Blue Files: Fifth Graders in Abydos

I see that most of them don't have many problems. Generally speaking, it can be regarded as a relatively good Blue Files fanfic, so can you add some knives? I feel like eating a knife [laughing] [laughing]

To the author: BA is a rare and excellent article, but I have some suggestions. 1: "It's not... But/is...", "It's like saying that the weather is nice for a few days" and the like are used too often. You can try changing them and using more sentence patterns. 2: The description of the environment, character status, etc. Is too long, which can easily lead to a poor impression. You can divide the long description into appropriate paragraphs to make it look more comfortable. Finally, I would like to thank the author. It is precisely because of such a creator that we can taste such delicacies. Also, boss, what will we eat when you go to school?

Plain language supports smooth logic, and the reading experience is good. The most important thing is smoothness. I hope the author can still maintain this style. It is one of the more thoughtful BA novels I have ever seen.

The daily interaction is very high-quality, and there is a sense of wisdom from the Tang Dynasty. I hope it is not copper-awake.

I rarely post book reviews, but this book is really good. Then I will be Shennongba for once. The single heroine Hoshino is a hundred-variable and invincible. This is the label of the system. The protagonist has a three-dimensional personality, and the character setting is based on information, which is good. The plot development is also quite reasonable, with foreshadowing, and the author's writing skills are also very good. The explanation of the resurrected prison dream is absolutely perfect. In addition, the setting of the predecessor is also a tragic and great character, which is still very distressing. The setting of bloodthirsty (blood thirst) is also very interesting. Although the plot is not there yet, I can blindly guess the plot of biting Hoshino later. Summary: Hoshibiuniu Haichi (Updated!!!!) Author, please update it quickly... QAQ Hiss... It seems that the author is also a student? ... Okay then QAQ

The writing is very good, the description of the environment is also very detailed, and the action is also very detailed. The characters' emotions are also good, although the plot may be weird for me personally later on (if you want to know which plot I'm talking about, check the time I posted it) But what I'm talking about here is writing and so on. Maybe the plot may be a little strange at first glance, but after all, it's just the beginning of the main plot, so I personally can give it five stars. Seriously (but all the beautiful second-generation stories are like this, and everything around them revolves around these beautiful things) Seriously, face, punch, punch (so... For us, okay? Keep up the quality!) Arm

An excellent BA article, the description of the environment is really awesome, and the characterization is excellent. The only flaw is that the writing is a little ink in some places, and it is not properly detailed, but these are not problems 🌷🌷🌷

Super pretty! The setting is interesting, the content density is moderate, the description is delicate, the writing is excellent, and there is an uncle! ! ! It feels very comfortable to read, and the system is also my favorite type. I highly approve of the protagonist's invincibility and positive attitude toward life, as well as his appreciation for Hoshino~ Let's make Abydos for a lifetime! One of the best books I have seen so far, the other one is "Azure Files: Joining Abydos at the Start", the authors of them are also very kind. A must read! ! ! Congratulations on finding the treasure!

The writing is very delicate, the emotional line is well developed, and the characters are three-dimensional. This is an advantage. There are also three lightning points in my opinion. The first one is that the protagonist confesses to Hoshino that he is a time traveler. I personally think this is not very appropriate. I think Hoshino's reaction is a bit too idealistic, but it is handled well. I personally feel that it has some impact but not too much. The second one is that the protagonist's friends in the original world have traveled through time. To be honest, When I first saw this, I wanted to abandon the book, but after a little while, I felt that the main line of this book was no longer ordinary, so it is not unacceptable to have another time traveler in the plot outline. After all, we don't know what the author will write later. Mainly, I personally think that this kind of double time travel, especially another one in the middle, is rarely handled well, but I choose to believe the author, the third one, this is completely It's a personal factor, maybe it's MiHoYo's fault. There are many settings that I think can be manipulated more, but the author didn't write about them. For example, the protagonist's bloodthirsty and being in the research institute. I think it's completely possible for the protagonist to have psychological trauma. During a blood-sucking time, Hoshino discovered that his inferiority complex was fully expressed. He could run away from home to deny himself, and then let Hoshino redeem himself. Then there is the resurrection of Meng-senpai. Didn't he consume his own mystery? I think there can be a plot where the protagonist and Meng-senpai encountered a strong enemy and got into a hard fight. However, the protagonist resurrected Meng-senpai and almost consumed half of his power. In the end, I originally wanted to give this book four stars, but after looking back, especially Chapter 79, and seeing the author's writing style, I actually feel that this shortcoming is not a big deal.

