[Exquisite long article, the grass snake is gray, the thread is thousands of miles away] [Textual criticism school] [Grand world view, with detailed supplements to the original work] [The mutual attraction of geniuses]
Hogwarts has been established for thousands of years, and the legend of the Big Four has long been engraved in the history of the school. However, no one knows that Rowena Ravenclaw left a motto in addition to the missing diadem:
[The raven can clearly see the trajectory of the stars and the lines of destiny. ]
When the eleven-year-old Heris Corvinus stepped into the castle with the silver raven mark he was born with on his wrist, he was shocked to realize that this motto was not a legend, but a destiny engraved in his blood. Silver-haired basswood is joined with thunderbird feathers, and the tip of the wand can foresee storms and crises; ancient runes connect to the origin of magic, and the keys to protection and breaking are hidden between the characters; mysterious parchment has self-revealing writing, filled with hints and warnings for the future; and the holly wood dragon heartstring wand has stood side by side with him since Diagon Alley, opening the door to the deepest part of the magical world.
The conspiracy of the Philosopher's Stone is just the tip of the iceberg. The dark magic totems glowing with purple light in the Forbidden Forest, the ancient magical nodes sleeping under the foundation of the castle, and the dust-laden family contracts of the Department of Mysteries all work together to weave a web that spans the ages.
This time, Ravenclaw's raven fluttered its wings, saw it with his own eyes, and even rewritten it with his own hands - the entire magical world
Reader comments
It's good to be civilized to have a plain and a little sweet love line, don't use industrial saccharine (seriously)
It's the kind of emotional scene that feels right in the afternoon when a gentle orange beam of light is refracted in the air due to the Tyndall effect, and two people are lying on a rocking chair leaning against each other and occasionally kissing each other. I think it's right!
Also, please update the author soon, there are too few authors who can control the sweetness well in daily life, meow, I need more Mama Vera, meow (
The writing style and brushstrokes are quite good, and it kind of makes me feel the firm power brought by the soft brushstrokes. However, the plot was a little too hasty in the characterization, resulting in fragmentation (personal feeling). Although it is a bit harsh to say this, I still hope that there will be more books with this style of writing.
It's good-looking, and it tells a beautiful story in a eloquent and plain writing style, whether it's the love line or the main plot line. The author writes in casual places and thunders in silent places. The author's foreshadowing is indeed very good [please update]
The world view and story line are very interesting, but it feels difficult to finish it. There are a lot of things buried. I hope I can finish it. This book is really interesting, not a routine book, and worth reading. Finally, please don't die, okay? [Crazy]
Don't send too many knives, please
Let me comment first, lest I forget later, the unique writing style, the first 10 chapters are very good, I hope it is pure love, two people with Ravenclaw characteristics
Harry Potter is not good at all. The emotional line is not easy to write, and the maturity of an 11-year-old is not suitable for his age.
Good-looking, tsundere and all that, it's just awesome.
I wrote the most perfect and ideal love in my fantasy. Not desire and impulse, plain beauty, pretty good
It looks good, I like it, keep up the good work, author!
It looks pretty good so far
The interaction between the protagonist and the heroine is very interesting, and the writing is also very good.
Come on, it looks pretty
Very good setting.
The potential is very good, I like the author
I hope the heroine's combat power will be strengthened.
Whether it looks good or not depends on what everyone likes. I quite like this book. If you don't like seeing it, please go away. Don't go out of your way to "wrong" yourself and then give the book a low score. .
It's well written, but it's too slow.
Even if it is placed in the entire Tomato app, this book is remarkable. If this quality can be continued to the end, it will be the god of the Tomato fandom.
Dumplings made for vinegar, a certain arrangement of beads is put on the thread, and the designed clothes are looking for the right person. If you can accept the results as a foreshadowing, you are welcome to read it. Personal understanding
Very well written! I hope you can regain your dreams and continue writing this story!
This is a really good fanfic, I hope everyone will read it.
It's very interesting to watch. Although I just watched it for a while, the presence of the three protagonists in the original work is slightly lower, but the portrayal of the new characters is very in line with my aesthetics, and the story is also quite good.
It's beautiful, one of the best HP fics.
It's really beautiful, the emotional lines are well written, and the characters are very delicate.
Very nice! There are also many interesting jokes, and the plot is also very sweet! I just like my Dayingyuan!
Not bad, not bad. I really like it, but I didn't see it listed in the recommendations.
It's very sweet, but the plot is a bit too deliberate, isn't it?
It's good to be civilized to have a plain and a little sweet love line, don't use industrial saccharine (seriously) It's the kind of emotional scene that feels right in the afternoon when a gentle orange beam of light is refracted in the air due to the Tyndall effect, and two people are lying on a rocking chair leaning against each other and occasionally kissing each other. I think it's right! Also, please update the author soon, there are too few authors who can control the sweetness well in daily life, meow, I need more Mama Vera, meow (
The writing style and brushstrokes are quite good, and it kind of makes me feel the firm power brought by the soft brushstrokes. However, the plot was a little too hasty in the characterization, resulting in fragmentation (personal feeling). Although it is a bit harsh to say this, I still hope that there will be more books with this style of writing.
It's good-looking, and it tells a beautiful story in a eloquent and plain writing style, whether it's the love line or the main plot line. The author writes in casual places and thunders in silent places. The author's foreshadowing is indeed very good [please update]
The world view and story line are very interesting, but it feels difficult to finish it. There are a lot of things buried. I hope I can finish it. This book is really interesting, not a routine book, and worth reading. Finally, please don't die, okay? [Crazy] Don't send too many knives, please
Let me comment first, lest I forget later, the unique writing style, the first 10 chapters are very good, I hope it is pure love, two people with Ravenclaw characteristics Harry Potter is not good at all. The emotional line is not easy to write, and the maturity of an 11-year-old is not suitable for his age.
Good-looking, tsundere and all that, it's just awesome.
I wrote the most perfect and ideal love in my fantasy. Not desire and impulse, plain beauty, pretty good
It looks good, I like it, keep up the good work, author!
It looks pretty good so far
The interaction between the protagonist and the heroine is very interesting, and the writing is also very good.
Come on, it looks pretty
Very good setting.
The potential is very good, I like the author
I hope the heroine's combat power will be strengthened.
Whether it looks good or not depends on what everyone likes. I quite like this book. If you don't like seeing it, please go away. Don't go out of your way to "wrong" yourself and then give the book a low score. .
It's well written, but it's too slow.
Even if it is placed in the entire Tomato app, this book is remarkable. If this quality can be continued to the end, it will be the god of the Tomato fandom.
Dumplings made for vinegar, a certain arrangement of beads is put on the thread, and the designed clothes are looking for the right person. If you can accept the results as a foreshadowing, you are welcome to read it. Personal understanding
Very well written! I hope you can regain your dreams and continue writing this story!
This is a really good fanfic, I hope everyone will read it.
It's very interesting to watch. Although I just watched it for a while, the presence of the three protagonists in the original work is slightly lower, but the portrayal of the new characters is very in line with my aesthetics, and the story is also quite good.
It's beautiful, one of the best HP fics.
It's really beautiful, the emotional lines are well written, and the characters are very delicate.
Very nice! There are also many interesting jokes, and the plot is also very sweet! I just like my Dayingyuan!
Not bad, not bad. I really like it, but I didn't see it listed in the recommendations.
It's very sweet, but the plot is a bit too deliberate, isn't it?