Don't Dare to Be Number One in the World

The writing is very good and has a martial arts feel.

The writing style is a bit simple, not gorgeous, but it fits the subject matter perfectly. At the same time, the portrayal of the "main characters" and the relationships between the characters is really comfortable to watch. There are foreshadowings in the plot to entice people to continue watching. It's also interesting to see what the protagonist's path will be like, as well as the training sects that haven't been revealed yet.

The writing is quite interesting, but the memories are too long, which makes it feel a bit bland and not very exciting. It is suitable for slow reading and listening to books is just right [laughs]

It's been a long time since I've seen a novel like this on Tomato, which is slow-paced and sloppy, but I can still read it. The writing is good and the concept is interesting. You can see the author's intention. The five stars are just for encouragement. I hope you won't stop updating and let me finish reading this story.

The writing is a bit skillful. Some books sell the plot, and some books sell the setting. This kind of book sells the writing. It has very natural dialogue, no sense of AI, no literary youth, and it is not a vernacular. It is a very comfortable book to read.

Tomato has been reading this book for so long. This is the first time that I really feel that it is well written. I can't help but want to post a book review to express my admiration. Looking at it now, this book has the style of embodying the strengths of hundreds of schools of thought, and has already gained a deep understanding of Jingu Samadhi. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of hard work into the martial arts novel. But now that I see it, I feel that the character and charisma of the protagonist are not outstanding. There is no very clear guideline for how to behave with others, it is still relatively vague. Although it does not affect the look and feel, it does seem that the protagonist is not three-dimensional and too thin. Please refer to Mr. Jin Yong's works such as Xia Ke Xing and Heavenly Sword and Dragon Sword. (Author, did you refer to these two works? Why do you see that the male protagonist's personality and life experience are so similar [laughing]) I only personally believe that there needs to be some plots in which the male protagonist truly faces it independently to highlight the character's characteristics (because up to now, the protagonist is actually led around by the boss most of the time) and also to promote the protagonist's growth. Finally, I wish the author a great success as soon as possible. I am very optimistic about this book.

The author's writing is very good. It already has a high score as a debut novel. It would be better if the story logic is more refined, and there are less modern jokes and more immersion. The current logic and modern jokes, such as "read less tomato novels", will suddenly throw away the readers who are already fascinated. To create a world, I admire you and look forward to your next book, it will definitely be better.

Good books, good books, good books. It already has a three-point flavor of gold and ancient times. Keep writing, starting point platinum is a predictable result

It's nice to look at. This kind of a bit bland but very attractive feeling is really good.

Liu Xichao is the heroine, right? Don't let some drunkard descend from the sky snatch you away. When I was looking at bad people, I was almost poisoned to death in the first season. The senior brother and sister grew up together as childhood sweethearts and had a strong sense of CP. The junior sister was raped by a drunkard from the sky. The real poison has a shadow.

Brother, this level should not be in Tomato...

After Chapter 19, something seems to have changed, but it feels the same, which to me is not good. Also, is Goudan a licker? Hopefully not, but I'm worried because I don't feel comfortable watching it.

High quality, come on, author, you must keep writing [crazy]

It's very beautiful, and has that Jianghu flavor.

I can only give it four stars at most. Although it has a strong martial arts flavor and uniquely incorporates fantasy elements, which makes the story more interesting, some characters' story lines are too sloppy, and the head does not look like the head, and the tail does not look like the tail. It is recommended that those important supporting characters with names should be given a formal ending.

It's not like a debut novel, it's well written, not verbose at all, but I just can't understand it.

It's pretty good, I feel like it has some familiar writing format. But after seeing so much, I forgot [laughing and crying] I want to write a book, can I post it on Douyin? The author is [thinking] I think this subject matter is quite good, but I don't know if it will become popular. If it's popular, just treat it as a diversion for you. If it's not popular, just treat it as fun, okay? [Love] [Love]

If nothing else, the first few chapters are quite interesting. Looking at the rest, I feel that the author is capable.

Since then, the protagonist's subjectivity has been weakening since the Heroes Association, and it almost feels like he has become a supporting role. I'll mention it when I remember it [awkward laugh]

@Charlotte Rita Let's take a look at this. It's pretty cool too.

Every word is vivid and natural. It can be seen that I learned a lot from the manager. He also has his own style, which is pretty good.

The content of this book made me think of Hong Qigong and Guo Jing and Huang Rong [crying] [crying] [crying] The author is really talented, surely? Don't stop updating [cry][cry][cry]

The writing style is sophisticated and full of Jianghu atmosphere, the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, the plot is relaxed and tense, and the sense of immersion is very strong. I hope the author can continue to do more

It's been a while since I've seen martial arts that fit my taste.

It can be seen that the author must have read a lot of novels written by the Ming and Qing Dynasties. It is very interesting.

It's good. It's a rare type. It's hard to describe. The seemingly plain narrative contains this ups and downs of the plot. The writing is also good, but there are some places that are overly repetitive. The old man never speaks and is very impatient. But as the author's debut novel, it is still very good.

I like it so much, it's so well written.

Like the book says, feeling.

The writing is okay, the fighting scenes are fluent, the plot advances steadily, and the small climaxes are one node after another. The martial arts flavor in the book is very strong, but why is the rating so low?

Well written, has the potential to become a hit