People Are in Comprehensive Comics, but They Can't Adapt

It's okay, but it feels like it's suffocating but not suffocating [Thinking] 😄I feel like the writing is still a bit confusing.

I still want to see a big scene [laughter], for example, let the boss monster go to the protagonist's school and kill all the people in Wenshui. Wouldn't it be gone because it was a stalker setting at the beginning [laughter], it would just be someone who can directly solve the problem [laughter] [laughter] [laughter]

It feels like watching anime. Although the pace is quite slow, I feel quite comfortable. I have been watching too much fast-paced movies recently, so it would be nice to slow down a bit.

The author is very interesting. He writes very carefully and will comment and discuss the plot with fans. The writing is really good. The first-rate ones in Tomato are much better than most of the casual writing.

I can only give 4 stars. The extra star is due to the author's hard work. Just a reminder to those who come after me, if you come here for the manga, just watch it directly I have been pursuing the arbitrariness of Moxuluo for eternity. After reading the beginning and mastering the power of Moxuluo, you can jump directly to Chapter 40 and you will soon enter the main plot. I have only read about 60 chapters so far, and the author said at the end of the chapter that after reading quite a few, I can see a partial sense of separation between the author and the readers. The author has complained more than once that the opinions of some readers are completely different from what he wants to write. He said that his book is not a good article, but some readers only want to read a good article. But has the author ever thought that the title and content introduction of his book are in a naked cool style? Of course, the author may not think so, but readers who see this book will first think that it is a comprehensive comic in the style of Shuangwen. It's not a fun article to read, especially the campus section. I feel very aggrieved, so I will naturally express my opinion. This is an inevitable problem in the Internet literary circle, and no one can avoid it. The author obviously invested too much emotion in this opinion. There is no need to invest so much. Just look at the data. If the data is high, continue writing according to this idea. If the data is low, change the idea and write in a different direction. Authors should clarify their writing goals Judging from the title, the focus of this book should be Moxuluo's arbitrary decision for eternity, rather than a romance comic. One more thing to add, the protagonist has a very twisted personality, and can even be called a god. He can keep up with his brain circuits, which is very enjoyable to watch. If you can't keep up, it's torture. This is also normal. Authors screen readers, and readers screen authors. It is impossible for the author to write what all readers want to see It is impossible for readers to ask the author to write all the plots they want to see. If you really can't stand it, you can let yourself go and let the author go.

I can only say that the writing is good, and it looks good even if I leave my brain behind. The previous performances are okay, but I don't know why I feel so awkward here when I see a real person. I feel that the protagonist is very weak, but the protagonist needs to have mechanics and values, but it just feels very weak and then falters, and I don't know what to say here. But come on, stay strong

Fine. Although the protagonist has been in a state of lack of mana in the early stage, the author said that it would be good to get the Dragon Talisman, and the early stage is mainly for daily life, so I don't care about the author's combat power here. I hope that the protagonist will not be overwhelmed when fighting with others. The protagonist grows up gradually, and so does his mentality. In the early stage, I pursued power at all costs, and then relied on my personal charm to conquer others. Later, I was forced to be a righteous partner by Shizukai (this is a curse, right?) (Laughing) A bit of a strong man, Kougua, look at my charged punch, Kouya, and the evil Yukinoshita Kouya. I hope the author can add Warhammer, Sun and Moon, and JoJo to allow the protagonist to pass through with the help of rats. It would be great if Honkai Honkai Iron could be added. I want Aili, Aponya, Ruan Mei, please^_^

It's not bad. I really like Hiratsuka Shizuka, but I don't know why, but I always feel like she's unhappy, squirming, and grinding. Let's talk about upgrading and fighting, but now I haven't upgraded and I haven't fought yet. Let's talk about daily love. It's too bland and unimpressive. Moreover, the protagonist can directly lead people to run away, and then use shadow magic to directly become an unsolved case. However, the summary is still too little updated.

If you have revenge, take revenge. If someone bullies you, even if you don't kill someone, you can at least give me a lesson like lying in bed for three months, and you will be reborn. Don't be like a child, and don't be a coward like a Japanese male protagonist who has to wait for the opponent to take action before taking action. If you don't cut the root, the spring breeze will come again.

Lao Pa... Is it still dead? [Crying], but the scrap manuscript posted at the end of the last book is still too curious (I almost thought I entered the wrong software) [Admiration]

I think the worst thing that should happen here is that the protagonist writes a novel and acts as a copycat, but the real owner comes to visit him. He is regarded as a pervert by Anami Anami and Kazuhiko Onmizu, and is regarded as a pervert by everyone else in the book. Has this matter been resolved later? Can this be resolved?

