Tomb Robbers Notes: Thunder Hidden Sea

The novel is so good that I don't know what to say better. The heroine's struggles and changes are seamless and natural... And no one is OOC. I feel that the plot changes are also quite organized, at least more carefully handled than most fans who follow the original work to handle these turns, scenes, and some settings. Some fans will subjectively portray Wu, Jie, Zhang and others to more closely match the stereotype, but there must be some differences in actual perception. The author allows the protagonist to lead readers to think about the character from his own point of view and express the personality traits of other characters. This requires more time to polish than other fans. The author did not try to be lazy and copy the character and costume design mechanically, which is really a rare QAQ. There is also no deliberate attempt to create a "handsome" character atmosphere for certain characters (this refers to the fact that the protagonist does not marvel at their appearance when looking at these influential figures). It totally hooked me! Including feedback on the change of the heroine's attitude towards Wu Xie, this seems to me that the author is really carefully managing the heroine, the center of the plot. This heroine is an ordinary person, and the emotions she possesses are very vivid - fear, anger, fear... The author writes the story very carefully, at least when I read the current chapter. Although the segmented form may not be so popular (and it can be read happily), he can definitely be a good author who uses his brain to write novels! This novel has been included in my list of Tomato Tomb Raiders fan fiction. I am so happy waiting for the author to update a chapter every day (stable updates), but also very painful (I am a Tuen type, and I am afraid that the author will read too little and have no motivation to write). The author is definitely a very attentive person! I hope the author gets better and better! (Os: write a hundred-word comment in anger)

It's very interesting. I accidentally tied it. I think this is what a fanfic should be like. It doesn't just serve the characters in the book. It has its own thoughts, its own story, unique personality charm, and a good continuation. The characters are not OOC. I hope the author will continue to use his imagination and stick to it [please update]

The story is coming to an end. Bai Sheng stumbled from an ordinary person to the end. I would like to thank all readers and friends for accompanying her along the way, crying with her and hurting her. Some readers may feel that pure abuse of women makes people physically uncomfortable and uncomfortable. I felt the same way when I wrote it. It is not easy for her. She has no golden fingers, no system, and does not even have basic survival skills. The blood bar is bottomed out at the beginning, but! She is growing! Wang Ning said she was an unbeatable Xiaoqiang. Yes, Bai Sheng just wanted to live, and she did it. Facing Xu Qin who had swallowed the meteorite and died in alienation, Bai Sheng swallowed the meteorite. Ahhhhhhhh. This is the only gift I prepared for her (tears). My poor Baisheng was crawling around in Leicheng and bleeding. I almost died several times, and now it's coming to an end and she has become stronger, but my heart aches so much, I can't bear to end it [crying][crying][crying][crying] My five-star praise is given to my tough and brave heroine - Bai Sheng [crying][crying][crying][crying] I hope she will have a smooth journey in the future and be free from illness and disaster.

The writing and plot are online. At present, it seems to be a story about ordinary people who are unfortunate in life and accidentally enter the Tian family but refuse to accept their fate and fight for themselves. I really love the heroine's faint sense of madness after being ravaged by life. I personally feel that the characters are slightly OOC in some plots, but there are thousands of people with different faces. The flaws are not hidden, and the overall look is very comfortable. Ps. It's so good. Why doesn't anyone watch it? Teacher, please don't stop updating.

The heroine is really a person with a strong heart. Although compared to Wu Xie and others, she was an ordinary person who was completely involved in the whirlpool at the beginning, but she was able to climb out of desperate situations and stand up again after being hit again and again. Although sometimes she was pessimistic and wanted to give up, she never really gave up on herself and gave up on living. She always had the courage to start over. Although many times I feel that the heroine is a bit of a virgin, but this is not a reflection of the heroine's tenacity and not giving up on herself. No matter what she encounters, she is not coerced by hatred and anger, and insists on being herself. Although the heroine is no longer a human being, she is still born in vain. The final ending is also great. It feels like the heroine, who doesn't take longevity seriously and can say that longevity is not as meaningful as a bowl of noodles, should get the ultimate outcome that the Zhang family has been pursuing for thousands of years.

I finished reading this wonderful novel late at night, and I was lucky enough to come across this book at the end of my summer vacation. Nice! And the logic is clear and every character is well portrayed! The text portrays the scene super well! This is the most realistic plot of ordinary people meeting them that I have ever seen! Bai Sheng has no force value, but she knows how to survive. How to keep herself as a "tool" alive is really heartbreaking [almost crying] The situation in the later period finally got better and you finally stood up when listening to Lei [almost crying] Seeing that they were used as bait, as well as Jie Yuchen, Zhang Qiling and others, their indifferent looks felt real, and it was very consistent with their mood at that time. How can a tomb robber be so kind? At the same time, I also lamented that it is really difficult for Bai Sheng to be an ordinary person. No matter what the deletions or deletions are, nothing has been written. The author has written well and the organization is very clear. This book does not deserve this rating and deserves to be seen by more people. However, some paragraphs don't need to be too long, and when you read them, you won't have much desire to read on. Looking forward to the author's next work! Bai Sheng, I can't comfort you for the pain in the past, because it really happened to you, but I want to wish you less pain in the future. You will always be cared about. I hope that the light of Fatty Hodolf and others can illuminate your faint heart. Good night, Bai Sheng.

