Quick Travel: Absolute Control

After reading the first world, I found it to be quite good overall. The story is complete, the chapters are rich in content, and there is no running account. Advantages: The heroine in the first world saves the original heroine, and there is no female competition; the male protagonists with names all like the heroine; the heroine has a system and a mission, she is not a white rabbit, she is very good at acting, and her acting skills are also very mature. Regrets: The plot in the early stage where the heroine was threatened by the uncle's family was not very comfortable. In the later stage, after the heroine and the hero got together, there was no plot to deal with the uncle's family. The uncle's family disappeared directly and acted purely as tools, which lacked the excitement; the hero thought that the heroine knew that the heroine knew that the hero was using his mind when they first met and fell in love. There were not many scenes of abusing the hero, and there was no chasing his wife in the crematorium; the heroine When her brother disappeared and she was left alone, the male protagonist proposed that the female protagonist marry him to protect her. Personally, I didn't like this arrangement. I would prefer the male protagonist to support the female protagonist in taking care of the Lin family's property. Even if the female protagonist is not proficient in learning, she is willing to take the initiative to learn to take care of it, and cooperate with the male protagonist's company to help manage it. This writing will respect the female protagonist more and allow the female protagonist to grow, rather than relying on love to maintain it. (This may be different from the direction the author wants to write, but I personally prefer this kind of plot)

The author's writing style is so awesome [laughs][laughs], I can see my mother and father spinning 360 degrees in the sky and raining down rain on our author's baby. The emotional line between the male and female protagonists is also very thin and flowing. The water of the Yangtze River is rolling. The language system is so sweet that my brain is dizzy. I just want to give birth to a daughter for our author's baby. [Laugh][laugh][laugh] A hanging southeast branch will also turn into icing. Another unsolved mystery of the world was born here.

I feel that the author of the second story is like a god of books. The close-ups are particularly natural and comfortable. The world in the book is very simple. I also like the author's starting point for writing and the sense of "equality" between the lines. I feel that I can write more similar ones. I am really good at writing. The rice tastes so good, and I have already followed it on Weibo a lot [Blowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses] However, I actually found the first story a bit boring, and the second ancient poem was really interesting. The crime solving, the psychological portrayal of the characters, and the details of the minor characters were all very good. The protagonists of the two worlds are also set up and are jumping on my xp [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] I am really good at it. I hope the author will practice more and he will get better and better in the future.

Shijian Er really stabbed my XP hard, it was shocking and delicious [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][adoration]. The author's writing style is also very good. The rhythm of the whole story is not draggy, but it is not rushed. The male protagonist is not the only one around the heroine's baby, and every world is like a whole life. What I like the most is that each world has a relatively long chapter, so you can savor it carefully. I like this kind of fast-travel novel that has a relatively long chapter in each small world [Love] [Love] [Love]

World 2 is really written very well [Sending my heart], I am still recalling it now, the pulling feeling is absolutely amazing! [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] If you love this one, you can definitely give it a try To summarize below, the plot of World One mainly feels like the contrasting settings. Although some of the plot settings are relatively immature, I can't refuse the New Year. Even if I saw the author saying vulgar words, I still had no hesitation and watched World One without hesitation! Overall, it's pretty good, especially the wedding scene of the male and female protagonists! Some comments said it was purely a sadistic story, and I almost didn't read it. Fortunately, I finally read it. I don't think it's sadistic. I've read both he and be, and I think each one is delicious in its own way😋 World 2 is simply amazing. In fact, I rarely read such a long world story, but this sense of gradual pulling, and the emotional development process of the male and female protagonists are very well written, and they will not suddenly get together like a short story. In the end, the female protagonist's love turns to hate, and the feeling of love and hate for the male protagonist is so well written. I originally thought it was a cookie-cutter novel. I have one thing to say, the author is wondering whether he will consider writing a long novel [a heartfelt message]

Very nice. The author's writing is very good! ! ! Recommended to watch! ! It's just that the heroine didn't see the scheming that she should have. It's not that the protagonist can control it, so I can go in with confidence. There is a slight flaw in the ointment. I thought that when the hero took advantage of the heroine at the beginning, the heroine knew it (after all, the heroine is the attacker. I saw that the heroine also had scheming intentions). I thought the heroine would torture the hero. Who knew that the hero didn't suffer anything and was easily forgiven. I beg the author to refine the relationship between the two so that he can handle it a little more lightly. But I still highly recommend it. Just write it down. I'm really looking forward to the second chapter. The character of the male protagonist is well portrayed and stands up. I want to go in and beat him up hahaha.

