I Reject Your Coming

Sure enough, it is still the same! ! ! Nice! ! ! It's true of Lao Li's style. From the beginning, it feels like it's improved compared to before, and then the plot becomes really exciting! ! ! ! !

Lao Li's new book still has the same taste as before. The description of the world view slowly revealed in the group portrait and the outline of the characters' psychology are still as delicate as those of the offenders. At the same time, we can also see Lao Li's progress in the description of battles. But there are still a few points I would like to mention (maybe it is my personal opinion) 1. From the plot of this nightmare arena, we can completely see the plot of the previous offender Ning Fan and his team entering the arena (I forgot whether it is called the arena) I only remember that it was Ning Fan and Lingshi who entered the arena with crossbows). The manager of that arena at that time was very high-level, but the manager of this nightmare arena was portrayed in a very embarrassing way, saying that he held people alive to death. However, when the four protagonists won, they peed their pants instantly, fearing that the angels would directly do it to him. The contrast was too great, and the previous description was a bit redundant. 2. For the four people Zhao Yan, it is a bit too abstract to throw away the cheating walkie-talkie at the beginning (you have an advantage but don't be sure). I can understand that you have your own dignity and pride, but in the end if you lose, you should at least stand and die instead of begging for mercy from the protagonist. I feel that the roles before and after The gap is too big. In the previous plot where Ning Fan and his gang entered the F70 area and the weak defeated the strong, I remember that there was a strong team with several hundred souls. After the team was disintegrated by the protagonist, the captain also died in the battle. On the other hand, the portrayal of Zhao Yan is very abstract. These are two points that I personally don't feel very good about at the moment. They are for reference only. I also wish Lao Li's new book will get better and better!

It's really good to read. It's a lot better than the last one. If possible, I hope the author can adjust his status and don't give up. I haven't read so many chapters in a novel for a long time since the end of The Offender. Today, I accidentally discovered that the author has published a new work, which suddenly pulled me back into the pit of novels. The difference in data may also be due to the lack of promotion. I only saw it after searching. It may also be that the name is not so attractive. You can try changing the title. The introduction is not particularly fascinating to read. The central theme could be more prominent. However, from the many foreshadowings laid in the early stage, it can be seen that the author has put a lot of thought into it, and the writing style and scene description are better than the previous book. It's a lot better. It's just that the main character may be the leader of the team when he appears, so he lacks some growth lines and detailed psychological descriptions like the previous book. But these can gradually improve with the help of the character Aunt Wu. However, if the author feels tired, he can only say that he is looking forward to the new book. It is a pity. The story structure and wits of this book are quite exciting.

The protagonist is calm and has an online IQ, and his writing style is no weaker than the one who made the mistake. Come on, author! It feels like the author rarely describes the protagonist's psychological activities and reasoning. It's all a kind of psychological description of the protagonist's growth that is easy to do without being as touching as the one who committed the crime. I wanted to see the protagonist's reasoning about several camps, his plans for the future and the development of his own strength. I felt that the protagonist was still stupidly guessing that the woman kept him 30% degraded for a long time. Normal people can guess that the longer you maintain it, the stronger you will be. They can also guess that 70% of them were fine before. What else are you afraid of? I think this kind of inner monologue is very necessary, otherwise it would feel like the protagonist is being pushed around all the time, unlike the thinking a team leader should have!

After reading the reviews for a long time, they are all five stars. Why is the rating so low? It's super good-looking. You can tell that the battle scenes are much better than the previous book. It's very exciting. It's effective after being accumulated for so long. I wish I could update it more quickly.

It's good-looking and has the same style as the previous one, but I personally like "Arrival" more. Compared to the early days of "The Offender", the writing is obviously better. The introduction says there is no harem, so it should be a single female protagonist, right? Is the heroine Qiqi?

It also has to be Lao Li's book. It looks very appetizing. The style feels not much different from the previous book. It is easy to read. The background is also slowly unfolded, rather than being crammed in all at once. There is still a lot of suspense, and I have a strong desire to read on. The suspense left at the end of the chapter will not be revealed immediately, leaving time for thinking [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]. Although I can't guess anything. This book will also go straight to the end, okay?

After reading this book, the world view is quite large. Many nightmares have not introduced level abilities. The protagonist's character is very comfortable and does not hide his abilities. He is decisive in killing. The only flaw is whether it can be updated!

I beg you, update the author, aren't you abandoning us fans? Really, we really want to keep watching, so don't be reluctant, okay? I really beg you, author, don't force me, I'll go down to you first to give you a knife! ! ! ! 🥺

Actually I like this one better than the new book [I almost cried]

I think it's good. The poor data is because they don't know how to appreciate it. They like to watch fast-paced movies. I like slow-paced movies that come out little by little. I didn't skip a word. It was very good. Alas, it's a pity that it has been discontinued.

To be honest, everything written by Li Ma is quite to my liking. I followed his Under the City from the beginning to the end. I can read this book, and the rating should gradually increase. Please be patient and take a look.

So far, it seems that the early writing is better than the previous book. The protagonist is serious but also a little funny. It is quite interesting.

The book I finished before is quite good, keep following it [Blow Kiss] The Offender is really super good-looking, and while I still haven't finished it, I found that I fell in love with it again after reading a few chapters [Admiration][Admiration][Admiration][Laughing]

Still writing in the old Ma style, the male protagonist has a great character, not a virgin, decisive in killing, I like and support him

From the last book to the present, it must not be unfinished. Come on, author, keep updating, it will definitely be much better. As for the fighting scenes, if it doesn't work, you can use the new AI to enhance it. There will definitely be many people watching it.

Lao Ma's books are still top-notch

From the last one to now, I can't fault the quality.

It looks good, but there aren't really any big problems. To be honest, it's just a bit of a riddle (within an acceptable range), but the setting is slowly unfolding. The bad data feels more like a promotion problem. It's a pity to stop updating, but I still wish Lao Li's new book a satisfactory result.

Come and be popular! It's very good-looking. I feel like Jianshu is not as big as the previous one, but I can read it.

I really like the author, and I couldn't even find similar articles. I found out that the author has a new work, and I immediately supported it. After listening to the 50 chapters, the story is still very attractive to me! I just have a question for the author. Why is the title not "you" but "you" [Salute] Woo woo woo, why did the author stop after listening to 107? It's really hard for me to find such articles on Tomato. Others are mostly cool articles. I think what I'm best at is the design of multiple forces. I like reading this kind of article but can't find other articles. I will be the author's most loyal fan. I will wait for you to come back [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Good-looking, the protagonist kills decisively

Just watched it, okay

Those who come from the top must have five stars. I am a fan of old books.

Yes, if there is no female protagonist, I will update it seriously and the male protagonist will act decisively.

Teacher Ma, I think that as long as there are no typos in your book, this kind of book will definitely be top-notch in Western Persimmon. Although the back of Shangcheng is a bit crumbling, there is no doubt that it is good-looking.

It's very beautiful. Why is the data of such a beautiful novel so poor? Why doesn't the platform push it? The author should not stop updating [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Master, I have studied this new book of yours almost ten times. The more I read it, the more interesting it becomes, but the data is so bad! Do you have to wait for the book test? [Smile]

Dude, make some room.

The Li family still doesn't raise idle people