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Let me talk about the number of openings here. Let me explain briefly, Some readers felt that there were too many precognition branches at the beginning. In fact, I was very happy after seeing it, because he was reading my novel seriously and was willing to give me some suggestions. I think there should be other people who have this doubt, so I will explain it here. Looking back, you will find that the protagonist has been training for a lifetime. He who traveled through time has the simplest view of death. To put it bluntly, he just lies down. This is point 1. If the protagonist's mentality is strong enough, he must fail more times. I think the protagonist who has gone crazy more than a dozen times is not worthy of using this golden finger. However, the protagonist is ordinary but not ordinary. He can distinguish people's good intentions and malice through micro-expressions and movements, and his other abilities are ordinary, so he is in the tangled state now. Living in this state is inherently very challenging. This is also the reason why the introduction says why the protagonist does not use it often. It is too difficult, so he only uses time stop instead of prediction. If he wanted to know the answer, he had someone better, and more convenient. This kind of person with a strong mentality and single-point ability will not be trusted by anyone if you don't give him a break, because they will always stay in the fantasy protection they have built, but this is how I understand it. Of course, everyone can fill in the data by themselves, and everyone can think about the appearance of the protagonist. After all, what you think is the most perfect, and believe me, even if you think it is only once or hundreds of times, it will not affect the development of the subsequent plot. Thousands of people have different faces. I just think it would be better to write it this way. There is a lot of room for movement in these things, so it does not affect everyone's thinking according to their own ideas. That's all. I wish you all good health and immortality.

As a new author, he can adapt to online writing so quickly, and his basic skills are not bad. It can be said that the future is promising. As the author's third book, this book can be regarded as a link between the previous and the following. The writing style of this book can be regarded as above average in Tomato. At least the basic logic is still clear, but this The subject matter is not particularly popular. If possible, I suggest the author write a more popular Gao Wu in his next book, and make some changes to his current comfort zone or the writing style he is accustomed to. As for the final results of this book, don't have high expectations, but don't be disappointed either.

This book is very well written. It's considered to be a grain of salt on a tomato. The reason I'm missing one star is because the author has been working hard to write the text in a B-frame, but it's obvious that the writing is not strong enough, which leads to a strong "fake literary youth" feeling when reading. I think the author can write like this in daily life. The scenes of battles and male protagonists dressing up as 13 can just be written as white text, otherwise it will be really boring, and it will be a dozen lines and eight or nine words in a paragraph. It feels like a pity. If the author had better writing skills, this book would really have something to say. There are also supporting characters who all follow the same template. They are all written in a funny and nonsensical way and have a pseudo-human feel. The length of Feng Qingyang is a bit too long (mainly because it is too repetitive, and only portrays one side of the character in so many pages, which is not three-dimensional enough for the character). Overall, the writing of the little girl is very creative and lovable, but there is still a lot of room for improvement in the characterization.

The fluency of the plot, the writing style, and the details of the characters' dialogue and actions. I pay most attention to this when reading a book. They are all in this book, and they are all very good. However, I still give you a suggestion. In the exam, the description of the supporting characters is a bit too much, and the number of words is not many. It is a bit slow. If it is necessary, it is best to add a group portrait in the tag. My favorite point is the same as @Add some oxygen. Write quickly! @Want to have a holiday tomorrow

With extremely strong quality and superb writing style, this book is definitely comparable to previous books with a score of 9.6 Or above. It can only be said that the plot is slightly inferior, or that Tomato does not have as many plots as good. However, the invincible characterization and emotional expression of the protagonist in this book are more than enough to make up for it. After all, it has the guarantee of three chapters: 71, 72, and 73. Unfortunately, not many people are reading it at the moment.

There are many typos, many gods and people, it is very magical, but it is very interesting. There are many places that I cannot understand, but it is interesting. It is only before the crack where I enter the hunting place. After that, there is something missing. It is not as interesting as before. Some places are interesting and some places are very tiring. There are more tiring places than interesting places. I really like Anwen and Chen Anan's interactive madness, but sometimes It's too crazy and looks a bit tiring, but I can accept it. There are too many pens and inks in White Mask and I almost stopped reading. I always felt that White Mask was going crazy but held back. I repeated it several times. The pure growth and polish of Hunting lacked some of the elements that attracted me before. Some places are very slow and some places suddenly jump very fast. Overall, it's good and bad. It's good-looking but not perfect.

It's a masterpiece, needless to say, author, come on, come on, come on, come on, I'm sure it will become a phenomenal novel. It's really incomparable and beautiful. It's a masterpiece, the author. I also want to see the climax. Can you just say how to get hurt, and then talk about the climax where thousands of years of loneliness suddenly burst out?

It's very interesting, author. I traveled back from five hundred years later. The future reality will slowly merge with your novel, and people from other worlds will invade the earth. In order to win, they catch you before you can write the ending, after which the true catastrophe for humanity begins. Five hundred years ago, the genius Mr. Albajirk invented the time machine, and Hajigao, the top executive of the People's Federation, ordered me to go back to the time before everything happened to find you. In order to fight back against the aliens, we need to get all the weaknesses of the aliens from your novel immediately. Please update 500 chapters a day immediately. For the survival of mankind, you must update more! No, they're going to find me! You must update more, your information will make mankind great again!

A very comfortable sense of fate, inexplicable vision of Kindred, this is simply a fairy tale, I must write it down! Sheep Spirit: Are you there, dear hungry wolf~ Wolf Spirit: I'm in Little Lamb~ Yang Ling: How long will we stay together? Wolf Spirit: Longer than forever. A long hunt!

