Double-Traveling to Hogwarts, My Mortal Enemy and I Changed Our Lives.

The author's writing style and ideas are great, I like it very much Generally speaking, there is no OOC. I can't figure out how the cp line between Snape and Black will develop. Moreover, the author especially likes to bury threads, and the scenes change very quickly. People like me who read quickly will always go back and read it. Until now, Harry is "transforming" his father (it seems to have no effect) and Draco is teaching seriously (?). Sometimes I feel that Draco is mature and sometimes I feel that Draco is still young and a bit messy (maybe because I can see quickly)

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good DeHaven. The plot and characters are all good, and the emotional handling is about the same. I hope the author can stick to it [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

I particularly like this Deha book. It fits the setting of the original work. The author also provides additional explanations in parentheses (⑉°v°)-♡. In the past, either the young master liked the savior, or the plot suddenly became awkward and the emotional line progressed too fast. This book is relatively slow-moving, and the plot and emotional changes of other characters are also well-founded. The author has made great progress, looking forward to updates (*^o^*)

No one can reject an excellent fanfic. The overall rhythm of this book, the control of the plot and the description of each person's image in the group portrait are very accurate. To be honest, even the description of Deha's position was the same as my original intention of liking it at the time (the author explained the reason why he stood up for Deha). Because of Harry, I hope that he will be deeply loved and that he needs to rest mentally. The hatred between the Predator and Severus does not favor anyone. Their bad treatment of each other is an equal description that is not found in other books (of course, the highlights and characters are also very accurate. Peter even restored it without overly belittling it, just depicting his timidity and his personal excellence according to the facts, cautious and meticulous), and the relationship between Deha and ggad will also develop relatively quickly, and it is really well controlled! The layout of the hidden thread is also very interesting, and the author's own explanation of Deha's plot is also delicious. The whole book is of high quality. If you like Deha and want to see a more restored version of the Marauders and Severus, it is definitely worth a try!

The characters basically don't have OOC, but Deha doesn't show any respect to their father [laughing]. It doesn't shady the other characters. It's very interesting, but the emotional line is a bit slow.

The big article may not get the popularity it deserves, but I will keep chasing it. I think persistence is already very powerful when the popularity is sparse, and the setting of the article can also be said to be novel. At least it is the first time I have seen this kind of setting. Two sworn enemies get along in a strange time, and they have to face the possibility of surprises in the future. Outside of the situation, their relationship was cultivated slowly and step by step. I think the description of the pro-age period is very good. James and the others were considered assholes in their youth, but Snape was definitely not passive. Otherwise, how could they have such a life-and-death relationship with each other? I am looking forward to the next plot direction^ω^

Overall it's good, with delicate descriptions and rich emotional descriptions. It's worth reading if you like dual teachers. There is a problem with the full text. There are too many descriptions. I feel like I am trying to make up the number of words. The words are very gorgeous, but there is almost no focus. It is recommended that they be deleted appropriately, which will affect the reading experience a bit.

How should I describe you? Is it the warmth of summer or the coldness of winter, I don't even think about it. I should interpret it from another perspective, from the autumn harvest to the beginning of the next season. In winter, I hide the seeds deeply and let them pass through the song of time and bloom romantic flowers again in spring.

I rarely see a subject like this where the adult Harry and Draco travel back in time, or even teach their parents. There is nothing to question about the writing of this book. It is quite good and it makes up for a regret. It allows Harry to see what happened to his parents and his godfather when he was a child, real people when he was a child, rather than understanding them through other people's words. After that, Harry and his generation are given a truly perfect ending. Not so many people have to die, and Harry does not have to go to his aunt's house.

Dear friends, this book is the original work, how beautiful it is! ! They are so happy, everyone is so happy, love really reshapes the world, and leads to the greatest magic in the world - love! Although the author's language is biased toward Chineseness, this is only a minor flaw and is innocuous. Please feel free to watch and read.

Good looking, love watching, more updates✌︎˶╹ꇴ╹˶✌︎ The characters and plot are very docile and smooth~ Well, 🉑enter(„• ֊ •„)੭ Boss, I will update another 100 million chapters. Do you dare to update 100 chapters at once? It scares me (◍•ᴗ•◍)

It's really beautiful, and the descriptions are very delicate. The emotional line between Draco and Harry is so smooth and natural, and it doesn't feel too abrupt. The description of the characters of the four brats from the same generation is also very realistic. James's emotional and psychological description of Lily is very consistent with the situation at that time, and it is not OOC at all. It really makes me feel soft to see that Severus can have a happy childhood. This is how it should be. Wowoooooooooooo [crying] [crying] [crying]

Super pretty! I have been chasing this book for a long time, and here I want to say that the author will do his best to update it. He will update one chapter when he has nothing to do, one chapter when he is hungry, one chapter when he is sleepy, one chapter when he is tired, and one chapter when he goes out to play. One day has passed like this ʕ•͈⚇•͈ʔ. I emphasize this book again YYDS˶>ᗜ<˶

Oh my god, Sirius and Severus, oh my god, how can they be together? They have fought with each other. I feel like they have a deep hatred and will never stop. Okay, and I feel that it is impossible to fall in love with someone. Well, how should I put it?

Oh my god, this is awesome, you know that? Very beautiful, you know? Right. I can't describe it, can you tell me more about dog bats? This is probably the first book I've read about dog bats, because I've only read about dog bats before.

ദ്ദി˶˃ ᵕ ˂ )✧Another catching-up article, joyful and painful~ The author greatly appreciates the update! ! ! Looks good, faster and faster! I really want to see the next plot! (•́⌄•́๑)૭✧

Super pretty! Love this deha! However, it seems that the last one has been discontinued. I hope this one will stick with me! It looks great, come on!

Great, we have saved the dog bat.

Very nice. Especially beautiful.

Come on, write fried chicken well [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's beautiful and interesting. Go check it out [Like][Like][Like][Like]

Pretty good, the characters are not OOC

It was so delicious that Erjuan started to shed tears to Deha. Woo hoo hoo..., "Everything is forgotten" [crying] [crying] [crying]

I only took a closer look at the introduction after tying up. Hahaha, there is actually a dog bat. I said that I was a little confused when I saw the recent updates. I almost thought I was a pervert.

The delicate style is very creative. At least I will fall in love with Harry after reading it.

It's really nice to watch. They don't come together very quickly, which makes it feel less abrupt.

The characters are quite restored, the main plot is not too abrupt, and the development is reasonable. (Stuttering)

The author's subject matter is very novel, and he has a good grasp of the plot and characters. It is really super good-looking. This rating is still a bit low for this book. I am so proud of it, madam. Come on, madam.

Quite pretty Young couples like it

The personalities of all the characters are very distinct. The character's name is also correct. I didn't say anything right from the beginning. The two people are tired of each other. Very suitable for people like me.