Shura Field, I Have a Lot of Childhood Sweethearts

Still give yourself a good review [shy] Don't worry, everyone, although it is said to be a Shura field, it will definitely end with the entire harem being taken over. Everyone wants to give me peace and happiness! The author is also very obedient and can give me any suggestions [shy]

It's okay. Lu Qingci is too strong. I suggest he strengthen the male lead. I want to see my childhood sweetheart fail.

So the characters are very good and it feels like they are really in reality! Come on! But would any girl really do this for a beam of "light" when she was a child?

I see that the writing is good and I feel comfortable reading it. Then I hope it won't be about the so-called party struggle, because I can see that each character is well described. If there is a party struggle, I will really... I hope I can take it all in, and don't have any. Regrettably, I quite like Xu Meng's little mother and tomboy that have been released so far. Although there are not many descriptions of tomboys, I really don't want Xu Meng to end up. If the description is like this, and there is a party struggle in the end to end him, I will really curse.

It's very nice and the writing is very delicate. The author took my opinion into consideration and wrote the male protagonist's ex-girlfriend from junior high school back to be a boss from the sky. The character in junior high school was like Little Sun who was very attached to the male protagonist. He found out that it was the little mother who was the reason for being broken up and started fighting. Then the little mother was defeated and beat the boss. I want to see blood flowing like a river [laughing]

I hope it's not a party fight. If you have the ability, take it all in. Qingmei is too strong, so you don't have to watch the party fight. A pseudo-harem is even more unnecessary. After all, what does Qingmei, who is so strong, have to lose?

So far, the writing is quite good, with delicate emotions.

The writing is very delicate, please don't be a pigeon, okay?

What you see is this wet and controlling mouth! [Sinister smile]

After reading this, I feel that my writing skills have improved

It's okay. It seems that there are no poisonous points at the moment. Although I haven't seen it yet, but to be honest, someone like Lu who is both strong and distinguished and can hit straight balls is beyond the standard. If he is a normal human being, the protagonist should not accept others. If there are no flaws in the character, it will be very difficult to insert other heroines into the plot. I don't know how you will deal with it, author. I will reserve the right to give six-star praise for my follow-up review.

This kind of delicate description deserves a thumbs up

Lu is a bit strong, but yandere and good-looking.

I really like the characterization and plot construction of this book. The protagonist's views are very upright, and the author's literary talent is very good. Come on!

The writing is delicate, the emotional lines are good, and the language is humorous, but the heroine feels a bit small, and 4 is basically enough. Su, long live Qing

The story is very interesting and the writing style is good. I just need the author to update it quickly. I also hope it has a good ending🤭

It feels better than the last one [laughing]

The author is going to write an if side story with a single heroine. I really want to see how the other heroines are in love but can't get enough of it. I really live in Bengbu. My roommate's name is Wang Zihan, and he is a boy. Do you know how different I am every time I see Wang Zihan appear? [Cover face][cover face][cover face]

The writing is really good, especially the psychological description of Xiao Lu and Xiao Xu Hey, I guess the author sees dozens of reminders every day and is not in the mood to continue updating. I will make a second comment today. In my opinion, this book has very good psychological descriptions and narrative backgrounds for the heroines. As a defender, Xiao Lu not only has to take care of his studies, but also has direct confrontations with Xiao Xu from time to time. Xiao Xu, as the current main attacker, is like water, moistening things silently and constantly occupying Xiao Jiang's heart. After all, Xiao Xu "understands" Xiao Jiang better. As for the character Xiao Su, although she has a secret crush on Xiao Jiang, she suffers from the fact that both parties are good friends, and the feeling of peeping on her secret love is particularly well written in certain chapters. I can only say that the author's level is online. In the fast-paced, industrial assembly line-like Tomato platform, this book is really a masterpiece. Come on. I hope the traffic of this book will slowly increase.

Don't say it. Really good-looking [eating melon]

666, Is this the author's daily life?

Someone asked me: "Why do you like reading novels?" I was silent for a few seconds and looked at him and said: "Because my youth was too quiet, and I want to see the blatant preferences in other people's youth."

The book is very good, but can you publish more of it?

The writing is not bad, and the emotions are very delicate.

Nothing more to say, the author is awesome

The writing is great. Don't stop updating. Hey

I want to see blood flowing like a river

The heroine is a bit suffocated by the high pressure of the man, but to be honest, there is really no future in choosing liberal arts. From the perspective of someone like me, I think I can still agree with the heroine's approach.

Give more sweets to little mommy, I really like little mommy

It's a very nice book, but why are so few people reading it?