Ho ho ho, it's very beautiful, I really want to touch the wolf's tail and ears [smile]

I just finished reading this book and I couldn't help but want to share my feelings. The content is solid, the structure is clear, each chapter is progressive, the logic is rigorous, and it reads very smoothly. The author's analysis is objective and in-depth, with both a macro perspective and detailed support, which gave me a more comprehensive understanding of the themes in the book. The language expression is smooth and natural, without any awkwardness, and the reading experience is very comfortable. The ideas in the book are novel and persuasive, they can trigger thinking, and I gained a lot of new knowledge. Overall, this is a good book worth reading again and again, and is recommended to friends who like in-depth reading.

I see a lot of people talking about water, but I don't think it is The writing style of this book is very slow-paced, starting from the trivial details bit by bit, and slowly unfolding their lives and stories step by step. The author's writing style is very suitable for this style, which makes me feel like I am reading prose: the story description is very detailed, but not annoying; it seems that I write a little bit here and there a little bit, but the overall story pieced together bit by bit revolves around the pleasant daily life and eternity. I really like this style of writing. It allows me to slow down and appreciate the fine details of life after a long absence, and I can also feel the author's detailed portrayal of the characters in every word. All in all, this is an excellent book, with at least a 9.5 Rating in my opinion.

The description of the characters is particularly strong, and the details are well grasped. It is very comfortable to read, and the pace is relatively slow. It focuses on daily life. The book contains a lot of detailed descriptions. If you don't like too many details, read it carefully. The characters are rich and full, and more daily emotions are added to the original characters. The protagonist has a high level of portrayal, and the grasp of emotions is also in place. Even the smallest details can be captured. Don't over-evaluate the special plot, everyone understands it. In general, the slow-paced and detailed daily party can be played without thinking, and the Abydos role cook can also taste it. If you like the fast-paced and thoughtful choices of combat power

It looks good. The dialogue between the protagonist, Hoshino, and Shirako is also very warm and warm. However, I feel that Nomiya has been ignored. I hope it can be described more. In the future, other people in Abydos will also describe it as much as possible, and don't make it a background board.

Generally speaking, this book is a daily light novel based on the game Blue Files. The protagonist is set as a time traveler, narrated in the first person, and interacts with the members of the Countermeasures Committee from the perspective of the time traveler Star Patrol, allowing readers to feel the warmth of the members of the Countermeasures Committee. The reader is immersed in it and has an excellent viewing experience. Personally, I think that this book is a casual secondary novel, and the description of daily character interactions is adequate. On the other hand, the novel is still about daily life before the main line, and too much description of daily life can easily make people feel "bored". It is recommended to start the main line as soon as possible. In addition, I personally suggest that cross-narrating between daily life and the main line can improve the perception. At the same time, one or two more emotional lines of the characters can be appropriately added (for example, the individual communication between Xingxun and Hoshino, just like the conversation on the rooftop of the building mentioned in the article) The above is just my personal opinion, please ignore if there is any inconvenience

As for the writing, I feel good about myself. There aren't many flaws in the plot, or none at all. Except for the plot, which is a bit slow, everything else is very good. The emotional line is also quite rich and daily-oriented, and the combat part is also very good. The above is only my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

The writing is very good. Although it feels a bit depressing at the beginning, from the end it feels like reading a healing series. The writing is also good. There are not many books of this type nowadays. I hope the author can continue writing and not stop updating. I also hope the author can write more books. It is really not enough. After reading it, I feel uncomfortable all over after finishing it😣😣

It's very well written, although it felt a bit depressing at first, but From the back, it feels like watching a healing series, and the writing is also Yes, there are very few books of this type nowadays. I hope I hope the author can continue writing and not stop updating. In addition, I hope the author can continue writing. I hope you can add a few more pictures. It's really not enough to see. I'll post them later. Now that I've finished reading it, I feel uncomfortable all over (yes, I copied someone else's, but it really expresses my inner feelings)

