Travel Through Five Generations and Ten Kingdoms to Become a Queen

After reading the first dozen chapters, the writing is okay, but the author did not write an outline and there are some inconsistencies. I said before that I found a well when I first arrived in the village, but later I said that I didn't know if there was a well, so I went searching again and found the well in the haystack. In the third chapter, he suddenly said that he had exchanged salt with Boss Cheng. I read it later and Boss Cheng appeared. It is recommended that the author revise the previous article first, straighten out the logic and outline it before writing.

The subject matter is very novel, and there are few authors writing about the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms era. But the writing style is average, and the narrative seems relatively verbose, which can't be said to be long-winded, but there are some plots that feel like they can't reflect anything, which makes people feel very redundant. Most of the characters are relatively mediocre, with low human aura, and it's hard to see each person's personality. The author piled up some tragic things, but generally it felt very bland for some reason, and it didn't feel sad at all. It can only be a very superficial misery. But the author has written a lot, and you can learn about history by the way, so it is still good.