I Expose Entertainment Industry Scandals and Become the Top-Tier Star of Gossip

The following content is only my personal opinion and not malicious (it can only be evaluated from the perspective of a reader who loves to read online articles). There is a bit much content, but the part of me that feels deeply about it hopes to see a better book next time. First of all, the starting point of this book is okay, uncovering the dark side of capital and giving the truth to the audience, but there are still areas that can be improved. Secondly, um... How should I put it, the perspective is too single, as if I am writing Su Xiaogua's famous Vlog (personally, I feel like it is a vlog from a system perspective). It's like an article with no eye-catching features. I feel like I'll forget it after reading it. The plot is too bland (at the moment, the only plot that I personally have an impression of is the system helping her out of trouble and triggering the fire alarm). Then there is the character image (similar to human design) that is not vivid enough (has no existence value). For example, the people around him are like passers-by, only coming out to transition when the plot requires (like fixed-point NPCs who do not have their own lives and only exist for dialogue, giving people a feeling that anyone can say anything) rather than their existence being meaningful. The meaning lies in helping other people (or being helped). Finally, there is the heroine. She has personal thoughts but not many (she feels like a puppet of the system, like a melon-exploiter who is persuaded by the system, a feeling that anyone can do it). To put it as a joke, it is like a very ordinary daily composition, like writing the diary of an ordinary person. After reading this chapter, I feel like the next chapter will be the ending and the plot is too watery. (Note: The above content is only my personal views and opinions, without any bad thoughts૮ต•̤ ༝ •̤ตა) <(_ _)>