From a Small Desert Lord to a Riding and Slashing Emperor

I feel that it is a bit too early to start a big event before it is fully developed. The current protagonist is just cannon fodder if he goes to the big battlefield to die. However, the general framework of the early plot is still well designed, and it is not like other similar novel authors who ignore the ideas and logistics of the locals in the other world. It is a brainless blast of troops. You recruit soldiers and horses in small numbers, and then let them integrate into your own territory little by little. The plot is logical, and the protagonist also looks like a protagonist. There is no stomach-ache plot like the female channel novel. It looks pretty good. It is a mainstream novel about cavalry and slashing that is worth reading. If you are not the author, what are you doing? The good Lord's writing is getting more and more wrong? The plane of the undead? Are the dragons out? ! The protagonist's system is riding and slashing! Riding and cutting! ! Not Total War Warhammer! ! ! Why do two completely different things come together? ? ? What kind of settings are you randomly adding? Isn't it good if they weren't written before? What are you messing with? Forget it, treat me as blind and stop chasing! ! !

This book is really good, especially the description of Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong⚡. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. Luffy fought with Ultraman for Rem, and the whole episode was full of light. But Pikachu's skin is indeed too thick. If Yasuo hadn't blocked the 100,000 volts with a wind wall, and then followed it with a steel-cutting flash, this wave of turtle Qigong would have been interrupted. But I care more about Lin Daiyu's words to the Avengers: "Brother Baoyu, are these weirdos wearing leather jackets here to rob the Grand View Garden?", Which shows that Lin Daiyu's words to Iron Man⚡ are flying in the sky and unable to come down. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes are like being there.

If you say five stars, it may be regarded as a brush, so I gave it four stars. This book is written with great feeling, and it is relatively good among the horse-and-slash novels in Tomato. The combat power is in line with the imagination of another world. The top soldiers from the Calradia continent are also good at it. I hope the author can keep writing [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh] The purpose of following up reviews is to encourage the author, and to worry about being considered as a brush review. After all, Tomato reviews are sometimes not trustworthy, and a good book may be given a negative review because of one or two points. The author is encouraged to do so.

The author's writing is quite good, and it feels like watching an anime. But as a novel, it would be a bit too cumbersome. After all, no matter how much you imagine, it's a picture you've never seen before. After all, it's not right. If it were an anime, it would definitely be great. Novels are now quick reads. Few people watch that long. Mostly just a cursory glance. The author writes very well. Come on, come on, come on. Keep updating. Say important things three times Compared with other products with the same frequency division, it can be said to be quite excellent. The evaluation of 6 points is at least rigorous. The score is too low, at least 7.5 Or above. With such a low score, many people don't have the patience to read it. The main line is too long. It is recommended that you don't write such a long main line and create more branch lines.

It seems pretty good so far Withdrawing the previous five stars and good reviews, starting from the second volume, the protagonist became the narrator and the system became invisible. I wanted to build a new world view and main plot, but the control was not good and the writing was a mess. It's all water, from 60 to 104, which is more than 40 water, and the protagonist only killed a few undead. (A kingdom, more than a hundred provinces, countless dukes [smile]) And finally, I don't know how to explain the system soldiers. Why not change it to people in this world who default to the protagonist's soldiers, so that it doesn't feel strange and abrupt, and the system space can also be smoothly written into it.

The author's structure is good, the world view is also very grand, and the writing is also very good. At present, I have two questions. One is how to compare the soldier level with the combat power of various monsters and aliens in the back. Otherwise, it will be useless to write about the soldiers in the back. One move with super powers will kill a large area.

If you like reading horse-and-blade books, you definitely can't miss this one. Although the progress is relatively slow, the description is exquisite and this is the only one. If the author wants to keep updating, the guaranteed word count may be more than 5 million. Two updates a day is too little. Ten updates a day. I don't want to keep books. If I keep them, I will forget them easily.

It's okay, pretty good. As a fan of horse-riding and slashing literature, I still give it good reviews.

Very nice riding and slashing story ദ്ദി˶>ω<)✧

One thing to say, I really like this recruitment method and narrative rhythm. Before, I read Lords of the Oasis by Jifu Lao Zhao. The recruitment method is actually similar to this kind of recruitment. I feel that the two books are also similar. They both have some fantasy elements combined with riding and slashing. However, his one is cutting one and this one is cutting two. If you like this book, you can also read Lords of the Oasis. Even the beginning is the same. The beginning is a territory in the desert

It's okay but there are too few chapters.

Not bad, the development is well-founded [laughter]

You can summon Aserai troops I suggest calling out the Nord royal guards.

Highly recommended! The writing is delicate, relaxed and logical, and the character and psychological descriptions are also good. I like the author's rich and detailed descriptions of each city and village, which is very helpful in shaping the background of the story. The description of the scenery and the appearance of the characters can make you feel that the author is an aesthetic person. I really like this book. I like this book so much. I feel that the author's thoughts are incredibly delicate. I really like the little details that make the background and characters more three-dimensional.

The writing is very good, but the plot progress is too slow, there are too many extra details, and it even looks like a group portrait. Everything else is OK. The battlefield scenes are described very well.

Uh-huh, although there are some shortcomings, the author is very persuasive. Basically, he is correcting all the mistakes in the early stage, and he is just reading the system text. Why do you care so much? So the author needs to work hard! Don't stop updating! ! ! Don't stop updating! ! ! Never stop updating! ! !

Not bad. It can already be seen that the pace is slow. The author's writing is quite smooth and detailed. I can't write 5 million words at this pace [laughing] Although reading Li Qinwu's book has raised my taste to several heights, it does not affect my rating of 5 points [like]

It looks good, but the pace is too slow. But this is not a problem with the author's technique, but a problem with the author's preservation of the manuscript. I finished reading more than 300 chapters in more than a day. There was no skipping chapters in the early stages of the Northern Territory, and the story of the treasure at the end was skipped a bit, mainly because I wanted to see early what benefits I could get from handing over the key fragments.

Not bad, the rhythm and writing are okay

I feel that the writing is more atmospheric, and it is not a mindless book. Anyway, it seems to have a good balance in the early stage. I hope that I can maintain the balance and write in the direction of a long novel.

Well written, very nice riding and slashing novel

Pretty good, pretty

It's a high-quality book on the riding and cutting circuit.

The Great Battlefield was written very well, I read it in one sitting

The writing is delicate and beautiful [laughs] Five stars, tomato gold.

It's okay, but the summoning of troops was not handled well. There should be a better reason [face covering] and the most important thing is that the development of the protagonist is so slow.

It's too slow. When will Winter War be finished?

It's very smooth and doesn't smell like AI. I wonder why the rating is low.

A very good knight-errant novel. Anyway, from my personal experience, I feel pretty good

Good looking, love to see more