There are too many daily routines. In order to write about daily routines, I even suppress my fighting ability. Other than that, it's okay. There's nothing wrong with it.

I like it very much, and I also like the author's interaction in the novel. It's the first time I've seen an author who updates so diligently, but maybe out of curiosity, I want the protagonist to accept Tomoko Kuroki [laughter]

Some passers-by on Lao Da's profile don't know if there is a role for Xia Laofei. Then I want to give you a little personal opinion. I haven't seen the spell battle, but I think the spell you mentioned is formed by negative energy. So can the villain use Basara from Onmyoji of the Twin Stars? Basara is filth, and filth is also caused by human negative emotions. Of course, when I wrote this review, I'm about to finish the game. I don't know what will happen next. After all, I've only read less than 100 chapters. I just want to ask Lao Da what do you think if it is okay to write it like this? The above is what I want to say. I have nothing to complain about, I think it looks good so far. Come on [attention][attention][attention]

The writing is quite interesting, but there is no need to introduce too many worlds in a comprehensive comic. There are too many cameos and most of the characters have little mainline scenes. It doesn't mean much. Let's slowly fill in the holes. There are still too few chapters. The theme is pretty good and not too popular. There could be more battle scenes. It's okay to watch the protagonist grow up slowly.

"Secondly, I can name a hundred unique advantages about her. I love every part of her from the top of her head to the tip of her toes. I like Hiratsuka Shizuka who is energetic every day, reliable and handsome, and I like Hiratsuka Shizu who has a cold appearance and a gentle heart. I like her. I like Hiratsuka Shizuka who is very masculine and neat in doing things. I like Hiratsuka Shizuka who is as reassuring as a big sister. I like Hiratsuka Shizuka who is very mature and full of aura. I like Hiratsuka Shizuka who can't extricate herself from cute things and has a soft heart. I like charming and charming Hiratsuka Shizuka. I like Shizuka Hiratsuka who is true and responsible. I like Shizuka Hiratsuka who tastes delicious food and is outspoken and cute. I like Shizuka Hiratsuka who is extremely considerate. I like Shizuka Hiratsuka who is keen on taking care of students and is serious to the point of being stubborn. I like Shizuka Hiratsuka who has neat black hair and charming temperament. I like Shizuka Yuinaga. I like Shizuka Hiratsuka who never gives up and has a strong and gentle spirit. I like Shizuka Hiratsuka who always makes people feel dependent and wants to be protected by her. I like Shizuka Hiratsuka who is full of love and cares about students. I like Shizuka Hiratsuka who is keen on worrying about everyone, gentle and reliable. I like Shizuka Hiratsuka who is gentle and caring. Shizuka Hiratsuka, who has sharp eyes, likes Shizuka Hiratsuka who dresses mature and charming, Shizuka Hiratsuka, who is always heroic and a bit cool; Shizuka Hiratsuka, who looks extra intellectual and big sister when she wears glasses, and Shizuka Hiratsuka, who is talented and can handle problems with ease Shizuka, I like Shizuka Hiratsuka, who is gentle and strong when she feels more uncomfortable, I like Shizuka Hiratsuka, the elder sister of the literature department who loves reading and exudes gentleness. I like Shizuka Hiratsuka, who is extremely sexy and charming even though she is just a teacher. I like Shizuka Hiratsuka, who is tolerant and gentle towards everyone. I like the gentle Shizuka Hiratsuka. I like my elder sister Hiratsuka Shizuka who listens patiently to all my worries and is gentle and tolerant. I like Shizuka Hiratsuka who has beautiful eyes like obsidian. I like Shizuka Hiratsuka who has neat short hair and full of aura. I like Shizuka Hiratsuka who is full of warmth in everything. I like the gentle and responsible Hiratsuka Shizuka-senpai, I like the efficiency-oriented and decisive Hiratsuka Shizuka, I like the generous and informal Hiratsuka Shizuka, I like the Hiratsuka Shizuka who always faces the sun and brings his own light, and I like the Hiratsuka Shizuka who makes my heart beat from head to toe, inside and out." You are invincible

Ninety-nine percent of it is a rare thing. After eating a lot of shit, I finally got corn kernels.

