Beast Control Stage: Come If You Have a Dream

New to this? The world setting needs to be written in detail. I looked at it vaguely at the beginning, and I still need to expand it in my mind. The content of the class is quite detailed, and I feel like the author is trying to teach me, a layman, how to control beasts [laughing and crying] There are also some unnecessary supporting roles. For example, I personally dislike the swordsman who is the important male supporting actor? The scene where the friends booed her when she came out showed no respect for the heroine at all, "Hey, our eldest young master is going to team up with a girl, come on, take it down." I personally don't like comments like this. I would venture to ask, is the author male or female? If you are a woman, I can still tolerate it (because my tolerance for women is much higher than that of men [laughing and crying]) And the appearance of the real daughter and the fake intern was really frowning after watching it. According to the setting, there is only one training center in each city, and it is also a guide for gold card reservations. I didn't expect it to be of this level [laughing and crying], and later I found out that it was the real daughter who came to play [laughing and crying] Now the important supporting roles: the eldest lady of the Tianlong people who pretends to be cold but is really gentle, the dazed and reckless 👻 the little daughter, the sword cultivator in front? A real daughter and a fake intern are roughly equal to coaches? All wealthy families. The protagonist, um, seems to be smart? Looking forward to Fu Tao's heavenly voice and the introduction of Ibrahimovic. Well, I like the name Fu Tao [laughs] Confirmed, the author should be a male, because there are many points that only women can pay attention to. For example, both pet beasts are female, but they are not called the boss and the sister is called the eldest brother. Many of the characters are very realistic, without any flashy descriptions, and the character descriptions are very one-sided. But the battle scenes are quite interesting and awesome.

Zhu Bo, Zhu Bo, are there really no manuscripts saved? This is the kind of story about beast control. You have to stick to it, Zhu Bo. Don't let the urban harem life cultivator occupy the beast control market.

Anchor, anchor, can you give us a show? Publish 200 chapters in one day, scare us to death [Sending Hearts]

Come on, keep watching more

Come on, the interaction between the protagonist and his parents is very warm! !

So far, I feel pretty good after reading these seventy chapters. At least there are no plots that are too specific or malicious. Overall, I feel that it makes sense, but there are a lot of typos in the front [Chigua] Let me talk about my opinion first. If you are not particularly sensitive to emotions or some small issues, then it is basically considered a good work. If you focus on combat power, it may not be considered a good work, because the starting value of the spirit beast's spiritual power is far from that of other books, which can easily reach millions. Also, the level of the beast master does not seem to be very important in this society. Except for the secret realm, I don't seem to see anything else. As a daily novel, this is really not too important in reality. Then, it is quite normal for a spiritual beast to go through several transition stages. As it evolves, its body shape will also change. It won't feel ridiculous to evolve to the fighting beast stage in a lifetime, unless you suppress it and don't evolve or just evolve in one stage. As for the description of spirit beasts, it feels like a trade-off between Pokémon and real creatures. For example, Ika is known to be based on Eevee, and the appearance of the hidden spirit is more like a combination of Pokémon's dream monster and shadow doll. In terms of interaction, it doesn't feel like there's too much. Of course, it's not the kind of silly interaction. It just gives people a sense of daily life, not too much, not too much, like touching the cat and teasing the dog normally when you get home.

Please give me lots of likes and reminders for updates. The editor is a kind-hearted person. Basically, he will respond to comments when he sees them, and he is not jealous, so if you are dissatisfied, you can just say it directly.

It looks great, good luck to the author!