Machine Girl************

It feels very good to watch, and the protagonist's sentence "drifting is worse than walking in line" shows that the author really watches racing. But there are too many scenes where the villain appears, so don't have too many off-board moves. In fact, many people who read racing articles do so because the protagonist shows off his actions. Readers will find it objectionable if there are too many stories about recruiting villains from outside the game, unless the author solves the problem in a way that is satisfying and satisfying when dealing with the villain later.

Children, after watching what is flying in the sky, come to see what is running on the ground.

I accidentally saw it on the author's homepage. After reading it, it was okay. It's just a few chapters. I'd better wait and see.

I also saw racing cars from a plane.

It's very beautiful. I feel that the writing is very good. The emotions are very natural. Come on, author. I feel that if the writing is done, I can compete with the roast goose who pioneered Ji Niang's novels [Blow a kiss]

The writing is very good, the plot is not too fast, and it is not a pure novel, but the emotional line is indeed a bit stretched. Compared with the author's exceptional article about a girl, the expression of the emotional line is indeed a bit worse. Also, although the number of people who read it is small, there are no interruptions. Please give me a quick update. I update [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

It looks great, good luck to the author! [Sinister smile]

Is the male protagonist wearing clothes or wearing souls? Or reincarnation or fetal transmigration?

Not bad👍, since Roast Goose didn't write about the rally, I came here to watch it

The plot progression is not stiff and interesting.

The plot is compact, down-to-earth, and escalates step by step. It is much better and better than those elements that appear out of thin air and without logic.