The Beggar Army Defies Heaven and Changes Its Fate

The storyline is okay at the beginning, but subsequent chapters are confusing. The characters are not clear enough. The novel's words and sentences are piled up repeatedly. The outline of the novel needs to be clarified. The development process of the story chapters must be more closely connected. The order of the characters' appearance should be arranged in an orderly manner. The psychological journey of the novel's protagonist and the humiliation and burden-bearing need not be included in every chapter. Instead, the protagonist's inner world should be shown when he is alone or later alone with the heroine. The protagonist's IQ and strategy writing should be strengthened. More detailed descriptions of the protagonist's bravery and formation of troops should be added. (I am just a reader who loves to read novels. I am also Han nationality. I have also dreamed of going back to ancient times to kill foreign enemies. The novel of King Ran Min is not easy to write, but I hope the author will not give up. He can check more information and consult an old gentleman in history.) Finally, I wish the author all his wishes come true and all the best.