This book is really well written. Whether it is the characterization of the characters or the direction of the story, it is very detailed and full. When I was tired of books, I read it in two days. It can be imagined how wonderful and good the author's writing is. I have read many fanfics and derivative works of the stolen pen series. The quality is good. This is one of the few books that I think is very well written. I really recommend it. I hope the author will open Bai Sheng's next book as soon as possible. I am looking forward to it. If there is no next book, I would like to ask the author to write a sequel about Bai Sheng and everyone. Thank you very much [send heart][send heart][send heart] Bai Sheng hopes that you will never experience such pain again in the future. Girl, I hope your future will be more safe and smooth from now on [crying]

This is a story about what ordinary people without plug-ins and gold fingers will do to survive after being involved in Wu Xie Tinglei's plan. All the characters who appear are not OOC. As a reader, watching Bai Sheng grow up step by step and gradually gain a large number of friends, the corners of my mouth couldn't help but curl up. We are naturally kind and have a bottom line, we are gentle but not indecisive, we have wisdom and courage coexisting together. Apart from bleeding too much, this is my favorite protagonist as an "ordinary person"! (Bleeding in the physical sense) The story of this book is very well-conceived, and the writing style is fluent and wonderful. There is also a little humor from the author in many paragraphs, which allows people to have a place to breathe and relax in the extremely tense plot. I really like the author's little humor, and I am looking forward to the author's next book~

I'm going to read it. The writing is really beautiful and the writing is smooth. The personality of each character is very consistent. It is one of the best fanfics I have read so far. It is not too sadistic and not brain-burning. It turned around in the end and shocked me [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

The story of ordinary people, looking at the protagonist group from the perspective of ordinary people who were accidentally involved, is very immersive. Is the position of the heroine considered another version of Li Cu? It seems like there is a hidden agenda involved in this. It's pretty cool. I like it. It's just her body that makes me worried. In addition, I am very curious whether the teacher has really been to Tibet? The part on the road was well written.

Awesome Claes! It's a good book that was buried. It's also highly recommended. I'm still trying to read www. The author is good at describing disgusting places (?) And it makes me feel emotional all the time. It's amazing!

I really like the author's writing. It's very graphic, and you'll be brought into the perspective of the protagonist from time to time. Moreover, the author is very good and has a strong sense of interaction! I'm really looking forward to the plot at the end. The main character, No Goldfinger, has grown up from a newbie. I really see it. It's so well written that I almost cried. I must give it a five-star rating! !

Instead of following the original plot, I re-wrote a new story The story is very novel, the plot is good and interesting, but the main character is a bit miserable, he is sick from the beginning to the end, and he doesn't even know whether he is a human or a ghost. But fortunately, I was relieved in the end and could live and feel well.

I think this book is quite interesting. The heroine is really ordinary and very unlucky. At first I thought Hua Ye and the others had already regarded the heroine as one of their own, but later I saw that the heroine was still a pawn, which made me feel quite uncomfortable. Later, the heroines saved each other many times and gradually became friends with them through their experiences. Anyway, it's pretty good-looking and has a good ending. I hope they will have a good life in the future. Wu Xie shouldn't listen to the thunder and find a way to solve it.

It's so good. I won't have to go to class tomorrow so I can study this article full time at home [laughs] Can everyone please click here to take a look?

The author is very imaginative, the plot flows completely, the logic is very smooth, and the writing style is very, very good. The whole plot is very attractive for readers to keep reading. 🐮!

Logical and reasonable, worth watching

The story is complete, the plot rhythm is tight, the original part has strict logic, all the questions that arise are answered, and there is no mystery. Overall he feels aggrieved but occasionally resists, and has many insulting words about women.

Not bad, okay, okay

I love watching it. I love the crazy and ruthless character of the heroine. Every character is well written. Boss, you are so awesome [Salute][Salute]

Yes, the logic is very smooth and very nice to look at.

The content of the novel is very interesting, much more attractive than the introduction! I only read it after reading the reviews, and I almost missed it! It's really beautiful! !

It's good to watch and has no shortcomings. The only shortcoming is that I have to quickly open another book and have Baisheng as the protagonist! ! [Flying kiss][flying kiss] @

Yes, the plot is ok, the logic is ok

Really super pretty, I like this heroine

This book is really well written! ! ! ! The heroine is just too painful, I highly recommend you watch it! I really read so many, this is really a very good book

Very good pirated fanfics. After reading so many, there are really very few good ones. This one is really good.

Oh my god, it's so well written. It's a purely original plot, but it's so beautifully written that it can be watched as a sequel.

I've watched less than half of it, it's so good and soul-stirring, no matter what the plot is, I'm completely hooked now.

It's good-looking, the characters are well created, and it makes you feel immersed in the book. Some of the personal settings are acceptable.