Fast Travel Animation: the Pesticide System Helps Me Win

There is a lot of plot in the early stage, one chapter has several thousand words, and then it gradually drops to more than 2,000 words. The story is smooth and readable, and I also added a lot of my own original settings. The author's writing style is okay. It can be seen that he has a certain writing foundation but not much. The plot is of a sudden humorous type of comedy. It is not abstract and funny throughout. The heroine has a good personality. Also, I like to see the relationship between Su Wanli and Shi Wang. Shi Wang's heart is gradually moved. The two of them don't quite follow the pattern of romance novels. Their relationship progresses step by step. Shi Wang seems to be the one in a superior position, but he is actually lured to death by Su Wanli. Su Wanli feels like a weak fishing beauty on the surface. The author's writing takes off every time he writes about the relationship between the two of them. I suspect that the author himself is also addicted.

It's almost tied. The biggest feeling this book gives me is that the main plot advances too slowly. It always talks about some things that are present and missing. Maybe the author wants to foreshadow something, but it didn't make me feel very excited, including the battle scenes and reversals. The author is better at telling stories, and his rendering skills are okay, but there is no sense of immersion. As for the original characters, the portrayal of the female supporting role Su Wanli is a bit pity. In the early stage, she was a very wise woman who dared to argue with Li Hui about human beings and the universe. However, the further I looked at it, the more I felt that the portrayal became more and more flat, and she only focused on love. At the same time, I admit that the cp line between Su Wanli and Shi Wang, the white-cut and black-faced little white flower x world master, is indeed interesting. I hope that if the author wants to concentrate on developing this line, he will polish the emotional line well, so as not to miss every point in the end. Let's talk about the other two original characters, Luo Qing and Chen Chen. These two characters are flat, extremely flat. I feel like I know what they want to do as soon as I see these two characters. Luo Qing is a little better than Wen Qing, because Luo Qing's character who goes crazy when she disagrees with him is quite memorable. Compared to Wen Qing's greasy man character, Luo Qing will act as a complainer, which is better. Overall, I gave it four stars because the characters are very fun to interact with, and I am very satisfied with the heroine and the author's perspective. I hope the author can continue to polish the script.

I recently dug out this quick-travel fanfic and it was so satisfying. Who knows? The heroine didn't just travel through time and start a harem for no reason. She had her own mission, so she traveled to various worlds. The first world is Ye Luoli! The heroine really doesn't engage in love. She relies on the pesticide system and IQ to get through the fairyland. She is not Mary Sue at all. She is used to reading sweet pet stories. It's really cool to focus on her career like this! The emotional lines of the supporting characters are also very good. It's delicious and delicious. I look forward to the follow-up! [Blowing kiss]

Chapter 6 is tied, and it is still worthy of 5 stars for fellow Ye Luoli fans. It's not a Mary Sue, it's not a dark protagonist, it's not in love, it's a purely funny heroine with a bit of a bad mouth. I like it a lot hahahahaha. Except for some places where the writing is a little awkward, it's okay and tolerant. I hope the author can write better and better.

It is recommended to start reading from Chapter 5 to Chapter 6. The fighting in Chapter 5 starts to get more advanced, and Chapter 6 is about the real and fake Yan Jue line, which is quite delicate. The heroine really doesn't engage in romance, and it's quite interesting to complain and hurt others, and it's also quite cute to interact with the heroes. I feel like the author is a bit anti-Mary Sue, and the villain is the Mary Sue system and the host.

I really like watching the heroine and Pang Zun fight.

I feel like all the members have a bit of a sarcastic streak, and the writing is really good.

It's good to watch, I wish there were more plots between the heroine and the fairies.

I really like the heroine's character, she's very cute

The emotional line is very well written, and the praise is for the emotional line.

I like abstract protagonists, the heroine is super fun

The plot is compact and full of jokes. You can laugh while watching the protagonist fill the cup.

Beautiful, very beautiful

I like the heroine's outlook on life

It's rare to see through Ye Luoli's role as a teacher. The others are all harems. I hope to write more plots with humans.

Not being miserable or being pretentious, the heroine has become the number one relationship in Wonderland with her strength 😂😂

Staying up late is almost equal, the writing is pretty good [Like]

The setting is pretty good, I prefer summoned heroes.

Pesticide hero + fairy Ye Luoli + slutty operating heroine = a source of unstoppable happiness

It looks very comfortable without CP, I hope to keep it

I like Teacher Zhuang Zhou the most. I want to see Teacher Zhuang Zhou appear more often.

Come on, come on, look forward to the follow-up plot

Very beautiful, very exciting.

I came in by chance and it feels pretty good. Now it's almost equal. I'll keep it up with new books.

I want to continue to see the relationship between Su Wanli and Shiwang, so I can write more.

The characters are well written, not too bad, and a new line of conflict has been added.

Some places are quite humorous and worth reading.

The author is writing more and more smoothly. Come on👍I hope the writing will be better and better.