Zhang Wuji Replaced Murong Fu to Make up for All Tianlong's Regrets

It's very good. I feel that the writing is very consistent with Zhang Wuji's character. Is it because you have read too many novels about giving away girls? What's wrong with people being devoted to their wives? A real harem is a highly toxic OOC. If you want to see a harem accepting girls, I suggest you watch Wei Xiaobao.

The writing is very good. Come on, the author. The characters are very close to the original characters. It doesn't look too dramatic and the storyline doesn't collapse. It's a very good fan work. But if you don't want to play Zhang Wuji as the heroine in Tianlong, you might as well have Zhao Min travel through time. It would be fun for the two of them to wander around the Tianlong Jianghu together.

It's okay, the plot is very good, and it makes up for the regrets of various characters The shortcoming is that the author underestimates Zhang Sanfeng and his Tai Chi Tai Chi, the Great Movement of Heaven and Earth, and the Great Movement of Stars and Stars all have similarities. The Great Movement of Heaven and Earth can be regarded as the pro version of Dou Zhuan Xing Yi, and Tai Chi is even more like the pro max version. Both Star Movement and Great Movement of Heaven and Earth have internal strength requirements, but Tai Chi does not have such restrictions. Therefore, as long as Zhang Wuji truly understands Tai Chi, he will be able to reach the state of no moves. In fact, Jin Lao has considered the martial arts configuration of top combat figures. The Great Shift of the Universe has extremely high internal strength requirements, so Zhang Wuji was equipped with the Nine Sun Magic Kung Fu that will last forever after great achievements. Tai Chi "uses softness to overcome hardness, and four liang can move a thousand pounds" is softer, so Wudang was equipped with the Pure Yang Wuji Kung Fu, which has the highest purity and the highest purity in the Golden Book, to increase its own "four liang" attributes.

It is considered to be the best among Jin Yong's fan works. There is no cliche and mindless harem plot. The writing is not bad, but every time I write about the character's psychology and feelings, it is a bit stiff. The fighting and other things are very graphic. I hope there is still a female protagonist. In the end, martial arts novels without a female protagonist are It is inevitable to fall into clichés, and the traffic is not high when writing this way. If I want to write about a female protagonist, I recommend Zhao Min, whose soul has penetrated Li Qinglu. I think this is the most suitable. They all have the same background of imperial power. Xixia Yipintang also corresponds to Zhao Min's subordinates. At the same time, this greatly deepens the relationship between Xixia and Xixia. The combination of the protagonists is also conducive to the derivation of the author's subsequent plots. Furthermore, Li Qinglu has less writing in the original text. Characters with distinctive personalities like Gai Azi or Zhong Ling Mu Wanqing are prone to OOC. Moreover, according to the plot, Mu Wanqing, Zhong Ling and Duan Yu have already had the original incident, so it is easy for them to become poisonous. It's a pity that there is no foreshadowing or anything to pave the way for Zhao Min's death. For example, the combination of magic arrows and eight-shooting in the Xixia Yipin Hall that the protagonist encountered earlier or the unique settings of Zhao Min's command at that time, such as Green Willow Villa, can make the protagonist realize later. Overall, the flaws are not concealed.

This is a Jin Yong fanfic that suits my taste. It does not randomly add in self-created characters, but changes the events based on the original work. Although the story is a little dull, less exciting and less funny. But I support the author's efforts and hope to make more progress, 5 stars.

The setting is indeed good. For old book fans, Zhang Wuji has the life experience of Murong Fu, so it is a refreshing novel without any deliberate writing. However, there is something a bit puzzling about Zhang Wuji's attempt to bring Wang Yuyan and Duan Yu together. When I first watched it, Wang Yuyan was just like the gentle and beautiful Zhou Zhiruo + cousin Yin Li + Xiao Zhao who admired the young master + childhood sweetheart Yang Buhui. It would be useless for Zhao Min to reincarnate. They were a match made in heaven. I am still waiting to see the sweet love. Later, I made a few requests to keep Zhao Min in mind, and I thought it would be okay if I couldn't succeed. But I don't quite understand why Zhang Wuji would match up his cousin and others who admire him. One is that Zhang Wuji only approved it after Yang Buhui expressed his love for Yin Liting, which shows Zhang Wuji's approach to this kind of thing. Secondly, Wang Yuyan was not with Duan Yu in the end of Tianlong. Just a little humble opinion [laughing awkwardly][laughing awkwardly]

This is probably the best book about Zhang Wuji's time travel in Tomato. Whether it's plot, character setting, or story background, there's not much difference, and the author works very hard. Four chapters in one day is really enjoyable. I really don't understand why the score is so low. Don't be disappointed, author. More and more people will give high scores. Come on.

It's a very good book. The character design of Zhang Wuji is very fitting. It's rare to read a martial arts fan without discomfort. I don't know why so few people read it. It may be because the plot is relatively mediocre, but I feel that Zhang Wuji, who is at full level, can handle everything with ease. I have read the latest chapter and I like it very much. Good luck to the author! !

