HP: Falling in Love with Sirius at First Sight

It looks great and feels very novel. It's the first time I've seen something like this. Sirius travels to the real world and then goes to film Harry Potter. It's so interesting. I look forward to the meeting and sweet love between the two.

It's pretty good, the subject matter is relatively new. I think I've read quite a lot of HP fics. The writing style of this one is not very exciting, but I can tell that I'm a newbie, but it's really good. I've only skipped through more than 30 chapters (I'm a little impatient and often jump to read the chapter names). The subject matter is really new. I haven't seen this kind of HP fic before. If If I were to rate it among all the books I have read, I would probably only give it a four-star rating, because I can see that there are still some setting problems, but I think reading novels requires a little more brainlessness, and I really admire the author. I also wanted to write some of this kind of fan fiction before, but I couldn't persist and usually gave up after writing two or three chapters, so I want to give the author more encouragement! I believe the author's writing style will get better and better! ! ! Come on come on

Sister, please read me another article. I'm dying. Please, sister. I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like my whole body is shaking. I can't breathe. Please, sister, just read me one article. Just read one article. I'll do it again. I won't touch it anymore, please. Sister, really, just one episode. I swear I will never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep. Sister, I beg you, just read another one (screaming) (twisted) ( Dark crawling) (crawling) (twisting) (darkly crawling) (rolling) (crawling violently) (twisting) (tilting head) (sitting still) (slowly retreating) (smashing things hard) (gnawing) (dark juicing crazy ) (crawling) (crawling) (quickly bending) (twisting and folding) (returns to the original shape and screams) (crawls again) (paces) (turns back slowly) (laughs softly) (crazy and attacks regardless of target) (explodes) (eviscerates the abdomen)

Very novel setting, I like it very much! ! ! Sirius is very flirty, and the heroine's baby is also very cute! Looking forward to the plot of returning to Hogwarts, please do your best ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧

! ! ! The subject matter is very novel. It's the first book of this type that I've read. It's so sweet, so sweet, so sweet! It's so ambiguous, oh my god, the author must stick to it and don't stop updating [please update]

It's the first time I've seen such a novel theme [Adoration], please give me more encouragement [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] (Personally, I feel that the paragraphs in the article are a bit too frequent, and when I read it, I feel that the structure seems simple) [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts]

It's pretty good to watch. The heroine doesn't seem to have a specific personality. She only gets along with Sirius on the phone. It's always ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

The author writes very well! ! Personally, I think the quality of the author's writing is also very good, the characterization is also very good, and the plot development is very natural! Anyway, I like it very much😍! ! I was mesmerized as soon as I discovered it and couldn't stop watching it. Just watched the latest chapter in an hour😭! Not enough, not enough at all! ! I hope the author can add more chapters, it's so good! ! ! Now all I can think about is what it would be like for them to meet! !

Seeing their daily life is so warm [shy][shy], it feels like they are real, I really hope it is real in reality [crying][crying], and it doesn't feel OOC at all. This is the feeling. I must keep up the good work [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Super super super super invincible so good looking🥳

I'll post a book review after I finish the tasting hehehe [blowing kiss] Come to review [laughs] It's sweet and reassuring😋 Yes, our Sirius is so flirtatious [give me heart] and the cute heroine is also cute [give me heart], which is very in line with my mentality of wanting to eat sweet stories after eating too much. I want to write a long comment for this article but I don't know what to say. Please forgive my lack of words. I'm glad that the article shows that the relationship is progressing very quickly, but when did the heroine know that Sirius was Sirius after they met immediately? I just asked. In fact, I am very curious about how the next article develops. Is it also about the love life of the male and female protagonist? [Thinking] Is this the author's first book? Although the author's writing style is relatively green, the emotions expressed are really cute. Sometimes the protagonist plays my daily life🌝 (only the part where I scream and express my excitement🌝🌝) I can tell that the author must love the heroine very much [Blows a kiss] The description of her beauty shines before my eyes like a short historical essay (I can't stand the adjective of me) Is it too easy for pure praise to make the author proud and then stop updating [Thinking][Thinking] Progressing too fast is actually an advantage and a disadvantage. I thought Sirius was a little more cold-blooded. After all, his handsome girl should have love letters everywhere. Of course, the author's tag has already stated the potential red flags, so there's no need for me to say this. Well, I admit it, I'm just trying to make up the word count. Ps. So many words should be enough.

I decided to give myself a five-star review to motivate myself to write more and save manuscripts.

The portraits written in big letters are really good, and the character traits are very clear.

I like Sirius's energetic feeling, and the heroine is also very cute, in line with the behavior of a star chaser [laughing] Looking forward to the next development of the story [adoration]

Very beautiful and cute! Sweet!

Laughing like a mouse, so funny

Help, my teeth are going to fall out [shy]

It's very good-looking. I haven't put it down since I clicked on it. The three predators traveled through modern times and played themselves. It's really good-looking. Highly recommended.

It's very beautiful and the author's writing style is very delicate! ! !

Why haven't you arrived to meet me yet? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Then I will wait obediently [crying]

The big writing is great! 😍The chat history between this heroine and her best friend is not much different from the chat history of my best friend.