Melon]

Super beautiful, different story line, very interesting, the blind man is also crazy, [please ask for more updates][please ask for more updates]

I really like it!

Very good [blowing kiss], the characters are three-dimensional and full

So pretty. Some places are sadistic, and some places are sweet.

The content is very interesting, and the subject matter is also my favorite. I think it's very interesting.

It's really, really beautiful. I hope the author will continue to make more updates. Come on [smile][smile][smile][already planted][already planted]

Not bad, very good

It feels so crazy to write, but it's really beautiful.

I like it so much 😍, Jue Juezi, I am so inspired after reading this [Send my heart][Send my heart]

Nice! Particularly like

Novel angle and interesting story content

So pretty! I feel sorry for the blind man and Tongtong. I hope that the bad guys who want their lives will disappear quickly. Our little lovers should always be happy and never separate.

It's very novel, the pace is fast, and it doesn't drag at all. The action descriptions are quite detailed, but the number of words is too few, so I need to keep it up.