Although the front is a bit crazy, the daily life in the back is very good. The author describes the daily life very well in details and the emotions are very delicate. When I saw Xingxun and Hoshino posting, I smiled like an aunt [shy]. Although I have never played Azure, there is no obstacle in reading. I also really want to know how Hoshino reacts when he knows Xingsun's blood thirst [shy]

I really like the author who takes the plot very seriously. After reading this, I can't stand many other books. It's so vivid. I just came to read the emotional line of the story! I think there is nothing regrettable for a new author. This is a masterpiece. I think the author should have spent a lot of time writing this book. Love, I hope I can finish it.

The writing is very good, although there are some minor problems in some places, but after all, the author is a high school student, so it is good to be able to write like this. So can the author update more, otherwise the nest will starve to death (¯¯crimin).

It is a rare book among the second creations that writes about daily life. The descriptions of daily life are very detailed, especially the descriptions of food are very delicious. In short, the daily descriptions and plot speed of the whole book are very comfortable to read. If you are tired of the fast pace, you can read this book. [Laugh]

Look at me The eyes begin to meet, and the heart beats suddenly, like a running deer, hitting the chest, unable to restrain itself. Hearing the sound and seeing the shadow, the mind is suddenly confused, the pulse is rapid and pounding, like a drum in the chest. As soon as Fang Qi looked at it, his heart suddenly jumped out of his chest, his chest was pounding, and he was so short of breath that he couldn't speak. As soon as I think about it, my heart will beat fast, like a deer being struck, like a string being frightened, and everything is in chaos. Review of the novel "The Blue Files: The Freshman of Fifth Grade in Abydos": A roll of smoke and clouds describe life, and the joys and sorrows are all related to emotions. Thousands of world conditions are hidden within a square inch, and all kinds of human hearts are cultivated in ink. The plot is full of twists and turns, and the meaning is long and durable. The lingering thoughts are still there when I cover up the scroll, and I feel like I am walking together with the story. This book is very wonderful. I hope all book lovers will read it carefully. It is so rich.

I have read dozens of BA fanfics, and I can only say that this is the best one. There are not many flaws overall. If I have to say it, there are a lot of repeated sentences, but judging from the author of Rancheng Relic (who often writes tens of thousands of words a day), it is acceptable. Five points for it

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Ba's weekly articles are so cool, I just like to read daily heart-warming Ba articles like this

The author is simply superhuman, with 8,000 words in one chapter. He is simply superhuman. His writing style is also good, and the plot is okay. Of course, there are some flaws, such as too many modifiers that can be reduced appropriately (personal feeling). There are also some sentences that are repeatedly used. You will know it after reading it. Overall, it is a ba novel worth reading (it will be a little depressing in the early stage. The author said in the introduction, okay, go read it now)

This book is highly recommended because the character creation is very specific, there are slight changes, but they are not OOC, and the plot has been changed, but it is also very reasonable. Overall, it's a masterpiece worth watching.

Very nice! ! ! Even though I didn't know much about BA, I was deeply attracted, and the food was written in such a way that it really made me hungry. The writing of emotions is also more delicate and step-by-step. It won't start with "I don't want to eat beef". It is suitable for people who like daily life. I saw it posted, so it's five stars, but it's not enough! ! ! Dear Chef: Seeing words is like meeting each other, showing trust and comfort. Liking your rice is probably the most arbitrary and unreasonable thing in the world. It is not about weighing the pros and cons, or being motivated by sex, but suddenly having your rice makes me worried and unable to let go. You are the extraneous branch in my stable years, and the sun, moon and stars in my ordinary life. Whether it's the sunrise in the early morning, a small thought at noon, or a night filled with stars, I want to spend it with you. Don't doubt why I like you, just like fish fall in love with the sea, birds fall in love with the sky, I don't quite understand what this means, I think it's like breathing, no need to practice, just because it's you. By the way, if you still have some food, remember to send it. [Thinking][Admiration][Thinking][Admiration][Shy]

It's so beautiful, the characters are very richly described, Chef Hoshino is blessed