Jobless Reincarnation: Becoming a King Begins by Saving Sylphy

The writing is indeed good. Among the many histories of Tomato, I can still find some good ones. However, the author's decision for the protagonist is not so clear, and I also feel it is a bit confusing. It was said at the beginning that the protagonist is already the Sword God and the Water God, but at the end it is not completely successful, but the daily writing is indeed Okay, the differentiation of combat power is still a bit unclear. I hope the author can make a separate chapter to roughly explain the world view and differentiation of combat power in this world. However, the improvement of combat power is not particularly clear. What has the protagonist learned and what does he have with the protagonist? In fact, you can open a separate chapter to talk about it. You can create a small chapter at the end of each big chapter to summarize all the gains of the protagonist. Sometimes it looks very confusing. Of course, it is just my little suggestion. This book is still very good.

Author, are you lovesick? [Angry] The first death has no story... Because the story has just begun The second death has a story... Because the story has already begun (The story refers to the reaction of each character after death - to put it simply, the knife is issued) Is the author still around? If you are here, just reply to me and I will give you a small gift of 29 right away.

[Eating Melon] It's so beautiful. Everyone should take a look. I can't let myself get addicted to it. I like to share it with everyone [Shy]

I think it is one of the best written Tomato Jobless Reincarnation fanfics [Adoration][Adoration]

I haven't seen much of it so I'll give it four stars, but there are still some flaws (in my opinion). For example, the protagonist is a soul traveler and I don't know the plot. Apart from these two, I haven't seen any other flaws so far.

It's interesting that you put it on the bookshelf

A very good fan work, the sensational writing is just right. I love watching O(∩_∩)O

Good looking, quite classy

It's rare to have no job. Come on, the author.

This plot is really good

Yes, you can write well.

I haven't read Jobless Reincarnation, but I quite like this book

There are only three words to say to the author: please update.

Come on, write about the jobless big brother

The wind is very clear and I feel happy from head to toe 🙂

I haven't finished reading it, but the villains written by the author are quite interesting. They are not bad just for the sake of being bad, but they also have pursuits, such as Oban.

I like it, keep up the good work!

The writing is good [exploration] (under tasting Who are the heroines? In the early stage, were humans and gods on good terms, or did they fall out directly? [Exploration][exploration][exploration]

Is Mama Smurf for Rudy? Why hasn't he appeared [almost crying]

Not bad, very pretty

It's a good idea among jobless fans.

Very nice to say

The protagonist doesn't know the plot of Jobless Reincarnation, but the rest is fine

Must have 5 stars and at least 80 points