Alas, I don't know how to describe it. Anyway, it's very beautiful. I'm not very good at praising novels, but I definitely know how to criticize them. This is really beautiful. I really like the feeling this book gives me. It's warm, cheerful, and happy. It feels like watching two children playing and growing up relying on each other. It gives me a wonderful feeling. There is also an indescribable feeling. When I read this book, I don't feel like I am smacking my lips. It's like a smile. I kept smiling while reading this book, which gives people a very comfortable feeling... [Sending Hearts]

He and she are really similar to me To be honest, I can see through everyone just as well as them. I can control myself just like him You can't just follow your heart. At this time, the mood is at this time. Then there are many people, no matter what they are, it is easy for them to have a heart-to-heart with me the first time they meet. As long as i want Haha, tired too I don't have bad intentions towards people. It's hard for me to hate people. It makes no sense. I don't know how to love. Well 😐 I don't want to gain anything and I have no purpose. Maybe this is also the reason why others talk to me. Maybe it's something else. I feel like I'm a combination of the two of them haha

This book is awesome. I just saw the Awakening Puppet Master, and someone else learned it in one minute. He has been studying it for more than 100 years, and I suddenly thought of a joke. Human Ancestor spent his entire life searching for Courage Gu but could not find it until Brother Tiger traveled through time one day. The Gu insects around him were extremely shocked when they saw Brother Tiger. Brother Tiger was very puzzled. Later, people around him told him that the name of Courage Gu was Brother Tiger. As soon as An Wen jumped into the water, the smell of persistence and perseverance came.

I have read the highest quality novels in recent times. The characters are really well drawn. I really like this novel. It can be said that it has two strong characters. The heroine's character is a bit like Eri but with a bit of a sinister side. It's very cute. I also like the character of the male protagonist very much. He doesn't go on a killing spree like those cool novels, but he knows how to measure things. He's also not like the Madonna novels, which make you uncomfortable. Come on, keep updating more, brother who writes novels [Sending my heart]

Excellent characterization, very interesting character. The setting is slightly flawed, but overall it's harmless. It feels like it has great potential. I hope the author won't give up because of the temporary low traffic. Come on! [Praise]

How to say it? Personally, this novel is pretty good. The characterization, content, and storyline of the novel are all very good. But, how to put it? I felt that it became a bit confusing after reading it, jumping around, the story was a bit unconnected, and the sense of substitution was weak. Maybe it's because I was a little tired when I watched it and didn't understand it, but I feel that the quality at the back is not as good as the front. Worth a look

I've just finished reading it, it's well written. It would be better if it were written a little sweeter. [Send heart], then I can, oh

It's quite interesting, with the male and female protagonists flirting and fighting with other geniuses.

It's really good, it has a very natural feeling, and a strong sense of immersion. The emotional aspects are well grasped when writing, and they are not too awkward or embarrassing. Not much yet, we'll see about it later

Ahhhh O(≧口≦)O, I like it so much, I like it so much, I like it so much, I love how the male and female protagonists get along with each other every day, it really touches my heart, I love it so much, I can't describe it in words, who understands [Adoration]

"Life will be reincarnated immediately" "The reincarnation apple was chewed" "The match of the bad guy stopped burning" "The game of immortality exploded" "The marriage was successful in the 31st life" "I hallucinated after eating candy" "Hypnotism scared me crazy" "I fell in love with surprise" "The feeling of ascension is ranked second" "T was defrauded" "The coffee machine also exploded" It's really beautiful. Men get menstruation and women get crazy after seeing it. This is The nemesis of depression Q is getting a disease that you have to see, just like the five-guarantee household in the village who misses and loves the widow but can't get it, so good that tears flow out of the mouth and fill the Pacific Ocean. It makes me realize why life sleeps and why birds fly into the sky. When I took off from the balcony on the 20th floor, it made me feel like a fish in the deep sea, finding the most urgently needed toilet [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Excellent new book. It's a little awkward at first, but then the writing is super good.

Chapter 9: The author's book title is really good. Fake genius and evil wolf, fake genius and evil wolf The lamb of the true genius, I just say that it is the true genius, I don't say whether the lamb is a lamb or a goat [laughing evilly]

It's pretty good. I can't write, so I can only say it's good. As of Chapter 74, there are no poisonous points and the writing is smooth. The shortcomings are that the book is too new and easy to read. However, don't keep the book for too long, as it can easily lead to the author cutting the book or unfinishing it. It is most appropriate to kill the book once every one to two weeks.

The emotion and scene description are still excellent, continuing the fighting style of the previous part. Although the author did not write a melee master like the previous part, and replaced it with a puppet master profession with fine operation, it can be said that the combat style and scene description of the fog are very handy. There is no doubt that it is a masterpiece.

I've finished reading it, so what do the words "lie to her" and "you will die" in the introduction mean? Who said that? [Face covering] Also, why are her eyes filled with murderous intent?

The protagonist travels through the world of Great Love Immortal, insists that Gu abandons his master and flies over to recognize him [OK] [face covering] Ask a question: What is the author's score in mathematics?

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Okay, it's very sweet, but it feels like the male and female protagonists are just friends, and there's no sense of love at all. Some very intimate and ambiguous actions between the two of them make it look like pure friendship [face covering] (I don't mean to say anything bad)

This novel is really good. Although I only read a few chapters, I immediately thought of the Dragon Clan. A bad boy is very lonely, and a monster-like and innocent girl. Lu Mingfei Huiliyi

Personally, I think it's okay, it's pretty good-looking, and there's nothing serious about it.