He Dominated One Lifetime, Then Became My Wife in the Second?

Help🆘It's so sweet! They are just a young couple who redeem each other! Xiaoye is the God of War in Xiaolin's works. Because of Xiaolin's wish, the two of them traveled together to the world of cultivating immortals, and a system was bound to it. The two of them were forced to be tied together. Xiaoye was too powerful, but her mentality was too good. She did not collapse, but just continued on bravely! She is truly a worthy warrior goddess! Xiao Lin has also grown a lot. He wanted to be as powerful as Xiao Ye, so he created Xiao Ye. After entering the world of immortality, he adapted quickly and became very hardworking. He practiced with Xiao Ye. They ate together, worked together and practiced together. It really felt like an old couple! [Blow a kiss] Then Xiaoye is really cold-faced and cute [Admiration] Xiaolin is also very considerate 😌 Both of them pay attention to each other's emotions, so sweet! Super good✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧I really like this setting🥹The teacher wrote it so well😊 And it's very different from other routines. I thought they would team up to hunt monsters, but the two of them opened a shop that disassembles monsters and made a lot of money [laughing and crying] Sure enough, you have to take a long-term view ◔.̮◔✧Be good at discovering ways to make money ($ ε $ )

It should be considered a male-biased remarriage, overall it's okay, but First, some paragraphs are too long in terms of text layout. Secondly, there is still a lack of grasp of the rhythm of writing and the asymptotic progression of emotional lines. If you have written more than 10 W words to build a foundation now, then if I judge the layout based on realm, it should be at least tens or even millions of words. Based on the world the heroine has experienced in her previous life, I feel that she was touched (femalely degraded) a little too quickly, even if there were no particularly big twists and turns to break up a straight man in her previous life. At least I think that a straight man who practiced martial arts in his previous life and became a girl shouldn't be so easily conquered by a 28-year-old kid, right? Moreover, the core focus of the article about changing marriage is the mentality, especially the change of gender identity. Generally speaking, in the later stage of transition, fully admitting the heart and reconciling with oneself may be a more appropriate solution in my opinion. Confirming a relationship too early is like a fast-food story. It may be mixed with industrial saccharin to make a good sweet story, but there is a high probability that it will not become a good marriage story. (It's not that I support pulling, but it's the development process of the asymptotic relationship and the change of heart through special events after reaching a critical value, shattering "his" memories and reconstructing "her" self-awareness) In other respects, the description of the battle scene is okay, with a bit of polish, but it doesn't feel very innovative and impressive, so it's neither good nor bad. It's worth a look, it's a work with potential.

This book really exceeded my imagination. The subject matter is so novel, the plot is not cliché at all, the characters and images are portrayed in special details, and our Xiao Lin and Xiao Ye are simply a two-way redemption couple! ! ! Xiaoye is strong and has not given up on herself even after becoming a woman, while our Xiaolin has been working hard to become stronger. In order to stand by Xiaoye's side, the relationship between the two of them is really sweet. Knock on me! ! ! !

This book is the most surprising online article I have read this year! Ye Wushuang has transformed from a cold warrior god to a love girl who can cry, laugh and be jealous, and has transformed into a delicate dokidoki; Lin Mo is sincere and brave, and his "I just want to be with you" hits the heart. The daily cookies are not too sweet, and the battles are not embarrassing. The writing style is very unique, highly recommended! Looking forward to the follow-up! The author will update soon [laughs][laughs]

It would be better if it could be a little sweeter. Then it would go directly to high sweetness and it would not be able to take off.

No, it's really too sweet. The author is so good at writing.

From the helplessness of being forced to be bound to the warmth of the cold warrior god under the sunset with Lin Mo, the two support each other, practice together, and work together to become powerful. The plot is natural and smooth, the rhythm is also well grasped, and the content is absolutely not filled with water. It is super good-looking.

It feels okay, but there are not many people to see. I hope it won't be cut in half.

I love this fairy setting of two-way redemption! Xiaoye is a well-deserved god of war, powerful and transparent, and is still stable after traveling through time; Xiaolin has grown from a creator to a side-by-side partner, gentle and reliable. The two bind the system to enter the world of immortality, and their daily relationship is as sweet as an old married couple. The most surprising thing is that he does not follow the conventional method of hunting monsters, but opens a decomposition shop to make money, and his imagination is amazing! The writing is smooth, the characters are vivid, and the whole process is fun to watch. The more I read, the more I get addicted to it. It's a strong benefit!

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