Douluo 1: I Awakened a God-Tier Support Martial Soul

I feel like the emotional scenes are not very well written, but the plot is okay. It's pretty good to watch. I always feel that the emotions don't flow very naturally. I don't know why. I feel that the emotional scenes are a bit awkward, but the plot is okay. It's really, really true (^v^)

Overall, it's very interesting. I really didn't expect to find a fanfic about my favorite character on Tomato. I'm very moved. The author has written out the tenderness of Qin Ming very well! Anyway, I see beauty. It's just that the emotional line is a bit abrupt. I always feel that Qin Ming suddenly likes the protagonist, and the progress is a bit fast. In the novels I have read before, the fastest progress is usually the love at first sight between the two parties, but obviously this is not the case. According to the rhythm of the previous writing, the relationship between the two should be slow and progressive, but the author may not have controlled this degree well, causing some readers to feel a little awkward. However, the relationship between the two is still very good. The plot is generally very good. In my opinion, the pace is just right, neither too fast nor too slow. It's quite comfortable to watch. The story line of the protagonist is pretty good. The twin top martial arts spirits are very enjoyable to watch. All in all, this is a very good work and worth watching!

Is the teacher married? Teacher, this book is so good. It's a blast on my XP. I can read more than 30 chapters in a day, which is not enough. Teacher, can you read more? Please, author, please, I only have about 50 chapters left to finish reading. I won't survive tomorrow!! Teacher!!! After reading your article, everything else is tasteless. I look forward to your update. I will update 200 chapters a day, is that okay? (´;;`) Teacher, you must keep updating!! 😢 This book is the best one I have read in Douluo Dalu\(//∇//)\!! I beg you to update, teacher!!! [KISS]😢[Please update] In my life... I have seen too many authors abandon articles, discontinue updates, and disappear... I had no hope for authors of books like Douluo, until I saw you!!! Baozi must continue to update! Author ~ How can I live without you! 😫😫

It's good-looking, very good-looking. The main character in this book is not powerful alone, nor is the main character very strong. He also grows up bit by bit from the beginning, and there will be setbacks in the middle. The protagonist is also very generous, and the CP is also very, very easy to beat 😳

What can I say about this book? The plot is well connected and coherent, but I think some parts are too brief, which makes the subsequent feedback seem pale. For example, the emotional scene between the protagonist and Qin Ming suddenly becomes a teacher-student relationship. It is a bit abrupt, and the emotional expressions are rigid and unnatural. I think the character creation is good. Qin Ming's words and deeds are very consistent with the character. Maybe the protagonist is short and I can't see the specific character of the protagonist. Also, maybe I'm used to slow daily reading, but I think the plot of this book is a little too fast, and the emotional line starts to develop in just ten chapters. I really think it's fast (I haven't read the Douluo Dalu novel, so don't criticize me/so don't compare it with the original text). Despite these obvious shortcomings, this book is still very good! It's so cool (*▽) (because I just saw the Dugu chapter now and I'll review it after reading it!)

The main character's adventure seems quite enjoyable, but the pace of the plot is a bit fast, and the relationship line moves too fast. I feel like I fell in love with it before we knew each other for a long time, and then confessed my love for no reason, and then I was still underage. The relationship in the early stage was not laid out, so I felt weird and uncomfortable every time I interacted with each other in the later period. If you ignore the emotional line, this book is not bad. The plot and characters are not obtrusive, and the original characters are not too OOC. The author's writing style is a bit green, but overall it is okay. I prefer a plot with a smooth flow. If you like a fast pace, you can give it a try.

I hesitated for a while whether to press the score, but after much thought, I still didn't. It's pretty good. Although it may step on some people's faults, it's really okay for me. It's still pretty good to Tang San. It's just that it lacks a bit of opportunity and it's not friendly to the master, but I strongly support it. The relationship between Chen Yu and Qin Ming was written a little too fast at the beginning, but it was pretty good and they could quickly enter the sweet love stage. The final battle is indeed a bit twisty. ❗There are spoilers ahead, so read with caution❗ The whole army was about to be wiped out and only the protagonist was left. Qin Ming stood in the fire to stop the Golden Dragon King, which really made me cry. The protagonist went back in time and went back to the original world, which made me want to give the author a knife. But fortunately, life and destruction came back, and the God of Time also set time back on track. Only Qin Ming and Chen Yu knew what happened specifically. It ended successfully. Maybe the only regret is that Bibi Dong had already agreed to Qian Renxue, but his soul was still eaten by the Rakshasa God.

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It's really good to watch. I've already finished it, so I don't want to overrate it. It's really good to watch, but its pace is relatively fast. I found out later that the author just wanted to write it myself at first, and then adjusted it a little bit later. It's really good to watch, but some of the content was out of season for me [scrolls]. It's really good-looking, super sweet 😄, and it also rounds out some of the points in the original work. There are quite a lot of protagonists, but the enemies are also quite strong.

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