There Is Indeed Something Wrong with My Tokyo Exorcism Story

It's very close to the book "Tokyo Exorcism", especially the character creation and interaction. It has a light and refreshing taste, and the story is also step-by-step and attractive to read. The battle scenes and weird descriptions are a bit incomplete, and it doesn't have a scary atmosphere. "Maybe I watched too many Tokyo-style movies." Generally speaking, it's on a tomato level, and it's considered food. The same genre is really top-notch in Tomato. "Tomatoes Are Gold" is very rare to use words and sentences as close to the background area as possible [Like] "Those uneducated writers on Tomato can only use colloquial words and sentences. Do they think writing novels is the same as posting posts?"

At present, I have read 74, which is quite reasonable in all aspects. It doesn't make me feel that there is something wrong with this place. However, it still makes me confused. I gave a lot of descriptions to the black stick. I thought there would be some Taoist skills in it? And currently, I feel that the protagonist is very reckless, careless, and casually provocative and weird when it comes to life and death matters, although it may be to attract new characters. Overall, I still have thoughts of reading it.

Encourage and encourage the author, overall it is okay, but it needs to be polished. Japanese writing may have a lot of mistakes. After all, readers are more picky now. It would be better if you write it according to your ideas or take readers' opinions.

It's not bad, it's very Riqing-like. I think the writing of a few small ghost-killing events is better than that of the Dark World. I feel that the sudden introduction of the world view of the Dark World is a bit sudden.

The early part of the plot is very good, but starting from the dark world, the combat power gradually loses its strength and feels overwhelmed. There is also the battle with Feng Ji in the latest chapter that can be killed directly at the end. Because the author didn't want to, so I said a few more words. I don't need to say more about the rest.

The introduction looks like a cool story, but the protagonist doesn't show much in the early stage. He keeps looking for ghosts, and Hoshino Yui doesn't do anything at all. He finds a female ghost in red and is defeated. Instead, he is rescued. It doesn't seem to be fun, but the plot is still good. It would be better if the follow-up can not overwhelm the combat power.

I would like to ask how many words can be updated [what] [what] I like reading this kind of subject and I like books with many words🥰The novels I read are all at least 1 million words. I don't know how many words the author can write. I hope there will be more [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's okay, the Chinese protagonist is good, but no novel with a Japanese protagonist, no matter how highly rated, can be substituted.

Just getting beaten, just waiting for reinforcements [laughs]

It's okay. I'd like to ask the author what Fu Jiang's situation is. She's probably not the heroine. [Thinking]

It's okay, you can give some encouragement, author, come on! [Praise]

Come on, I hope I can see the ending

The pacing is okay, but the battle at the beginning was a bit too intense. I'll check it out later.

OK, it can be seen that the author's writing style is improving. It would be better to deal with daily life more delicately. It is really difficult for Riqing to avoid this aspect.

I hope the author will work hard. This book looks really good. I would like to give it a five-star review and support it.

The combat power is pretty good, and it still looks pretty.

Personally, I think this is the best novel about Hikari's exorcisms that I've read so far.

5 Points is too low, really not worthy of it.

It's a pity that there is no intelligent multi-person voice

Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this

The current expansion is okay, but I personally hope to encounter some powerful evil spirits sooner.

So far, there are no big poisonous points. It's still a good way to pass the time and check it out.

Support! Very good, a bit exciting to watch

Come on 👏 Very good

Well written, keep it up

The emotional line is pretty well written.

Not bad, it reads very smoothly

How should I put it? While giving people a sense of urgency that the storm is about to come, at the same time, they are living their daily lives leisurely.

After eating so many sky stones, I finally struck gold! ! !

I just love watching Higarashi Asashi's daily life [shy]