Legend of the Dark River: Chang Si Xiaoyao

It's well written. The heroine is really strong and smart, but the emotional line is a bit stiff. Once she encounters the plot related to Su Changhe, she feels like a different person, somewhat separated from her character. However, the emotional line is very small (or even negligible). The main plot is basically the heroine causing trouble and changing the plot. The main plot is really brilliant, so don't worry about it.

It is worth recommending. The heroine is really a Big 2.0, And she also combines Erha's "Let go". It made me laugh to death. The child is so quiet, he must be acting like a monster. I'm talking about you, Mu Siyao! [Eat melon] It has been tied now. Si Yao really has his own plan and counts every step. She and Chang He really belong to a strong alliance. The two of them have eight thousand tricks, but Mu Yu really belongs to their traction rope, otherwise these two rivals will be overturned sooner or later.

After reading this novel, I felt quite surprised. There are some parts that are not popular with the public. Although the heroine has a system, she can't become stronger with just one click after getting the skills. She has to practice, study, and learn by herself little by little. Then seeing Su Muyu and others learn faster, she will envy their talents, which is very interesting. And although the heroine is strong in force, she does not choose to crush her all the way. Later, she uses her brain to plan and manipulate people's hearts. The characters in Anhe are also written very well. The characters of Su Muyu and Su Changhe are very good and very beautiful! Is this a home for cats and dogs? They are getting more and more noisy. Su Muyu is speechless [face covering]

It's very interesting to watch. It's a micro-plot hahaha. It's very suitable for people who want to use their brains but don't want to use too many brains. There are definitely links to it. The emotional lines between Si Yao and Chang He are very good! ! ! For Chang He, it means that the long flow of water confirms his intention and takes the initiative to fight for it. For Si Yao, it means that he has "no roots in love" and his few emotional experiences are based on other people's "failed and bad" examples. There are no mental and emotional problems, but if the other party is Chang He, she is willing to give it a try! ! ! Si Yao is a lively magic pill in Anhe. When he comes out of Anhe, he is "Old Yinbi" hahaha. He has framed one person after another. All the vests are constantly discovered by Changhe. Many people are still alive, and many people have received their due retribution. This is really comforting, hahaha. I recommend it anyway [laughing] And the interaction between the two of them is very interesting. Changhe is not OOC at all. To Muyu, they are just magic pills and magic pills combined. Hahaha. Si Yao makes trouble behind their backs every day, and is caught, tortured and punished afterward. Hahaha

It's still very nice to watch so far! The character design of the heroine with multiple vests is also very interesting! I just don't know if Su Muyu and Bai Hehuai have a relationship? If not the best, I really like the daily life of the heroine and Shuang Su as a family of three! ! ! [Love][Love][Love][Love]

Even if you work hard, give yourself a five-point score [laughing] If you want to read a cool novel, don't come here. The protagonist himself said it was a show-off, so you can tell that it's a show-off. It's okay to pretend to be a deception in front of outsiders. It's normal to be a soft self in front of your loved ones. What on earth are you expecting a cow cat raised by a Samoyed and a Bigger to do something earth-shattering? Take a look at Lightning Protection, everyone, please, don't end up giving bad reviews with the point of Lightning Protection, this is a free novel, free~

The writing style is relaxed, the plot is subtle, and the characters are fleshed out, giving everyone a happy ending. The heroine has brains, strong martial arts, a lively and interesting personality, and her interaction with Shuang Su is also very interesting. That's right, the relationship between Chang He and Chang He has changed a bit abruptly, and they can't get along with each other. It might as well be all about family ties...

It's good to watch, especially the daily interactions between the heroine and Su Changhe are very interesting.

Come on, come on, I'm really looking forward to the next episode

The best written Dark River fanfic, not OOC at all. The heroine has a really good personality.

It's well written, and many of the plots are very imaginative. They are angles that I have never thought of, but when I think about it, they feel very reasonable. The writing is good and you can follow it.

It's nice to see Mu Siyuan's out-of-the-box character. In contrast, Su Changhe looks more stable.

The author's writing style is very good, and the characters are vividly portrayed. Come on, author Dada [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

It fits Su Changhe and Muyu very well. I really like the daily life in the underground river~ It's really awkward after the underground river line

I came across this article in a book shortage. So far, it's pretty good. The author's writing style is very good.

It looks good, I wait every day to see how Sisi will be sanctioned

Good-looking, good-looking, super good-looking

Come on, teacher, look forward to the plot behind

It's good to watch, the plot is very interesting, and the characters are vividly written [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's super, super nice, thank you to the author⛽

Why is it so beautiful? [Shy] The author's writing style is very good, the plot is smooth, there are no surprises, and it's a blast.

Nice! I hope there won't be any abuse later

Come on! Keep writing

Good-looking, good-looking, very good-looking

There is no OOC in the character design, and there is new hope in Dark River

The writing is very good, many lines have call backs.

It's pretty cool. I haven't seen any flaws so far.

This is my favorite work. The content is true, delicate, philosophical and innovative.

It's beautiful to watch, and the interaction between the heroine and Su Changhe is particularly fun [laughing]

Very beautiful [laugh][laugh] Si Yao and Chang He, the warmth between Si Yao, Chang He and Mu Yu, a real family reunion, making up for regrets [love][love][love]