Blue Archive: The Fifth-Grader of Abydos

To the author: BA is a rare and excellent article, but I have some suggestions. 1: "It's not... But/is...", "It's like saying that the weather is nice for a few days" and the like are used too often. You can try changing them and using more sentence patterns. 2: The description of the environment, character status, etc. Is too long, which can easily lead to a poor impression. You can divide the long description into appropriate paragraphs to make it look more comfortable. Finally, I would like to thank the author. It is precisely because of such a creator that we can taste such delicacies. Also, boss, what will we eat when you go to school?

I see that most of them don't have many problems. Generally speaking, it can be regarded as a relatively good Blue Files fanfic, so can you add some knives? I feel like eating a knife [laughing] [laughing]

Plain language supports smooth logic, and the reading experience is good. The most important thing is smoothness. I hope the author can still maintain this style. It is one of the more thoughtful BA novels I have ever seen.

The daily interaction is very high-quality, and there is a sense of wisdom from the Tang Dynasty. I hope it is not copper-awake.

I rarely post book reviews, but this book is really good. Then I will be Shennongba for once. The single heroine Hoshino is a hundred-variable and invincible. This is the label of the system. The protagonist has a three-dimensional personality, and the character setting is based on information, which is good. The plot development is also quite reasonable, with foreshadowing, and the author's writing skills are also very good. The explanation of the resurrected prison dream is absolutely perfect. In addition, the setting of the predecessor is also a tragic and great character, which is still very distressing. The setting of bloodthirsty (blood thirst) is also very interesting. Although the plot is not there yet, I can blindly guess the plot of biting Hoshino later. Summary: Hoshibiuniu Haichi (Updated!!!!) Author, please update it quickly... QAQ Hiss... It seems that the author is also a student? ... Okay then QAQ

The writing is very good, the description of the environment is also very detailed, and the action is also very detailed. The characters' emotions are also good, although the plot may be weird for me personally later on (if you want to know which plot I'm talking about, check the time I posted it) But what I'm talking about here is writing and so on. Maybe the plot may be a little strange at first glance, but after all, it's just the beginning of the main plot, so I personally can give it five stars. Seriously (but all the beautiful second-generation stories are like this, and everything around them revolves around these beautiful things) Seriously, face, punch, punch (so... For us, okay? Keep up the quality!) Arm

An excellent BA article, the description of the environment is really awesome, and the characterization is excellent. The only flaw is that the writing is a little ink in some places, and it is not properly detailed, but these are not problems 🌷🌷🌷

As for the writing, I feel good about myself. There aren't many flaws in the plot, or none at all. Except for the plot, which is a bit slow, everything else is very good. The emotional line is also quite rich and daily-oriented, and the combat part is also very good. The above is only my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

Super pretty! The setting is interesting, the content density is moderate, the description is delicate, the writing is excellent, and there is an uncle!!! It feels very comfortable to read, and the system is also my favorite type. I highly approve of the protagonist's invincibility and positive attitude toward life, as well as his appreciation for Hoshino~ Let's make Abydos for a lifetime! One of the best books I have seen so far, the other one is "Azure Files: Joining Abydos at the Start", the authors of them are also very kind. A must read!!! Congratulations on finding the treasure!

The writing is very delicate, the emotional line is well developed, and the characters are three-dimensional. This is an advantage. There are also three lightning points in my opinion. The first one is that the protagonist confesses to Hoshino that he is a time traveler. I personally think this is not very appropriate. I think Hoshino's reaction is a bit too idealistic, but it is handled well. I personally feel that it has some impact but not too much. The second one is that the protagonist's friends in the original world have traveled through time. To be honest, When I first saw this, I wanted to abandon the book, but after a little while, I felt that the main line of this book was no longer ordinary, so it is not unacceptable to have another time traveler in the plot outline. After all, we don't know what the author will write later. Mainly, I personally think that this kind of double time travel, especially another one in the middle, is rarely handled well, but I choose to believe the author, the third one, this is completely It's a personal factor, maybe it's MiHoYo's fault. There are many settings that I think can be manipulated more, but the author didn't write about them. For example, the protagonist's bloodthirsty and being in the research institute. I think it's completely possible for the protagonist to have psychological trauma. During a blood-sucking time, Hoshino discovered that his inferiority complex was fully expressed. He could run away from home to deny himself, and then let Hoshino redeem himself. Then there is the resurrection of Meng-senpai. Didn't he consume his own mystery? I think there can be a plot where the protagonist and Meng-senpai encountered a strong enemy and got into a hard fight. However, the protagonist resurrected Meng-senpai and almost consumed half of his power. In the end, I originally wanted to give this book four stars, but after looking back, especially Chapter 79, and seeing the author's writing style, I actually feel that this shortcoming is not a big deal.