So pretty! I started watching it directly from the second world, and then I found that the more I watched, the more fascinating it became! The rhythm is neither too fast nor too slow, just right and very immersive. Maybe it's because I'm a picky person. When reading other books, they either develop quickly and leave a huge sense of emptiness and unreality after tasting them, or they develop slowly and contain a lot of nonsense. I don't know what they are writing about? But this book is completely different! Let go of what needs to be said, pick up what needs to be included, and tell the story in an unhurried and unhurried manner. It will neither make a long speech nor think outside the box to greatly affect the perception. And the characters are well drawn, especially the female protagonist and the male protagonist, each with their own characteristics. The heroine is blind in the second world, but it connects the whole story together, and the emotional line is also delicate, which will not make people feel bored. The male protagonist in the second world was interested from the beginning, then discovered that he and the female protagonist had a common talent, and then talked like confidants... Step by step, he deepened, and finally realized that he was attracted. I haven't started watching the second one yet, I've almost finished watching the second world, but it's so good that I can't help but rate it first, and then go to taste the ending [Adoration] [Flowing Kiss] [Sparrow Eater] The current serialization of The Little Mermaid is also my favorite setting. I hope it can be completed as soon as possible. Finally, I wish this book will continue to prosper and there will be more readers who like it [Blow a kiss] [Please update]

It's really super good-looking, and I fell in love with it. I just finished watching the first world, and I really like it. This rice is also very fragrant, and the writing is really good! I can't bear to watch it. I can't do it anymore. So the author teacher, Xiaosheng is being polite. I have been waiting for the teacher's update recently. I can't wait to see it. Last night, the stars were twinkling. I couldn't sleep. My mind was full of the plot in the article. It's so fast. I just hope that it will be updated quickly to relieve the pain of lovesickness. I hope the teacher will take pity on Xiaosheng sincerely and submit the follow-up chapter quickly. Thank you, Xiaosheng.

So well written! ! ! ! ! ! ! For me who likes to read New Year's Eve, the writing is really good! ! When I read it, I felt like I was immersed in the atmosphere of the scene. I really like it. Chef Mi, please update soon!

The character really hit me hard! The heroine is a heartthrob and weak, she looks soft and easy to bully, but she has deep thoughts and scheming, she is not stupid and sweet, and she is not blindly in love; the male protagonist is a possessive and crazy villain with a strong desire for control. The characters in each world are not repeated at all. The world is full of evil. A big man in power uses every step of the marriage contract to steal the heroine from his opponent. The contract The marriage is full of tension; the world's second highest IQ serial killer x a blind female writer, the atmosphere is directly full, dark and ambiguous, the relationship between the male and female protagonists is a long-lasting atmosphere, sweet but not greasy, and the ambiguous tension is full. The paranoia, tolerance, and desire for exclusivity of the crazy male protagonist are particularly well portrayed without being greasy and exaggerated. The contrast between carefulness and strong confinement is really getting better with each passing grade. The heroine looks weak, but in fact she has her own little thoughts. She is not passive and allows others to manipulate her. She has a strong sense of gaming. Those who don't like the brainless virgin heroine can feel free to rush. I saved a lot of chapters and read it all at once. It's a good story. Baby Wuyu is a warm person in every world. The evil god in World 3 is so good. In order to get close to Baby Wuyu, he turned into a girl. It's really cool. It's just not enough. It's tied for the first time [please update] [please update] [please update]

This novel is extremely beautiful! Like it very much! I like Wuyu and the author who wrote this book! I finished reading it in one go, looking forward to updates. The writing is really good. The ambiguous pull between the young lovers is very touching. The writing is very detailed. The author is very good. I hope I can write more about Small Worlds. I have been reading this book for a long time, and this will always be my treasure book! Finally, I would like to praise the author. The writing is really good. I love to read it and want to read it for a lifetime. Really, you have such a divine text to enter China!

I feel like I have found a soulmate after reading this novel. I feel like I have found a soulmate after reading this novel. The author is awesome. Please update it quickly. I will update a world every day. OK, the author agreed without saying anything. (*ฅ́˘ฅ̀*)♡︎Looking at the introduction, I am looking forward to the next world˃ ˄ ˂̥̥

I like World 2, I love it so much. The heroine of World 2 is so good, I really like it. I am a pearl in the milk tea cup. On the surface, it is just an embellishment in the sweetness. In fact, I am the most lingering trap. No matter how thick the milk cover is, it cannot cover my persistence. Just as you are sucking the sweet tea soup, I will slide it into your mouth along the straw, and stick it between your teeth, so that your tongue cannot lick it. When you have to drink to the fullest, pick it with your hands. Before I come out, I will stick to you silently, stick to you, stick to you, stick to you, looking forward to a big update. ʢ˶ᵒ ᵕ ˂˶ʡᶻ

