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I feel like the emotional scenes are not very well written, but the plot is okay. It's pretty good to watch. I always feel that the emotions don't flow very naturally. I don't know why. I feel that the emotional scenes are a bit awkward, but the plot is okay. It's really, really true (＾v＾)

Is the teacher married? Teacher, this book is so good. It's a blast on my XP. I can read more than 30 chapters in a day, which is not enough. Teacher, can you read more? Please, author, please, I only have about 50 chapters left to finish reading. I won't survive tomorrow! ! Teacher! ! ! After reading your article, everything else is tasteless. I look forward to your update. I will update 200 chapters a day, is that okay? (´;;`) Teacher, you must keep updating!! [Crying] This book is the best one I have read in Douluo Dalu\(//∇//)\!! I beg you to update, teacher!!! [KISS][crying][Please update] In my life... I have seen too many authors abandon articles, discontinue updates, and disappear... I had no hope for authors of books like Douluo, until I saw you! ! ! Baozi must continue to update! Author ~ How can I live without you! [Crazy][crazy]

Overall, it's very interesting. I really didn't expect to find a fanfic about my favorite character on Tomato. I'm very moved. The author has written out the tenderness of Qin Ming very well! Anyway, I see beauty. It's just that the emotional line is a bit abrupt. I always feel that Qin Ming suddenly likes the protagonist, and the progress is a bit fast. In the novels I have read before, the fastest progress is usually the love at first sight between the two parties, but obviously this is not the case. According to the rhythm of the previous writing, the relationship between the two should be slow and progressive, but the author may not have controlled this degree well, causing some readers to feel a little awkward. However, the relationship between the two is still very good. The plot is generally very good. In my opinion, the pace is just right, neither too fast nor too slow. It's quite comfortable to watch. The story line of the protagonist is pretty good. The twin top martial arts spirits are very enjoyable to watch. All in all, this is a very good work and worth watching!

It's good-looking, very good-looking. The main character in this book is not powerful alone, nor is the main character very strong. He also grows up bit by bit from the beginning, and there will be setbacks in the middle. The protagonist is also very generous, and the CP is also very, very easy to beat [shy]

What can I say about this book? The plot is well connected and coherent, but I think some parts are too brief, which makes the subsequent feedback seem pale. For example, the emotional scene between the protagonist and Qin Ming suddenly becomes a teacher-student relationship. It is a bit abrupt, and the emotional expressions are rigid and unnatural. I think the character creation is good. Qin Ming's words and deeds are very consistent with the character. Maybe the protagonist is short and I can't see the specific character of the protagonist. Also, maybe I'm used to slow daily reading, but I think the plot of this book is a little too fast, and the emotional line starts to develop in just ten chapters. I really think it's fast (I haven't read the Douluo Dalu novel, so don't criticize me/so don't compare it with the original text). Despite these obvious shortcomings, this book is still very good! It's so cool (*▽) (because I just saw the Dugu chapter now and I'll review it after reading it!)

The main character's adventure seems quite enjoyable, but the pace of the plot is a bit fast, and the relationship line moves too fast. I feel like I fell in love with it before we knew each other for a long time, and then confessed my love for no reason, and then I was still underage. The relationship in the early stage was not laid out, so I felt weird and uncomfortable every time I interacted with each other in the later period. If you ignore the emotional line, this book is not bad. The plot and characters are not obtrusive, and the original characters are not too OOC. The author's writing style is a bit green, but overall it is okay. I prefer a plot with a smooth flow. If you like a fast pace, you can give it a try.

I hesitated for a while whether to press the score, but after much thought, I still didn't. It's pretty good. Although it may step on some people's faults, it's really okay for me. It's still pretty good to Tang San. It's just that it lacks a bit of opportunity and it's not friendly to the master, but I strongly support it. The relationship between Chen Yu and Qin Ming was written a little too fast at the beginning, but it was pretty good and they could quickly enter the sweet love stage. The final battle is indeed a bit twisty. ❗There are spoilers ahead, so read with caution❗ The whole army was about to be wiped out and only the protagonist was left. Qin Ming stood in the fire to stop the Golden Dragon King, which really made me cry. The protagonist went back in time and went back to the original world, which made me want to give the author a knife. But fortunately, life and destruction came back, and the God of Time also set time back on track. Only Qin Ming and Chen Yu knew what happened specifically. It ended successfully. Maybe the only regret is that Bibi Dong had already agreed to Qian Renxue, but his soul was still eaten by the Rakshasa God.

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It's really good to watch. I've already finished it, so I don't want to overrate it. It's really good to watch, but its pace is relatively fast. I found out later that the author just wanted to write it myself at first, and then adjusted it a little bit later. It's really good to watch, but some of the content was out of season for me [scrolls]. It's really good-looking, super sweet [laughs], and it also rounds out some of the points in the original work. There are quite a lot of protagonists, but the enemies are also quite strong.

