I Dare Not Claim to Be Number One Under Heaven

The writing style is a bit simple, not gorgeous, but it fits the subject matter perfectly. At the same time, the portrayal of the "main characters" and the relationships between the characters is really comfortable to watch. There are foreshadowings in the plot to entice people to continue watching. It's also interesting to see what the protagonist's path will be like, as well as the training sects that haven't been revealed yet.

The writing is very good and has a martial arts feel.

The writing is quite interesting, but the memories are too long, which makes it feel a bit bland and not very exciting. It is suitable for slow reading and listening to books is just right 😄

Tomato has been reading this book for so long. This is the first time that I really feel that it is well written. I can't help but want to post a book review to express my admiration. Looking at it now, this book has the style of embodying the strengths of hundreds of schools of thought, and has already gained a deep understanding of Jingu Samadhi. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of hard work into the martial arts novel. But now that I see it, I feel that the character and charisma of the protagonist are not outstanding. There is no very clear guideline for how to behave with others, it is still relatively vague. Although it does not affect the look and feel, it does seem that the protagonist is not three-dimensional and too thin. Please refer to Mr. Jin Yong's works such as Xia Ke Xing and Heavenly Sword and Dragon Sword. (Author, did you refer to these two works? Why do you see that the male protagonist's personality and life experience are so similar [laughing]) I only personally believe that there needs to be some plots in which the male protagonist truly faces it independently to highlight the character's characteristics (because up to now, the protagonist is actually led around by the boss most of the time) and also to promote the protagonist's growth. Finally, I wish the author a great success as soon as possible. I am very optimistic about this book.

The writing is a bit skillful. Some books sell the plot, and some books sell the setting. This kind of book sells the writing. It has very natural dialogue, no sense of AI, no literary youth, and it is not a vernacular. It is a very comfortable book to read.

It's been a long time since I've seen a novel like this on Tomato, which is slow-paced and sloppy, but I can still read it. The writing is good and the concept is interesting. You can see the author's intention. The five stars are just for encouragement. I hope you won't stop updating and let me finish reading this story.

The author's writing is very good. It already has a high score as a debut novel. It would be better if the story logic is more refined, and there are less modern jokes and more immersion. The current logic and modern jokes, such as "read less tomato novels", will suddenly throw away the readers who are already fascinated. To create a world, I admire you and look forward to your next book, it will definitely be better.

It's nice to look at. This kind of a bit bland but very attractive feeling is really good.

Good books, good books, good books. It already has a three-point flavor of gold and ancient times. Keep writing, starting point platinum is a predictable result

After Chapter 19, something seems to have changed, but it feels the same, which to me is not good. Also, is Goudan a licker? Hopefully not, but I'm worried because I don't feel comfortable watching it.