Mine*************

"The wonderful adventure between the bitter male protagonist who was treated as a Japanese by his biological parents and the adopted daughter who is well-dressed and well-fed"

To be honest, I feel that the author's emotional portrayal of the brother and sister protagonists is a bit disappointing and even a bit inexplicable. Some daily plots also tend to be complicated and boring - this is also inevitable in some daily novels. [Eat melon] However, the author is very good at shaping the bright and cheerful little girl like the monitor. She feels like the most lovable and rich female character in the whole novel, and she has surpassed most romance novels I have read. From the last scene when Lu Mengdie appeared to get ice cream, I was shocked by the description of the three states of ice cream. It's a pity that the monitor is not the heroine. [Crying] I feel like the author could add some attempts by the male protagonist and other female characters to try new things in new scenes. The psychological description of the male protagonist can not only be limited to the words "slightly tingling", but can also be tender and envious. The protagonist is a person who is often cold-faced and cold-hearted, but also very gentle. I feel that these two qualities can be portrayed in a more complex manner. The protagonist has a sensitive and thoughtful personality, so there are a lot of psychological monologues, but the author's language descriptions are also natural and smooth. I hope to add more language. The long inner monologues are really tiring to watch. To be sad for the author, overall the story of this book is not very good, but I felt some of the author's emotions from it. No matter how bad a book is, as long as it is written by oneself, it is an anatomy of oneself and an expression of one's own thoughts. As long as these hundreds of thousands of words can be written, it is already great. [Sending Hearts]

It should be okay. The emotional aspects are quite delicate and pure. I just want to say that the transition in the middle is a bit cumbersome and a little deliberate. If it can be shortened or simplified and more emotions are described, it should be okay. Everyone has different ideas, so I can't say how I judge. If you are the kind of person who wants to see one, one pair, or one pair, then don't look at it, it's not the same track. Come on, author

The writing is very delicate. The plot may be a bit controversial because of saving the cat, but I personally feel that there is no problem. It plays a relatively big role in promoting the plot. I like the three important female characters currently appearing

Anchor, you haven't updated for 3 days. I'm waiting on time at 12 o'clock every night. Crying] [Crying] It's really beautiful. What's the anchor doing recently? Remember to update more and give me some compensation after you're busy. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]

Wow, the squad leader really cares about the male protagonist, can he be the main palace?

After reading part of it, how many words does the author expect to write? I hope it's not too little, I really like this style.

The writing is very detailed. Good luck to the author.

The character of the male protagonist is nothing to say, he is a saint. My sister feels that this is deliberate. Your favorite character right now is the squad leader? Come on, author, write slowly. Not full stars because I haven't seen how the protagonist's mother is dealt with ()

Author Author I want the original picture of the cover. I really like this novel and the cover also attracted me.

It can be very beautiful!

I hope there will be more storylines about my sister~

Beautiful and well written

Not bad, worth watching.

At present, it seems that this book has the strength to give five-star reviews.

I stayed up late to read it, so I can give it a good shake. The author must work hard to update it, hehe

It looks good, I look forward to the protagonist's expression when he sees Step Sister's Diary

The plot is quite interesting and has potential for development in the later stages.

Love it. I like my sister and Su Xiaoxiao.

It's very well written. I hope the author will continue to persevere and give it a five-star review.

It's very well written. It can be seen that the writing style is at least much higher than that of novels. What's more, in this series, and this is just the beginning, it's great.

It's very interesting and well described. At least it's the type I like. Please update it.

Very well written

Beautiful, the more I watch it, the more I like it

It's beautiful. The author will update it soon.

Half of the time I saw Pleasant Goat, I wanted to kill it.

Absolutely excellent, where has the author written before?

I'll give it one star after the author finishes it [laughs crookedly]

Okay, generally I have a good attitude, but I don't like giving perfect marks.

Come on, author, you must persevere