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Personally, I think the writing is very good, the descriptions are very detailed, and the subject matter is also very novel. I have never thought of this kind of setting before, but it suits my appetite very well, and it also satisfies my appetite. I can't stand other Douluo fanfics with two male protagonists. To sum up, it is very well written [Sending my heart] Give it a try [I'm about to cry]

I sincerely praise this second Douluo work with Tang San as the core in the first season! The author's writing style is particularly delicate and smooth, and it reads refreshingly and naturally. There is no messy and redundant description. Every sentence of the plot is just right, and it has a strong sense of substitution. The logic of the whole text is very rigorous. The character behavior, plot development, and combat power settings all fit the character of Brother Yu. The characteristics of a young man who is calm, gentle, affectionate and trustworthy, and who sticks to his heart are vividly portrayed without being broken or abrupt at all. Among the vast number of Douluo second creations, this one is definitely a top-notch masterpiece! The author not only understands the core of the characters in the original work, but also perfectly integrates the original protagonist's plot line with Tang San's main line. The connection is smooth and natural, and the plot rhythm is relaxed and moderate. There are no outrageous plots or forced cheating routines. All the plots are well-founded and very enjoyable to watch. It can be seen that the author's writing skills are solid, his conception is very thoughtful, he respects the original work and has his own creativity. It is a rare high-quality second creation. It is enjoyable to watch the whole process, and it is really worth reading carefully! Although it is a bit exaggerated, it is indeed delicious. I would like to encourage the author [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][KISS]

It feels like the protagonist is the savior. After saving this, he will save that, and after saving yours, he will save yours. I took a chance, but I feel it's harmless After reading this novel, I found that Teacher Qin Ming is still too cute [shy][shy][shy] Xiaoxue and her mother can be regarded as he after them. Xiangxiang and Ma Hongjun are absolutely he. Both of them have gone to the God Realm. The God of Destruction and the Goddess of Life can finally go out to play. [Before leaving, I still thought about expanding the God Realm [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]] I wrote the beginning of Season 2, but it's just a one-person review. I really like [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It does look good. Indeed, it would be better if it was not the main attack. The main attack would be fine, but why Qin Ming? When I think of him, I remember that his face in the anime is really not suitable (｀Δ´)!

The author is also awesome. I haven't read such a good-looking book in a long time. Qin Ming is so awesome😋

It's very good-looking. First of all, it's very refreshing. It's quite satisfying just to watch it. Secondly, it is awesome, the logic is not bad, and everything that needs to be explained is explained. It is very smooth to read all the way. It is super suitable for people like me who have been ruined by fast reading. Finally, everyone comes to see it, yes (I heard that the ratings are to be suppressed, so okay, one less star is really good😋)

It can be regarded as a two-male Douluo fan who has reached the passing level. Of course, there are a lot of plot holes and abrupt emotional progressions in the article, but the process progresses very quickly and the overall plot is complete and can be read at a glance.

The author, your writing is very good. I have read so many people, but I am not satisfied, because except for Yu Xiaogang, no one else has recommended it. I have recommended it to everyone from all walks of life, but now I am in a dilemma. I can't stand this point and I can't stand that point. I recommend all villains and all, and I also support all decent ones. I also love the supporting characters, and your writing is really good, author. Sorry, I really can't stand it anymore

Super pretty! This is my favorite fanfic, bar none. The original characters are clearly not against Tang San and the others, and the plot is not just about fighting, but also interspersed with emotional lines. At the end, I was really touched to see five couples getting married. It was a complete group portrait, and the ending is also very good. The extras are also hard to put down.

It's so beautiful😭, I only watched the anime and didn't even finish it. The writing is very good, but I can't recommend it in the square. I hope it can be solved soon. Good works can be seen by more people O(∩_∩)O~💗

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The structure is very complete, the plot is full, and the characters are well created. It can be said that everyone has the best ending. The relationship between the main characters is described very delicately, and the plot is full of ups and downs. I even cried at the last point! ! ! ! Very very very very very very very beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! You can take a look [love][love][love]

Under what circumstances should I score points? There should be no need to suppress the 6.7 Rating now, right? Then I give it five stars. The story is very smooth and comfortable to watch. It won't say that you feel so much that you don't want to read it after reading half of it, and then you stop reading it, or you just stopped reading partway through it, and then suddenly you don't want to read it anymore. I think this is just right, but the emotional line of the protagonist is written a bit too fast. Everything else is fine. I recommend it.

It's been a long time since I've seen such an excellent fanfic, I really like it

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It took me three days to read this book. I haven't reviewed a book properly for a long time. The author's writing style is very good. The protagonist is very vivid and perfectly integrated into the Douluo Continent. The more novel one is the protagonist Qin Ming. I really like it. When I watched the anime before, I thought he was really gentle and beautiful. This book just hit the point where I read the article.

This book is really, really beautiful. I love it so much. Please read it now. The author is so awesome, please update it quickly!

Highly recommended! The writing is very clear. Although the emotional line is a bit fast, it is very interesting.

It's good-looking, it saves most of the regrets, and it's a happy ending in the end. It's very friendly to the protagonists and most of the supporting characters except the master. However, it doesn't say what happened to the master later, so it's not too cruel to him.