I Transmigrated Into Honor of Kings, and the System Gave Me a Drift Template from the Start?!

Overall, the core setting of this story is actually very gripping, but the actual presentation still has some areas that could be polished. The pace of the plot is too fast, and many key plots are mentioned in one stroke. It lacks enough details and emotional rendering, and the reading lacks a sense of immersion. In addition, there are some typos and omissions in the text, which occasionally make people feel uncomfortable. It is recommended to read through and proofread the most critical ones. The problem is still the setting of the protagonist's combat power. It's really cool to have it maxed out at the beginning, but the crushing plot throughout the whole process lacks the twists and turns of growth and struggles. It doesn't really contain his opponents or difficult to solve dilemmas. It's easy to fall into the embarrassment of "being invincible is boring", and the subsequent attractions will also be weakened. In fact, you can add some restrictions to the protagonist's "invincibility", such as triggering conditions for the ability, side effects after use, or setting up a weakness that he cares about, an opponent who can defeat him through resourcefulness. In this way, the tension and visibility of the story will be greatly improved.

Very nice.

The portrayal of the male protagonist made me laugh. Apart from that, I still really like the movie. When the movie was released, I was just about to retire, and I didn't expect that I was still a yandere.

The process is a bit fast