The writing is really good, the plot and characters are very reasonable. I don't know why the score is so low. Don't be misled. It's really good to watch and worth watching. And four or five chapters a day, a large amount of food

The writing is quite good, the characters are quite consistent, and the rhythm is quite tight. In one sentence, Zhang Wuji, as Murong Fu, walked away from Xu Zhu's script.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, this book is quite Jin Yong-like in terms of writing style and description of fighting scenes. The writing is mixed with clear text, and the reading is not jerky. It makes people have the urge to keep reading. There are no cheats in the book, only ultimate character interaction. It not only retains Zhang Wuji's character, but also introduces conflicts one after another as Zhang Wuji solves Murong Fu's troubles. At the same time, it can compare the settings of the two books, which is amazing!

I think this book deserves a 9.7 Rating. This is not a simple fan novel, it contains very grand scenes and a lot of martial arts preparations, and the battles between masters from all walks of life are very exciting. It can be seen that the author indeed contributed a lot of brain cells. The writing is so good. As a fan of Zhang Wuji's mother, I really love the author. The male advocate is Wuji, the male is second Zhou Shen. [Staring] Because most of the time I listen to books, and Zhou Shen has appeared too many times, haha

Brother Tianlong did not have Wudang, Zhang was not born yet, others can

It's very beautiful, the writing is very good, and the creativity is also very good. It makes me want to die. We were watching the Shaolin Temple battle on TV. I wish Murong Fu would join forces with Qiao Feng! It's a dream come true

@, I gave it four stars, but I feel like it still needs a female protagonist. I also read some of everyone's comments and it is indeed good for Wang Yuyan to become the heroine. After all, Wang Yuyan herself likes her cousin, Zhang Wuji's version of Murong Fu. It will only make Wang Yuyan like it more. I can only say that Zhang Wuji can understand the matchup between him and Duan Yu. I hope the author will add some emotional lines with Wang Yuyan later, because it would be a bit abrupt if Zhao Min also enters the soul. And although in Yitian, Zhang Wuji is with Zhao Min, but the woman Zhang Wuji comes to contact is very Many, they are all considered to be liked. Zhao Min gave up a lot of things in order to be with him, which gave him a great sense of security. Giving up Zhou Zhiruo and others is actually related to Zhang Wuji's childhood experience. He was afraid of being cheated by women. In his heart, Zhang Wuji may still lack that sense of security in terms of relationships. Wang Yuyan can also make up for this. I hope the author will greatly increase the relationship between Wang Yuyan and Zhang Wuji and make Zhang Wuji fall in love with Wang Yuyan. In fact, if Wang Yuyan is put into "The Legend of Heaven and the Dragon Slayer" and has enough contact with Zhang Wuji, Zhang Wuji himself will also fall in love with a woman like Wang Yuyan.

After reading more than 150 chapters, I feel that the writing is very good and the characters are very realistic. It is rare to see such a well-written rebirth martial arts fan. I just don't like the character Zhang Wuji. It's so frustrating. It would be better if it was Jet Li's version of Zhang Wuji.

The writing is very good, and there is no surprise at all. Zhang Wuji only has Zhao Min in his heart, and he has no ambiguity with other women. There is no OOC, and the plot is very enjoyable and smooth.

Imitation of antiquity does not mean that the author should also learn the dross of ancient novels [awkward laugh]

The language is concise and smooth, with the style of Jin Daxia, the plot is twists and turns, fascinating, the characters are vivid and vivid, it is a good time-travel novel

When I read the Dali chapter, the author really took care of it. He thought about the readers' frustrations or regrets after reading the original work, and gave a reasonable ending. The author has thought through the character of each original character, and his behavior is very logical. It is not a little bit better than the few time-travel martial arts books I have read before. But for some reason, the score is too low. I personally feel that it is definitely worth 9 points or more. Come on, author!

I've read a few chapters and it's quite to my liking. It's not bad. Come on, author, don't make it unfinished [Like]

The writing style is very good. I should say that among the Jin Yong fans I have read, I have more of Jin Yong's martial arts temperament.

After reading some passages, the writing is smooth. It has great learning significance, and I hope that after the author finishes this book, he can continue to create in another direction, but the rating is too low.

After reading more than 100 chapters, I feel that it is very reasonable. The character's personality, martial arts setting, and combat performance are all in line with Mr. Jin's original work.

It was quite enjoyable to watch. The author's writing is very good. Although he made some complaints, it still deserves five stars!

It's very interesting to watch. Highly recommended for those who like martial arts. The plot is compact and reasonable without any poisonous points. The protagonist's strength is high but not boring. Each node has a different and exciting plot.

First I watched Qiao Feng's Journey Through Linghu Chong, then I watched The Legend of Dragons, and now I'm watching this again. It's so interesting.

The book is very well written. Not only does the character design continue from the original book, but the plot development is also completely in line with the character logic and story progression. The most important thing is that the writing style is concise and has the feel of Mr. Jin Yong. It is not dramatic at all and is fascinating. Instead, it feels as if Zhang Wuji has really entered that world. Highly recommended! ! ! ! ! ! !

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