The Fake Alpha Wolf Meets the True Alpha's Lamb

Let me talk about the number of openings here. Let me explain briefly, Some readers felt that there were too many precognition branches at the beginning. In fact, I was very happy after seeing it, because he was reading my novel seriously and was willing to give me some suggestions. I think there should be other people who have this doubt, so I will explain it here. Looking back, you will find that the protagonist has been training for a lifetime. He who traveled through time has the simplest view of death. To put it bluntly, he just lies down. This is point 1. If the protagonist's mentality is strong enough, he must fail more times. I think the protagonist who has gone crazy more than a dozen times is not worthy of using this golden finger. However, the protagonist is ordinary but not ordinary. He can distinguish people's good intentions and malice through micro-expressions and movements, and his other abilities are ordinary, so he is in the tangled state now. Living in this state is inherently very challenging. This is also the reason why the introduction says why the protagonist does not use it often. It is too difficult, so he only uses time stop instead of prediction. If he wanted to know the answer, he had someone better, and more convenient. This kind of person with a strong mentality and single-point ability will not be trusted by anyone if you don't give him a break, because they will always stay in the fantasy protection they have built, but this is how I understand it. Of course, everyone can fill in the data by themselves, and everyone can think about the appearance of the protagonist. After all, what you think is the most perfect, and believe me, even if you think it is only once or hundreds of times, it will not affect the development of the subsequent plot. Thousands of people have different faces. I just think it would be better to write it this way. There is a lot of room for movement in these things, so it does not affect everyone's thinking according to their own ideas. That's all. I wish you all good health and immortality.

As a new author, he can adapt to online writing so quickly, and his basic skills are not bad. It can be said that the future is promising. As the author's third book, this book can be regarded as a link between the previous and the following. The writing style of this book can be regarded as above average in Tomato. At least the basic logic is still clear, but this The subject matter is not particularly popular. If possible, I suggest the author write a more popular Gao Wu in his next book, and make some changes to his current comfort zone or the writing style he is accustomed to. As for the final results of this book, don't have high expectations, but don't be disappointed either.

This book is very well written. It's considered to be a grain of salt on a tomato. The reason I'm missing one star is because the author has been working hard to write the text in a B-frame, but it's obvious that the writing is not strong enough, which leads to a strong "fake literary youth" feeling when reading. I think the author can write like this in daily life. The scenes of battles and male protagonists dressing up as 13 can just be written as white text, otherwise it will be really boring, and it will be a dozen lines and eight or nine words in a paragraph. It feels like a pity. If the author had better writing skills, this book would really have something to say. There are also supporting characters who all follow the same template. They are all written in a funny and nonsensical way and have a pseudo-human feel. The length of Feng Qingyang is a bit too long (mainly because it is too repetitive, and only portrays one side of the character in so many pages, which is not three-dimensional enough for the character). Overall, the writing of the little girl is very creative and lovable, but there is still a lot of room for improvement in the characterization.

With extremely strong quality and superb writing style, this book is definitely comparable to previous books with a score of 9.6 Or above. It can only be said that the plot is slightly inferior, or that Tomato does not have as many plots as good. However, the invincible characterization and emotional expression of the protagonist in this book are more than enough to make up for it. After all, it has the guarantee of three chapters: 71, 72, and 73. Unfortunately, not many people are reading it at the moment.

The fluency of the plot, the writing style, and the details of the characters' dialogue and actions. I pay most attention to this when reading a book. They are all in this book, and they are all very good. However, I still give you a suggestion. In the exam, the description of the supporting characters is a bit too much, and the number of words is not many. It is a bit slow. If it is necessary, it is best to add a group portrait in the tag. My favorite point is the same as @Add some oxygen. Write quickly! @Want to have a holiday tomorrow

There are many typos, many gods and people, it is very magical, but it is very interesting. There are many places that I cannot understand, but it is interesting. It is only before the crack where I enter the hunting place. After that, there is something missing. It is not as interesting as before. Some places are interesting and some places are very tiring. There are more tiring places than interesting places. I really like Anwen and Chen Anan's interactive madness, but sometimes It's too crazy and looks a bit tiring, but I can accept it. There are too many pens and inks in White Mask and I almost stopped reading. I always felt that White Mask was going crazy but held back. I repeated it several times. The pure growth and polish of Hunting lacked some of the elements that attracted me before. Some places are very slow and some places suddenly jump very fast. Overall, it's good and bad. It's good-looking but not perfect.

It's a masterpiece, needless to say, author, come on, come on, come on, come on, I'm sure it will become a phenomenal novel. It's really incomparable and beautiful. It's a masterpiece, the author. I also want to see the climax. Can you just say how to get hurt, and then talk about the climax where thousands of years of loneliness suddenly burst out?

It's very interesting, author. I traveled back from five hundred years later. The future reality will slowly merge with your novel, and people from other worlds will invade the earth. In order to win, they catch you before you can write the ending, after which the true catastrophe for humanity begins. Five hundred years ago, the genius Mr. Albajirk invented the time machine, and Hajigao, the top executive of the People's Federation, ordered me to go back to the time before everything happened to find you. In order to fight back against the aliens, we need to get all the weaknesses of the aliens from your novel immediately. Please update 500 chapters a day immediately. For the survival of mankind, you must update more! No, they're going to find me! You must update more, your information will make mankind great again!

A very comfortable sense of fate, inexplicable vision of Kindred, this is simply a fairy tale, I must write it down! Sheep Spirit: Are you there, dear hungry wolf~ Wolf Spirit: I'm in Little Lamb~ Yang Ling: How long will we stay together? Wolf Spirit: Longer than forever. A long hunt!

Alas, I don't know how to describe it. Anyway, it's very beautiful. I'm not very good at praising novels, but I definitely know how to criticize them. This is really beautiful. I really like the feeling this book gives me. It's warm, cheerful, and happy. It feels like watching two children playing and growing up relying on each other. It gives me a wonderful feeling. There is also an indescribable feeling. When I read this book, I don't feel like I am smacking my lips. It's like a smile. I kept smiling while reading this book, which gives people a very comfortable feeling... 💕