I have read Chapter 53 so far, and apart from the character of the protagonist, there is nothing wrong with it. I will review it after I see the latest chapter.

The author's writing style is above average, the combat power is well controlled, and the memes are well integrated, but there are some minor bugs (the article is repeated, and the emotional line is advanced due to external influences) [Originally I wanted to give it four and a half stars but it didn't work]

If my brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother bothering readers. It seems that the readers are being sentimental. My brother is weak and he just needs to rest more. It is the readers who are urging him so much. Injuring his body also makes people feel sorry for him. It is a pity that he pities his brother. Whether he is injured or not, what does it have to do with the readers? Readers are eager for my brother to update 10 chapters a day, but I am different from readers. My brother can send the manuscript and outline to others, and let others help him check the quality and find typos. [Shy] Damn, the book review was sloppy. Some people said that Lao Da was a girl, while others said that Lao Da was from Nanliang. I don't know which one to believe.

The author lets the protagonist grow up from a little bit. Although many people slander the author, I think his writing is very beautiful. Don't care too much about other people's eyes, and update quickly [Shy] Just don't care if others scold you. But I want to see more fun fighting. Can there be more fighting? [Laughs]

Tell me about the process of reading this book. I saw that this book had just been opened. My mother was actually dying at that time. My mother was talking nonsense every day. One day when she was sober, she told us that it was too painful and she wanted to give up. At that time, we said that we would survive until the age of fifteen, and we would not take albumin after the age of fifteen (if we didn't take it, it would basically last a few weeks). At that time, I just read this book and Next Door Wan Xingxuan every day, which was one of the few times when I could laugh. I stayed with her for three months. I went to the hospital at eight in the morning and came home at eight in the evening. Laowan was updated every day at twelve o'clock. I could read this book at noon after I was busy. It was also a psychological comfort (although a large section of the advice posted by the author when she was scolded was swallowed by tomatoes), but I didn't expect that she would be hit hard later when there was hope for improvement. I can completely understand what Laolu thinks about Jing. They are indeed family members and comfort each other. Frankly confessing to my family members who have always cared about me is actually a matter of course in my eyes. Because she is family, no matter what happens to you, she is your family and will always love you.

It's very interesting, but the author is under a lot of mental pressure right now. I don't know why I feel so world-weary. But there is also a need to be loved. I hope the author can overcome it! Come on

Although there are some minor flaws, it still looks pretty, but there are too few.

It looks good. There are several points that I think are good. She openly expresses her love and does not hide her identity as a time traveler from the people she loves. She has always been with her since childhood. Emotionally, she is not only her only relative but also someone she likes. She also has the same emotions. I think it is reasonable to report her identity under such circumstances, and she has just experienced a life and death battle. Can you tell me about the book club group?

┏┴ ┣┫██████┃Urge┃█┃ ┣┫██████┃More┃█┃ ┣┫██████┃Big┃█┃ | Dear Daddy: Seeing the words is like meeting each other, and the letter is soothing. Falling in love with you is probably the most arbitrary and unreasonable thing in this world. It's not about weighing the pros and cons, or coming up with ideas, but suddenly having you makes me worried about you and I can't let go of you. You are the extraneous branch in my stable years, and the sun, moon and stars in my ordinary life. Whether it's the sunrise in the morning or a nap at noon, I love you. By the way, do you still have it in your draft box?

I also found corn kernels from Shili. It's so delicious😋😋😋

Originally, the rating was quite low, and I thought it wasn't very good-looking. After reading the comments, I thought it was okay. Then I saw that it was around 8pm and it is now 1am. It was still pretty good.

They are all very good-looking, but I can only say that black energy is not good at playing. I remember in Chapter 80, Danfan first pulled the teacher into the black energy camp. I don't need to say more about what happens next. I've done all the black and negative tone, but I don't know what kind of person the protagonist is? The next sentence makes the protagonist full of anger. I can only say that he deserves it. If it were him, I would definitely kill all his friends except the teacher first, and then drag the teacher into the black energy camp. If possible, I would say it was the white energy that did it (still magic pill)

It's clear that this is a good book, but the author's performance is a bit inconsistent. Readers are required to be patient. This book does not follow the three golden chapters theory. Being robbed of the monkey charm at the beginning will make impatient people give up immediately. The protagonist's awkward personality will also dissuade some people. But some authors have good ideas, and the combination of various comic worlds is very good. The author has watched quite a few anime, so you can look forward to it. Waiting for the protagonist's growth is also a good thing to watch.