Lily: Tsundere Is Born to Be a Naturally Stupid Wife

Those who like to watch lighthearted and everyday stories can come here, including sweet ones and those without knives. If you have seen Nikkaru's lily-themed novels before, you can also come here. My writing style is now trying to develop in that direction.

Emm... How can I put it, this daily life is very interesting, the characters are well controlled, and the plot also advances the main line in stages, most of which are based on daily lines. The background is also a universal and easy-to-learn magical world view. The foreshadowing is buried in different shades. The protagonist's background is explained bit by bit, and the pitfalls are filled in timely. The introduction corresponds to the previous main line, and the progress is relatively fast. It is mainly sweet. The protagonist's background is micro-sword, and the several key characters with names are also well portrayed. I'm looking forward to the follow-up development.

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First of all, this author is a "liar". The full sweetness mentioned in the first chapter is fake, but it is not a complete liar. At least the sweetness is acceptable, but there are some knife plots, but, I think it is for people who have read too many emotional novels. In fact, this kind of knife is not a knife at all, so just read it with confidence, it's not a big problem. Then let's talk about some of my comments about this novel. In terms of character creation, for girls with a "human-machine sense", generally speaking, we prefer "three-no" girls, which have a natural "no emotion expression" feeling, but this book prefers to depict a "self-enclosed" "human-machine girl", and the effect is "Naturally stupid" and "long reflex arc", I think this is quite interesting, because it will make the character's creation more vertical and deep, rather than just "dumb" for the sake of "dumb"; the other protagonist of this book is defined by the author as "tsundere witch", but in fact The attribute of "tsundere" is not obvious, and it feels more like a deliberate sense of "insincere". It may be that the author does not understand "tsundere" deeply enough, and the book feels more "scheming" and wants to bully the other protagonist's "evil little thoughts" "There will be more, and the "tsundere" attribute is not a completely failed design. I will say this next. From the current point of view, the creation of the "human-machine" girl heroine is quite excellent and unique, but the creation of the "tsundere witch" is slightly worse, but it is not harmful. In terms of plot design, the general background of this article is set as a "magical world", but it is based on the structure of the real world, so there is a certain "real sense of fragmentation" (this is a positive evaluation, not to say that the novel does not conform to the actual sense of fragmentation). The plot in the article can probably be regarded as an article of "unilateral pursuit and single female protagonist narrative perspective → important clues and characters trigger key events to promote emotional development → insert another protagonist's perspective to supplement the narrative → daily activities promote the deepening of the relationship" article The development of the plot does not deliberately create ups and downs, but chooses to use the protagonist's personality as the driving force to promote the plot. This is the highlight. How to do it? It is the "tsundere" I mentioned earlier. Through the secondary characters' subtle mentions and stimulation, the protagonist is forced to face the "tsundere". This attribute forces the protagonist to face feelings and triggers the subsequent plot. This is a very good plot advancement method. Using character attributes as plot triggers is undoubtedly a reasonable and excellent narrative method. Emotional description, this type of article, emotional drama is the first one. I think it is a pity for the shaping of emotions in this article. Because the author really wants to write a sweet love, he deliberately reduces the conflicts and "knife-containing" plots that stimulate emotions, and deliberately reduces the proportion of these plots that will cause readers to be emotionally depressed. However, I think whether a relationship is real, necessary contradictions and conflicts are necessary. It does not require uniqueness, but the kind of plot that makes people deeply feel sad or uncomfortable is not What is missing is that the two girls obviously have the element of "mutual redemption". It is clear that both girls have bad life experiences, but there is really very little foreshadowing of their emotional descriptions in their own lives (there are not many descriptions that can make people sympathize and resonate). These are not written to make readers sympathize, but to amplify the light of "redemption", so that the sweetness of the later ones will be infinitely magnified by the previous injuries. This is one of the important means of highlighting the authenticity and delicacy of emotions. All in all, this novel is a very good sweet novel, but some of its shortcomings are real, but they are innocuous. If I insist on saying that it has shortcomings, I can't find any big faults. It may be that the delicateness of the emotional depiction is a bit lacking. Oh, by the way, the sweet scenes are also very unique, so I won't go into detail on this point. After all, this is just what I think is unique, so it is subjective. Overall, this is a rare sweet novel, and it is worth recommending.

I don't know how to describe this book. It gave me the same feeling as when I was a child when my brother took me to watch Dragon Ball for the first time. I was inexplicably attracted. From the moment I saw it, I knew I needed it. I was attracted by its beginning and impressed by its content. I was in a state of rapture for the author's characterization. My body was squirming on the bed. Finally, I can only say: great artists are creating immortal chapters! Author, you must work harder and write better [crying][crying][crying] It's really beautiful [crying][crying]

It's so good to watch. The author really describes the emotional changes of the two protagonists very delicately. The supporting characters are also just right. There are also super divine characters' moods and first-person perspective. It's very touching and full of feelings when you watch it.

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Boss, come on, we like the books you wrote very much. Your words are very visual, and it feels like watching a movie when reading. And the delicate texture between the lines can completely immerse me in the world you created. Boss, we will accompany you!

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It's great. The author uses delicate brushstrokes to almost perfectly show the emotional development process between the protagonists. Watching them complete each other and redeem each other is very moving. I look forward to the author's new work.

Tsundere has withdrawn from the environment? There are so few people

The inner analysis of the arrogant young lady, and the transformation of emotional understanding are delicate and smooth. Xiao Baimao's unreserved trust and attachment are very endearing. I hope the author can deal with the brother's plot reasonably and untie Xiao Baimao's heart knot as soon as possible. The author writes very well [send heart][send heart]

It's not bad, it's quite sweet in daily life, but low-level demons are also demons, and low-level martial arts are also martial arts. I think it would be better to add more fighting. Without fighting, wouldn't it be an ordinary youth campus? There are also fewer characters on the scene, and the world view has not yet been fully developed. In short, the flaws are not concealed, and I look forward to the follow-up [Blow kiss]

Tsundere is meant to be suppressed hard by humans and machines. The content is so sweet. I just love watching the little witch get fucked.

The content is very concise and clear, and it's really a good read. More

Well, Barbie Barbie~

Okay, it suits my taste well

Gu Gu Gu Gu Ga Ga, so strong

It is also very human-like [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

According to Xiao Baimao's calm approach, the results after marriage are already obvious [laughs]

So far it looks sweet Humans and machines are created for a reason Come on, good luck

It's good to watch. I love watching it. I just started watching it now and it feels very good. It's really interesting.

The writing is very nice. I really like the reverse perspective and first-person perspective interspersed in it, which allows people to better understand the emotions of the character. It also allows the heroine to upgrade from a human-machine feeling to a distinctive character background. In most third-person narratives, it is really nice to intersperse this first-person reverse perspective. It makes the article very delicate and emotional.

The plot is ruthless, very sweet, and the emotions are very delicate.

Look, the natural and tsundere are so cute, meow! I want to see the little witch being trained hard! ! !

Very good. Why is there no one?

[Working in progress] The cold-faced big sister and the tsundere little witch are delicious😋😋😋 I want to see Tiantian's sticker, sticker, sticker, sticker Is it better to be 10 a day for the author🤨

Good-looking, sweet overall, naturally silly and tsundere, so easy to drink, the little witch was trained hard by Xiaobai like this

The tsundere tried to die but was beaten to death by a natural idiot. The sweetness is beyond the limit. Highly recommended! [Full] [full] [full]

Super sweet, super beautiful, a treasure novel in a tomato!