Oh my God, how can it be so beautiful! ! ! The first and second ones are so cool, haha, the third one is not finished yet (wait for it. Come on, update. I gave you milk tea. Remember to go to the milk tea shop to get it. For breakfast, remember to go to the breakfast shop to get it. For cakes, remember to go to the cake shop. Remember to update when you are hungry. Remember to update when you are thirsty. Remember to update when you are sleepy... But there are so few people watching. It is so beautiful. (Having said that, this is the first time I write a review for a novel that is still being serialized. Haha, just think of it as a review of Mi's book [Love] [Love] [Love]

Ni'er, you can be sincere, brave and kind, but I understand how sensitive and fragile you are. She is cute and has a good personality. Sensitivity is a talent. It is never a weakness, but an inner strength that makes her unique. [Adoration] Xie is a good baby, the most worthy and best baby in the world. No problem, now that you have met me, I will no longer have to pretend to be strong. I really like your eyes, which are big and bright. I will smile more in the future. By the way, is there anything else in the draft box? [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

①The sinister old man in power × the rival's sister (completed) Lin Hexing was trapped in a nursing home abroad and was forced to disappear. However, on the eve of his return to China, he saw the news that his sister and his rival were holding the wedding of the century... "Your sister is now my wife, so the affairs of the Lin family are naturally under my control." # Male protagonist steals the upper hand in the corner #chess piece becomes wife #shape difference #contract marriage ②Highly Intelligent Serial Killer × Blind Novel Writer (Complete Highly Recommended) In search of inspiration, Kiriyu meets a criminology expert. He taught her a little bit of the logic of the crime, but he didn't tell her that the last piece of the puzzle fell on his face with blood... #Nightmare*Dreams are all about my face, right? # Dark crazy professor#criminal genius novelist ③Infinite Flow Evil God×Miao Village Beautiful NPC (Completed) ④Cold-blooded and ruthless tyrant × frail and beautiful wife (ongoing) (It's exactly the same as the introduction. I love it. Don't miss it if you pass by. There are HE, BE, and OE. Which version do you want to see?)

It's super pretty, especially the second plane. It's shocking and delicious. Believe me, the second plane is the best! ! My three views are fighting. I hope he and be. The other planes are also beautiful, but I personally still like the second plane the best.

Okay, okay, I commented after reading that the author was very lively. As expected of someone who cut off her own legs, the content she wrote is adorable. ☺️The only thing I'm a little dissatisfied with is that the male protagonist in the first world didn't admit until later in the game that he was supposed to treat the female protagonist as a pawn but now he's soft-hearted towards her. I thought this kid had realized it a long time ago! This guy should have been allowed to follow for two more episodes, and was forgiven by Wu so easily.

After reading one or two worlds, I feel that the writing in this book is generally good👍👍, because it was originally written to satisfy some XP. It is definitely good in this aspect (because it is very consistent with my xp, and I am nb🤤🤤) recommended つ♡⊂ However, I think the beginning of the book's introduction can be slightly changed. I read some book reviews that said the content of the article is a bit inconsistent with the beginning of the introduction, and it does not reflect the heroine's role as a quick traveler. I think the mission can be changed directly. ① The first world mission is said to be to save the original heroine and heroine from the villain, but in fact, it is not reflected in this way at all in the full text (except for a little description of rescuing the original heroine An Lin later, there is no description later). ②The second world is even less reflected. It starts directly as an immersion. It doesn't even explain who the original male and female protagonists are. After watching it, I didn't find out where the task was completed. ꒦ິ^꒦ິ Therefore, I suggest that Mibao improve the introduction and mark it as [Immersive Quick Travel] (because there are always people who will mind if it is not marked🥹). The first world transition, and then change the name of the system bound to [Female Support Counterattack System] in the main body of the introduction (because I can't see where the counterattack is in the book🥲🥲) to [Female Supporting Shaping] System] (I personally think it is consistent🫣) Then the task is mainly to [create the image of the supporting characters in the small world and make the characters of the supporting characters in the small world more vivid] and so on (I think before starting the task, Xiaoba can also be asked to add some general world information (♡>𖥦<)/♥, so that Xiaoba can brush up his sense of presence💗ི་ྀ) Okay, these are my personal opinions and suggestions. In short, Mi Bao's book is super delicious, I still recommend it ૮₍♡>𖥦<₎ა

The second article is really awesome. My dad, my brother, my sister, my sister-in-law, my uncle, my second aunt, my third uncle and my fourth aunt all went to see it [crying] [crying] "Two entangled hearts will walk the same path." I cried! This article is too short and not enough to read. The heroine's baby is so strong, wow, the hero is also in true love. Male protagonist, you are confused. Do you have to go to that shabby church? If you don't go, you can be with your wife all the time./Cry/Cry/Cry. The heroine's baby is so strong. She stabbed the hero directly. She was so energetic that she left a woman who never looked at be. Fortunately, there is an extra episode of he. Wuwuwuwuwu. If I had met him earlier, everything would have been different. Wuwuwu.

I went and met my own Mona Lisa🥹Goddess, you must write it down... Did the goddess ever have something to stir up a big pot of rice and want to eat it all in a hurry? How could there be such a meal that meets XP😋... It was so satisfying to finish the first two worlds and find that the sky has just begun to fall in the third world! The ending of World 1 comes full circle in an unexpected way, and the oe of World 2 is even more magical... It can be tasted over and over again, but I prefer he, so Meimei ate the extra chapter Jie Jie Jie ~ The goddess looks in the mirror and sees herself. If you can't see it, you have to continue writing it🥺

It's really good to watch. It's the kind that I will come back to over and over again. This meal is so delicious. At first, I thought World 2 was too long, but now I realize that it's not enough to watch. After watching World 2, I feel empty [crying]. Please find a sequel where the male protagonist of World 2 meets the female protagonist earlier and then he [crying] [crying] [crying]

It's so delicious. How can such a delicious meal exist? Just by reading the introduction, you can tell how delicious it is. When you click on it and taste it, it's quite shocking. How can there be such similar xp? It's so delicious! ! ! ! Boss, please produce more food soon. It's so cool to take a five-minute rest. I don't have enough to eat. Wow, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh.

My favorite is the setting of a blind novelist. I really enjoyed reading it, Little Couple 99. The author portrayed the characters in a very three-dimensional way, and then he probably checked the relevant information before writing it. I felt that it looked quite professional, I don't know OOC, and the writing is also very good. As someone who likes to skip chapters, I continued reading without skipping a chapter this time. I hope the author will continue writing [shy] Already having dinner at wb, it smells so good

The female protagonist Bao Bao simply plays with the male protagonist in the palm of her hand. The superior person lowers his head is very well written, which makes people feel comfortable physically and mentally. There are some places where it is easy for people to feel uncomfortable. The plot is well grasped and it feels okay to watch. The pseudo-forced ➕ immersive feeling can be viewed as a short story. Personally, I think the length of each world is not very long, and the plots are well connected so far. It is much better than many romance novels that are based on women's videos. After reading it, I found that the BG is shocking to men. I hope that women's videos will return to women's videos, and there will be more authors and novels that put women first and dominant.

Teacher, these ideas are really amazing! Moreover, the teacher's content is also very good-looking, mainly because the subject matter is really, really novel, oh my god! The main reason is that Kuai Wen has never seen anything so novel before😭🥺Well, yes, the cook who was born as a girl is really awesome😋 Well, yes, the self-produced food is so delicious😋 Novel Wrong typing🌚

It's very delicious. I fell in love with Kiriyu. It's human nature. Although the first world is a little immature, the more you write it, the more delicious it becomes. After tasting it, the second world and the third world are both beautiful and so delicious. Rabbit's uncle likes to write New Year's Eve. I also like New Year's Eve. I look forward to other types of worlds [Send Heart] [Send Heart] [Send Heart] It looks good and will be updated soon.

The settings of each copy of this quick travel novel are novel and unconventional. The story between a blind horror novelist and a serial murderer in the second world is full of dangerous and fascinating atmosphere. I couldn't take my eyes off the game between the two people. The story between the researcher and the mermaid is tender and touching, and every bit of sweetness touches the heart. Not only is the emotional line brilliantly written, but the friendship between the girls depicted in the book is also particularly touching. There is no needless female competition, mutual support and mutual understanding, and the small and sincere bond makes people feel warm. The author is very good at rendering the atmosphere, the text is delicate and vivid, each world has different surprises, highly recommended (＾ν＾)👍

It's really nice to watch. The first world is a guide, and the following worlds are all immersive quick travels, basically directly stepping into the character's perspective. The settings of each world are quite good and not the same. The world of the blind suspense novelist is really exciting. Although I knew Duan Feimo was a bad guy, it was a pity that he let the heroine kill him later. There is also the world of Evil God. At first, I thought the heroine was an NPC, but it turned out to be reversed. It was the first time I saw this setting, and it was quite refreshing. In every world, the male protagonist basically falls in love with the female protagonist at first sight and treats her very well. The female protagonist may seem delicate, but she has her own perseverance, is also very tough, kind and soft. The heroine seems weak, but in relationships, she is the one in charge. I like the settings of each world. I recommend it! ! ! Please update soon! ! !

Delicious, it's been a long time since I've seen an article that suits my taste so much. I just ate it and ate it, it was so delicious. I will always follow Kiriyu [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]